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The Coven
05:45:08 Cal
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I love it when they end up with that heterochromia eye
Z,Nugget
04:29:39 ZN(Zombie nugget)
Proud of this lady but have no idea who I’m gonna send her to next RO

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Sashimi Stables
04:25:05 Sash
The brindle *0* she's beautiful, Eve
Golden Crest
04:00:12 | Eve
Omg you’re gorgeous! -HEE Click-
Vesper
03:55:42 
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I love her so much. She MIGHT have been an accident but shes so pretty.
Tiluu
03:48:32 Honey
Hey Tosk! Sorry, I disappeared for a bit xD
Wacka do
03:43:18 DavidKing
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Finally
Wacka do
03:41:52 DavidKing
Is this normal?
Wacka do
03:38:51 DavidKing
This boy ONLY gives fillies!

What the heck ! XD

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Equile
03:18:15 Tosk's RID
hey Honey :D
TheLandOfFishAndFish
03:09:40 Fish
Thanks!
Lunoa
03:07:53 Honey
Should be 3rd week of July
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:54:57 Fish
When is the capture party?
Anhart stables
02:46:51 Aki
Also Cal congrats!!
Anhart stables
02:46:06 Aki
I’ve caught 2 brindles in 2 days and bred 1 in that time, what on earth is happening
The Coven
02:38:57 Cal
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Um so my long thought out match was a flop but when I impulsively throw two random horses together I get this? Hm.. I see I need to let my impulsive behaviors lead me more often..
Alpine Acres
02:27:20 Lily
are arenas worth buying?
Golden Heart
02:13:55 Gold
Art Check?
Gwyllgi
01:49:04 
Well what an interesting fewspot
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Siren Sound Estates
01:44:11 S҉ Sem
Sneaky, Pheezy

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The Coven
05:45:08 Cal
-HEE Click-
I love it when they end up with that heterochromia eye
Z,Nugget
04:29:39 ZN(Zombie nugget)
Proud of this lady but have no idea who I’m gonna send her to next RO

-HEE Click-
Sashimi Stables
04:25:05 Sash
The brindle *0* she's beautiful, Eve
Golden Crest
04:00:12 | Eve
Omg you’re gorgeous! -HEE Click-
Vesper
03:55:42 
-HEE Click-

I love her so much. She MIGHT have been an accident but shes so pretty.
Tiluu
03:48:32 Honey
Hey Tosk! Sorry, I disappeared for a bit xD
Wacka do
03:43:18 DavidKing
-HEE Click-

Finally
Wacka do
03:41:52 DavidKing
Is this normal?
Wacka do
03:38:51 DavidKing
This boy ONLY gives fillies!

What the heck ! XD

-HEE Click-
Equile
03:18:15 Tosk's RID
hey Honey :D
TheLandOfFishAndFish
03:09:40 Fish
Thanks!
Lunoa
03:07:53 Honey
Should be 3rd week of July
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:54:57 Fish
When is the capture party?
Anhart stables
02:46:51 Aki
Also Cal congrats!!
Anhart stables
02:46:06 Aki
I’ve caught 2 brindles in 2 days and bred 1 in that time, what on earth is happening
The Coven
02:38:57 Cal
-HEE Click-
Um so my long thought out match was a flop but when I impulsively throw two random horses together I get this? Hm.. I see I need to let my impulsive behaviors lead me more often..
Alpine Acres
02:27:20 Lily
are arenas worth buying?
Golden Heart
02:13:55 Gold
Art Check?
Gwyllgi
01:49:04 
Well what an interesting fewspot
-HEE Click-
Siren Sound Estates
01:44:11 S҉ Sem
Sneaky, Pheezy

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The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2024 06:19 PM


Circle F Stables
 
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posted twice on accident

Edited at December 4, 2024 06:20 PM by Circle F Stables
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2025 07:03 AM


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Circle F Stables said:
any tips? my first time adding wings to anything and not amazing with manes and tails but getting there!


I'd say make sure that the wings are rooted closer to/in the shoulder, for anatomy!! Looks gorgeous!

Edited at January 24, 2025 07:04 AM by WeepingEye'sManor
The Official Art Critique Forum January 26, 2025 02:54 PM


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looking for some critique :D
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The Official Art Critique Forum January 26, 2025 02:57 PM


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Circle F Stables said:
any tips? my first time adding wings to anything and not amazing with manes and tails but getting there!


This is so cute!! I'd recommend erasing the part of the mane that goes over the wings, so that they look a bit more even <3
The Official Art Critique Forum January 26, 2025 03:12 PM


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Dash and Duchess said:
looking for some critique :D
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Just initial thoughts, the horse seems almost sort of dull. Technically yes the horse is in shadow but it's almost hard to see. I would recommend upping the contrast and brightness of the background and adjust the horse accordingly. You could also darken the foreground (Multiple layer, large dark green airbrush) to draw more attention to the horse. Part of the dullness I think is also the lack of color on the horse's body aside from the yellow highlights. Don't be afraid to add shadows using dark green/brown even though the horse's base coat is black/grey. Almost all black fur has either a dark blue or dark red (brown) undertone which would help make the horse look more natural.
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I absolutely love the texture and transluscency of the fabric!! I would just say to be careful about stark white outlines, particularly around the underside of the horse. I understand that you're trying to make the horse stand out a bit more but it just feels unnatural. To achieve a similar effect, I would add a new layer behind the horse, set it to Hard Light, and use an airbursh to create a soft gold outline around the lit parts of the horse, adjust layer transparency and blurring as needed.
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The hair is completely gorgeous. I just have a lil question about lighting. Looking at the section of hair in between the horse's back legs, it is highlighted once it emerges from behind the farther back leg. However, this highlight is not carried over to the horse's leg or underbelly. I think it's up to you if that area is highlighted or not but consistency is important ;D
Last thing about lighting is that the horse's face has some very strong highlights despite being on the complete opposite side of the light source. Overall, I love the definition of the musculature and the piece as a whole is very very lovely <3

Edited at January 26, 2025 03:12 PM by Gem

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