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Silent Oak Ridge
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Pleasantly surprised!
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Ravenwood Farm
04:17:05 
Ooo nice colt! I'm gonna be eyeing that one when it's time for wk7s, maybe he matches one of my girls👀
Aurora's Fields
04:07:12 Jenifael
Thank you! I'm very happy about this one! It's an unexpected WWW too
Sunfeather
04:05:55 SF
Very nice week four on that one, Aurora :D
Armageddon
04:01:57 Arm
Ooooh 👀
Aurora's Fields
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Angel Haven
04:00:13 
Oh, okay
Bug in a Rug
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angel
no, she's PrlPrl. Pearl is recessive, so prl mean they do have it
Angel Haven
03:59:13 
This girl pared with the right stallion could have an Apricot yes?
Armageddon
03:58:21 Arm
Grimm
Nice!
Wicca Wilds
03:58:01 Grimm(us)
ToTo and 3 up week 3 <-<
Armageddon
03:57:31 Arm
Cute Grimm.
Grimmoire Gardens
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Myth
Lookie
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Armageddon
03:56:55 Arm
Sending her to a friend for training lol
KPH Equestrian
03:56:09 Rapcoon | Jester
ooh ToTo *-*
KPH Equestrian
03:56:02 Rapcoon | Jester
omg mythy x'D
Armageddon
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Armageddon
03:54:44 Arm
My SDs aren't trained...
KPH Equestrian
03:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester
oop mythy lol. that's ok, my SD jumpers are a week behind, so I too am on wk3s there 😞

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Silent Oak Ridge
04:26:54 Silent/Si
Pleasantly surprised!
-HEE Click-
Ravenwood Farm
04:17:05 
Ooo nice colt! I'm gonna be eyeing that one when it's time for wk7s, maybe he matches one of my girls👀
Aurora's Fields
04:07:12 Jenifael
Thank you! I'm very happy about this one! It's an unexpected WWW too
Sunfeather
04:05:55 SF
Very nice week four on that one, Aurora :D
Armageddon
04:01:57 Arm
Ooooh 👀
Aurora's Fields
04:01:19 Jenifael
-HEE Click-

Hell yeah
Angel Haven
04:00:13 
Oh, okay
Bug in a Rug
03:59:53 Bug | Flea | KPH
angel
no, she's PrlPrl. Pearl is recessive, so prl mean they do have it
Angel Haven
03:59:13 
This girl pared with the right stallion could have an Apricot yes?
Armageddon
03:58:21 Arm
Grimm
Nice!
Wicca Wilds
03:58:01 Grimm(us)
ToTo and 3 up week 3 <-<
Armageddon
03:57:31 Arm
Cute Grimm.
Grimmoire Gardens
03:57:00 Grimm(us)
Myth
Lookie
-HEE Click-
Armageddon
03:56:55 Arm
Sending her to a friend for training lol
KPH Equestrian
03:56:09 Rapcoon | Jester
ooh ToTo *-*
KPH Equestrian
03:56:02 Rapcoon | Jester
omg mythy x'D
Armageddon
03:55:27 Arm
-HEE Click-
Armageddon
03:54:44 Arm
My SDs aren't trained...
KPH Equestrian
03:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester
oop mythy lol. that's ok, my SD jumpers are a week behind, so I too am on wk3s there 😞

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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


Clover Realm
 
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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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