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Sweet Valley
05:03:32 Anna/Jewel
Pretty art, River!
Gilded Roses
05:01:35 River / Brody
What could I improve? it's still a work in progress, also eye tutorial? -Click-
Ranch Lands Training
05:01:16 Lilly/PON Addict
Potatoes - Both!
The QH would be ready to show tonight
Driftwood Farms
04:59:20 
Wild_Potatoes I think the first one would make a good show gelding
Emerald Estate
04:53:52 Varaa
What are the rusty bit pieces for?
Wild_Potatoes
04:48:46 
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Which one would be the better show gelding?
Mochi~
04:48:12 
Anyone have any matches for RO that they're excited about?
Ranch Lands Training
04:47:14 Lilly/PON Addict
Ugh, 45 more swaths to go and I have an hour and a half to finish
Versailles
04:04:11 Versa
Thank you DD <3
Dash and Duchess
03:59:04 DD | ~Squizard~
That's amazing Versa!!
Versailles
03:58:30 Versa
Thank you Ana <3
Vancouver
03:58:19 Ana / Van
That sounds amazing Versa! Congrats <3
Versailles
03:57:18 Versa
I don't want to name the zoo for privacy reasons, but they're very well known for their contributions to red pandas! :)
Chromatic
03:56:31 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Oh my goodness, red pandas are so cute <3
Versailles
03:54:08 Versa
I'll be sure to post lots of pictures. I can't promise I'll immediately be around the red pandas while they get to know me and my work, but the zoo has lots of cute stuff elsewhere lol
Versailles
03:51:09 Versa
Thank you <3
Chromatic
03:48:07 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
That's awesome Versa, sounds very exciting! :D
FirstLightFarms
03:47:52 puck
Versa that's amazing! Huge congrats <3
Versailles
03:46:38 Versa
Thank you for taking a moment to celebrate with me, guys <3 I've worked so hard. It was all worth it
Fantasy Horses
03:45:53 Fantasy | Fanta
Versa
Oh, that's so awesome! I'm so happy for you :D

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Sweet Valley
05:03:32 Anna/Jewel
Pretty art, River!
Gilded Roses
05:01:35 River / Brody
What could I improve? it's still a work in progress, also eye tutorial? -Click-
Ranch Lands Training
05:01:16 Lilly/PON Addict
Potatoes - Both!
The QH would be ready to show tonight
Driftwood Farms
04:59:20 
Wild_Potatoes I think the first one would make a good show gelding
Emerald Estate
04:53:52 Varaa
What are the rusty bit pieces for?
Wild_Potatoes
04:48:46 
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Which one would be the better show gelding?
Mochi~
04:48:12 
Anyone have any matches for RO that they're excited about?
Ranch Lands Training
04:47:14 Lilly/PON Addict
Ugh, 45 more swaths to go and I have an hour and a half to finish
Versailles
04:04:11 Versa
Thank you DD <3
Dash and Duchess
03:59:04 DD | ~Squizard~
That's amazing Versa!!
Versailles
03:58:30 Versa
Thank you Ana <3
Vancouver
03:58:19 Ana / Van
That sounds amazing Versa! Congrats <3
Versailles
03:57:18 Versa
I don't want to name the zoo for privacy reasons, but they're very well known for their contributions to red pandas! :)
Chromatic
03:56:31 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Oh my goodness, red pandas are so cute <3
Versailles
03:54:08 Versa
I'll be sure to post lots of pictures. I can't promise I'll immediately be around the red pandas while they get to know me and my work, but the zoo has lots of cute stuff elsewhere lol
Versailles
03:51:09 Versa
Thank you <3
Chromatic
03:48:07 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
That's awesome Versa, sounds very exciting! :D
FirstLightFarms
03:47:52 puck
Versa that's amazing! Huge congrats <3
Versailles
03:46:38 Versa
Thank you for taking a moment to celebrate with me, guys <3 I've worked so hard. It was all worth it
Fantasy Horses
03:45:53 Fantasy | Fanta
Versa
Oh, that's so awesome! I'm so happy for you :D

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Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 22, 2024 05:06 PM


Bignus Bognus
 
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It's hard to believe it's been 8 months since I did my first manip. It's an addiction, I swear. I've finally gotten to a point where I'm pretty happy with my last two pieces which means it's time to let other people rip them apart XD
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Seriously though, please do give some critique and be as nitpicky as possible! I want to improve >:)
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Both images are clicky so you can zoom in on the details.. canvas size is very variable since I just go with whatever the background is :P
Edit: Looks like there will be a CCC (mini-rumble) coming up! I would love some input on what tier to sign up for :>

Edited at October 22, 2024 05:48 PM by Bignus Bognus
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 22, 2024 05:11 PM


Bignus Bognus
 
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Also - what kind of art do you want to see from me next? I would love some ideas <3
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 23, 2024 01:07 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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I could barely find anything XD but the way the hair lays especially on the freisan, looks a little funky when it hits the ground, maybe work on the flow on the ground?
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 24, 2024 12:04 PM


Bignus Bognus
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
I could barely find anything XD but the way the hair lays especially on the freisan, looks a little funky when it hits the ground, maybe work on the flow on the ground?


Thank you!! I see what you mean... I think I was too focused on trying to get it all in frame lol. I'll try looking at some references for next time <3
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 24, 2024 12:13 PM


Foggy Forest Stables
 
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For rumble, T1 gets pretty competitive, so I would say you would 100% rock T2! I do agree with what dash said above. You can always add some multiply layers and go with the flow of the hair strands to imitate a fold in the tail! Everything else looks pretty damn good! Same with the feathers on the feet! :D I still struggle with that personally. 🤣
But everything else is absolutely stunning! Your lighting is gorgeous, your soft body prep is amazing! I love!!
Edit to add, your grounding work is also absolutely stunning. 😍 I am obsessed!

Edited at October 24, 2024 12:15 PM by Foggy Forest Stables
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 24, 2024 12:35 PM


Bignus Bognus
 
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Foggy Forest Stables said:
For rumble, T1 gets pretty competitive, so I would say you would 100% rock T2! I do agree with what dash said above. You can always add some multiply layers and go with the flow of the hair strands to imitate a fold in the tail! Everything else looks pretty damn good! Same with the feathers on the feet! :D I still struggle with that personally. 🤣
But everything else is absolutely stunning! Your lighting is gorgeous, your soft body prep is amazing! I love!!
Edit to add, your grounding work is also absolutely stunning. 😍 I am obsessed!


Thank you Foggy 🥺 those are my favourite parts to do so I'm glad that is coming through <333
Will do for T2!! And yeah, definitely gonna work on hair. Something super long for my next WIP perhaps 👀
Seeking Critique, Please! (+tier placement?) October 27, 2024 07:05 PM


Bignus Bognus
 
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Okay, short update... I tried adjusting the tail & feathers on the friesian just with the mesh transform tool and some multiply layers like Foggy suggested (plus fiddled with the shadows from the leaves)... I know it's still not perfect but it is an improvement, no? :D
I think I've got the "I wanna keep it" outta me so it'll be up for auction shortly <3

Edited at October 27, 2024 07:06 PM by Bignus Bognus

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