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Thornwood Manor

12:24:37 Caal

Amb, omg me too 😭

Poppy Land

12:21:47 Poppy

-HEE Click-

He dodged everything possible...

NeverGonnaTrivYouUp

12:19:07 The Mane Brains

We didnt even get any fireworks for the first this year it was to wet and I am kinda sad about it

Ambrosia

12:18:37 Amb

Eury,
As a night shift dispatcher I'm saying the same. I'm over it already

Blue Diamond

12:16:17 Bluey/PM abt books^^

void
Literally

The Old Gods

12:14:57 Void Malign

Fuck's sake. It's midnight. Stop with the fireworks.

Cinquemani

12:09:51 Emani

-HEE Click-

Hehe

Obsidian Meadows

12:03:56 Sidi

Gorgeous girl, Shady

Jernigan Stables

11:55:42

Ouhh she's so pretty!

Shady Tree Farm

11:55:08 Shady

Miss fancy girl
-HEE Click-

Snitches' Stitches

11:53:12 Snitch

2.5 barns through a major cull before capture day and this is the first time I’ve had under 900 horses in months🫠 I don’t think I ever want this many horses to go through again😭

7 Bar 6 Ranch

11:51:30 RRR (Jo)

I got him and a couple of EWE combo fillies on this account. I got a pretty shiny WWW WB girl on one of my side accounts *.*
-HEE Click-

Dash Warmbloods

11:45:06

I had mixed results this year.

The Joker

11:03:48 Ari <3

Awwe what a cutie!

Dash Warmbloods

11:02:34

399 yearlings trained.

Sylvan Lake Stables

10:51:19 Tano

Me too Dash

Dash Warmbloods

10:48:21

Wish one could change an entire barns training in one click

Birch Creek

10:45:52 Em

what a pretty filly Ven

Lismore Studs

10:38:59 River | TB's

-Click-

Lismore Studs

10:37:36 River | TB's

Ari
He's a sweetheart, when I was tacking him up he was just about asleep xD

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Thornwood Manor

12:24:37 Caal

Amb, omg me too 😭

Poppy Land

12:21:47 Poppy

-HEE Click-

He dodged everything possible...

NeverGonnaTrivYouUp

12:19:07 The Mane Brains

We didnt even get any fireworks for the first this year it was to wet and I am kinda sad about it

Ambrosia

12:18:37 Amb

Eury,
As a night shift dispatcher I'm saying the same. I'm over it already

Blue Diamond

12:16:17 Bluey/PM abt books^^

void
Literally

The Old Gods

12:14:57 Void Malign

Fuck's sake. It's midnight. Stop with the fireworks.

Cinquemani

12:09:51 Emani

-HEE Click-

Hehe

Obsidian Meadows

12:03:56 Sidi

Gorgeous girl, Shady

Jernigan Stables

11:55:42

Ouhh she's so pretty!

Shady Tree Farm

11:55:08 Shady

Miss fancy girl
-HEE Click-

Snitches' Stitches

11:53:12 Snitch

2.5 barns through a major cull before capture day and this is the first time I’ve had under 900 horses in months🫠 I don’t think I ever want this many horses to go through again😭

7 Bar 6 Ranch

11:51:30 RRR (Jo)

I got him and a couple of EWE combo fillies on this account. I got a pretty shiny WWW WB girl on one of my side accounts *.*
-HEE Click-

Dash Warmbloods

11:45:06

I had mixed results this year.

The Joker

11:03:48 Ari <3

Awwe what a cutie!

Dash Warmbloods

11:02:34

399 yearlings trained.

Sylvan Lake Stables

10:51:19 Tano

Me too Dash

Dash Warmbloods

10:48:21

Wish one could change an entire barns training in one click

Birch Creek

10:45:52 Em

what a pretty filly Ven

Lismore Studs

10:38:59 River | TB's

-Click-

Lismore Studs

10:37:36 River | TB's

Ari
He's a sweetheart, when I was tacking him up he was just about asleep xD

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#106539
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2686
#106543
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1530
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#106698
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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! IÂ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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