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Dash and Duchess
08:04:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, XD she'll be under 24/7 surveillance lol
Rising Stars Stable
08:03:36 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
*O* You better lock that filly up real tight
Dash and Duchess
08:03:28 DD | ~Squizard~
And she matches karamazov 👀
Dash and Duchess
08:03:06 DD | ~Squizard~
Al, -HEE Click-
Broke my record of most up wk 7!
ArcticLights
08:01:58 Ceci / (Call me) AL
DD, no?
Rubygem
08:01:40 
never mind ill just realse my filly i dont like she is just bland
Dash and Duchess
08:01:37 DD | ~Squizard~
Al, did you see Symbel's 7 👀
Eyrie of the Stars
07:59:30 Eyrie
She has a WWW full brother, but yeah that training's probably going to be super uneven, just will be interesting to watch.
Rubygem
07:58:56 
-HEE Click-

should i keep or realse becuase i need stable space to breed??
Two Trees Warmbloods
07:58:10 Willow ~ WB Breeder
Ruby
Have fun
Rubygem
07:57:46 
i am going to breed to see what i get
Willow Grove
07:57:34 Stalker of Chat
First time seeing that outside of geldings lol
Two Trees Warmbloods
07:57:24 Willow ~ WB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Good Girl!!!
4 up
ArcticLights
07:56:50 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I have also had a w3 EEE before, she was horrible though
Two Trees Warmbloods
07:56:40 Willow ~ WB Breeder
Willow
I've had it happen before once or twice
Rubygem
07:56:32 
i changed my color lol
Willow Grove
07:56:11 Stalker of Chat
Eyrie
How in the heck
Thats possible??
Rubygem
07:51:47 
beautiful warmblood mirth
Rubygem
07:51:22 
ok thanks
Rivendell Horses
07:51:00 Mirth
Oh lol
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Dash and Duchess
08:04:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, XD she'll be under 24/7 surveillance lol
Rising Stars Stable
08:03:36 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
*O* You better lock that filly up real tight
Dash and Duchess
08:03:28 DD | ~Squizard~
And she matches karamazov 👀
Dash and Duchess
08:03:06 DD | ~Squizard~
Al, -HEE Click-
Broke my record of most up wk 7!
ArcticLights
08:01:58 Ceci / (Call me) AL
DD, no?
Rubygem
08:01:40 
never mind ill just realse my filly i dont like she is just bland
Dash and Duchess
08:01:37 DD | ~Squizard~
Al, did you see Symbel's 7 👀
Eyrie of the Stars
07:59:30 Eyrie
She has a WWW full brother, but yeah that training's probably going to be super uneven, just will be interesting to watch.
Rubygem
07:58:56 
-HEE Click-

should i keep or realse becuase i need stable space to breed??
Two Trees Warmbloods
07:58:10 Willow ~ WB Breeder
Ruby
Have fun
Rubygem
07:57:46 
i am going to breed to see what i get
Willow Grove
07:57:34 Stalker of Chat
First time seeing that outside of geldings lol
Two Trees Warmbloods
07:57:24 Willow ~ WB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Good Girl!!!
4 up
ArcticLights
07:56:50 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I have also had a w3 EEE before, she was horrible though
Two Trees Warmbloods
07:56:40 Willow ~ WB Breeder
Willow
I've had it happen before once or twice
Rubygem
07:56:32 
i changed my color lol
Willow Grove
07:56:11 Stalker of Chat
Eyrie
How in the heck
Thats possible??
Rubygem
07:51:47 
beautiful warmblood mirth
Rubygem
07:51:22 
ok thanks
Rivendell Horses
07:51:00 Mirth
Oh lol
-HEE Click-

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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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