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Centura stable
11:42:45 Centura
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I love this mare
Black Raven TBs
11:38:27 
ppl setting off fireworks
Rose Trails Barn
11:38:18 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh 🥹
Black Raven TBs
11:37:54 
bbl going to put them in my barn
Rose Trails Barn
11:37:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
How?
Black Raven TBs
11:37:19 
my horses are freaking out
Centura stable
10:54:53 Centura
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what tack would suit her?
Centura stable
10:51:56 Centura
arctic cove
you to
Rose Trails Barn
10:50:38 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Doing fireworks but I wanted to sleep T-T
Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Happy 4th of July, and 5th of July, Centura
Rose Trails Barn
10:46:59 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats funny
Centura stable
10:44:46 Centura
I think you guys are a day behind me, it's the 5th for me. So strange having everyone talk about the 4th of July lol
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:42 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th boomer
Lighting Estates
10:42:23 BOOOMER?
Happy 4th of July gng \(^o^)/
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:10 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Can someone like.. Help me make a brand idea for my Arabians?
Rose Trails Barn
10:41:16 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
So pretty
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:35 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I'mma work on my Arabian eee/ppp breeding to get on the leaderboard
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:02 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh! Yippieee!!
Glacier Bay Farms
10:39:52 Arctic Cove Katz
I will start on your art tomorrow afternoon
Rose Trails Barn
10:37:36 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Ok.

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Centura stable
11:42:45 Centura
-HEE Click-
I love this mare
Black Raven TBs
11:38:27 
ppl setting off fireworks
Rose Trails Barn
11:38:18 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh 🥹
Black Raven TBs
11:37:54 
bbl going to put them in my barn
Rose Trails Barn
11:37:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
How?
Black Raven TBs
11:37:19 
my horses are freaking out
Centura stable
10:54:53 Centura
-HEE Click-
what tack would suit her?
Centura stable
10:51:56 Centura
arctic cove
you to
Rose Trails Barn
10:50:38 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Doing fireworks but I wanted to sleep T-T
Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Happy 4th of July, and 5th of July, Centura
Rose Trails Barn
10:46:59 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats funny
Centura stable
10:44:46 Centura
I think you guys are a day behind me, it's the 5th for me. So strange having everyone talk about the 4th of July lol
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:42 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th boomer
Lighting Estates
10:42:23 BOOOMER?
Happy 4th of July gng \(^o^)/
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:10 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Can someone like.. Help me make a brand idea for my Arabians?
Rose Trails Barn
10:41:16 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
So pretty
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:35 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I'mma work on my Arabian eee/ppp breeding to get on the leaderboard
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:02 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh! Yippieee!!
Glacier Bay Farms
10:39:52 Arctic Cove Katz
I will start on your art tomorrow afternoon
Rose Trails Barn
10:37:36 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Ok.

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Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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So I've just started doing manips and by no means anywhere near perfect, but I thought I'd ask about my first completed piece. It's also a realllly big piece, so I'm already having trouble resizing it without losing most of the quality lol
Here it is:
https://postimg.cc/bZ9t7dLx
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:17 PM

The Golden Horse
 
Posts: 1809
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It's looks good! however i would proably thicken up the tail where it joins to the body. other than that it looks pretty good! I would ask somewhere between 15-50k for it
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:29 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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this is really well done for somebody new to art!
i have been doing manips on here for a while, so here is some advice <3
i feel like the horse is FAR too contrasted to the background, lower that contrast and up the brightness just a bit.
also if you understand how lighting works and if you are able to do that, it would be really nice to see a litthe bit of a lighter part around the horses back, because you can see in the background the sun shines through.
also it could be really nice to see some ripples in the reflection, you can do this by grabbing the smudge tool and setting it to high, and do some straight, curves or squiggly lines across the reflection to make it seem more realistic.
if you do all that, id say its probably worth 20-45k!
super well done, great job!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:36 PM

Former Stable
 
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Thank you so much guys!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:42 PM


Over the Garden Wall
 
Posts: 857
#944628
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The horse feels really flat/2D and I think adding a little rim lighting or some very soft highlights could really make a difference.
I'm borrowing CC Knabs' piece from the Official Critique thread for an example:
Critique for a Newbie! December 9, 2021 07:32 PM


Wolf Dancer
 
Posts: 4183
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Great job, Starting Bid should be around 10-15k and AB 30k-40k

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