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Angels angels
09:11:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh pretty boy
Arctic Dusk
09:05:43 AL - Hateful RIDs
-HEE Click-

The S is annoying but she is still cute
Snow Stable
08:53:45 Snow❆Gem
I have to go now, see-yas!
Avengers Assemble
08:52:18 
She is a beautiful horse!
Gem Queens Estate
08:45:40 Snow❆Gem
lol I won the first money hunt game. :)
Gem Queens Estate
08:40:44 Snow❆Gem
lol I'll try. ;P

Quest Level 5
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Win at the mini-game Money Hunt.

Completed: 0/5
Reward: 2,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits 1Capture Pass
Gem Queens Estate
08:36:44 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Yeah, I could see they were busy and backed up. Three 60+ guys waited like us no problem, but a 65+ old lady had to tell them she didn't like that someone was served before them who ordered AFTER them. O.o Doesn't she know some food is quicker to make?
Angels angels
08:33:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Geez gem that is dumb
Talen
08:33:23 
Highway driving > City driving
Gem Queens Estate
08:32:39 Snow❆Gem
Yesterday my family went on a short trip and had a snack at McDs... we waited almost 20 minutes for 3 wraps and a lemonade. O.o
Gem Queens Estate
08:31:54 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Ack! Highway sounds safer and 10 minutes isn't bad.
Angels angels
08:28:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Do I want to stay om the interstate all the way home and sit in traffic from a wreck for 10 minutes or get off early onto the highway and go through the city where no one knows how to drive? .-.
Gem Queens Estate
08:28:18 Snow❆Gem
@angels

lol OK? ;P
Angels angels
08:26:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Shhhh Gem
It isn't xD we don't talk about what day it is
Gem Queens Estate
08:22:16 Snow❆Gem
How is it already the 23rd?! O.o RO feels like it was about a week ago. LMAO
Journey Acres
08:21:26 Journie
Looking for roleplay partners. I'm flexible overall, shoot me a pm if you might be interested!
Gemstone Stable
08:15:24 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Morning! :)
Mythological
08:12:12 Crowley
Hey Ana
Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel

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Angels angels
09:11:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh pretty boy
Arctic Dusk
09:05:43 AL - Hateful RIDs
-HEE Click-

The S is annoying but she is still cute
Snow Stable
08:53:45 Snow❆Gem
I have to go now, see-yas!
Avengers Assemble
08:52:18 
She is a beautiful horse!
Gem Queens Estate
08:45:40 Snow❆Gem
lol I won the first money hunt game. :)
Gem Queens Estate
08:40:44 Snow❆Gem
lol I'll try. ;P

Quest Level 5
Gamer
Win at the mini-game Money Hunt.

Completed: 0/5
Reward: 2,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits 1Capture Pass
Gem Queens Estate
08:36:44 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Yeah, I could see they were busy and backed up. Three 60+ guys waited like us no problem, but a 65+ old lady had to tell them she didn't like that someone was served before them who ordered AFTER them. O.o Doesn't she know some food is quicker to make?
Angels angels
08:33:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Geez gem that is dumb
Talen
08:33:23 
Highway driving > City driving
Gem Queens Estate
08:32:39 Snow❆Gem
Yesterday my family went on a short trip and had a snack at McDs... we waited almost 20 minutes for 3 wraps and a lemonade. O.o
Gem Queens Estate
08:31:54 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Ack! Highway sounds safer and 10 minutes isn't bad.
Angels angels
08:28:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Do I want to stay om the interstate all the way home and sit in traffic from a wreck for 10 minutes or get off early onto the highway and go through the city where no one knows how to drive? .-.
Gem Queens Estate
08:28:18 Snow❆Gem
@angels

lol OK? ;P
Angels angels
08:26:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Shhhh Gem
It isn't xD we don't talk about what day it is
Gem Queens Estate
08:22:16 Snow❆Gem
How is it already the 23rd?! O.o RO feels like it was about a week ago. LMAO
Journey Acres
08:21:26 Journie
Looking for roleplay partners. I'm flexible overall, shoot me a pm if you might be interested!
Gemstone Stable
08:15:24 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Morning! :)
Mythological
08:12:12 Crowley
Hey Ana
Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel

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Help? May 24, 2024 11:59 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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After almost 6 months of drowning under the load of school, work, and animals I finally have had some time to pick up the ole art pen. I'm SO rusty and I feel like these look odd or are missing something but I cannot put my finger on what I did wrong. I would love to get some tips or ideas about what looks funky.
Thanks loads~
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This one was a rider removal.. it was not fun
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Edited at May 25, 2024 08:40 AM by Pegasus Lane
Help? May 25, 2024 12:09 AM


Caprina Springs
 
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i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
EDIT
i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them

Edited at May 25, 2024 12:11 AM by Caprina Springs
Help? May 25, 2024 08:43 AM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Caprina Springs said:
i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
EDIT
i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them


Omg thank you!!
Images have been updated on the first post if anyone else has criticism :) Links are clicky so you can really see all the details ❤
Help? May 25, 2024 08:00 PM


Angels angels
 
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The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!

Edited at May 25, 2024 08:01 PM by Angels angels
Help? May 25, 2024 08:10 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Angels angels said:
The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!


That's exactly what I was looking for, thank you! <3
Help? May 26, 2024 03:41 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Alrighty, here are the current pieces. Thank you both for the advice! If there's any nit-picking to be done about anything else please don't be afraid to offend me :) It's quite hard to do lol
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Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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Wow! they look awesome with those little edits! your art is stunning!
Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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double post erg

Edited at May 30, 2024 08:09 PM by Dash and Duchess

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