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Dash and Duchess
09:14:44 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully it'll live up to expectations <3 this is the first time in years I'm actually home for my city's, so we'll see how long it tortures me lol
Heartsong Acres
09:08:59 Versa
DD,
Mortars are legal back in Tennessee so I'm sure my street is noisy too. But people are claiming this to be the biggest firework show in history so, I'm excited.
Dash and Duchess
09:07:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, have fun! I can only imagine how awful the traffic is, I just heard the fireworks show start down here since unfortunately it's at the park near my very in-the-city house lol
Heartsong Acres
09:07:24 Versa
Centura,
Record highs today in certain parts of the US. It has been horrible
Heartsong Acres
09:06:07 Versa
DD,
I guess we'll see. I'm currently perched with an excellent view of the memorial, waiting for the firework show. Getting absolutely poured on. We'll see how traffic is after
Centura stable
09:06:07 Centura
As an aussi, it's so strange watching you guys talk about heat, it's winter over here for me
Dash and Duchess
09:05:06 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully you'll be able to escape back there then xD
Heartsong Acres
09:03:55 Versa
DD,
Bleh. Yeah, though, I can't wait to get back to my air conditioned hotel hidey hole. I feel the hiding part. LOL
Dash and Duchess
09:02:43 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, it is, people push themselves way too hard, thankfully I've been holed up at home today haha
Clear Springs
09:02:27 Froggie
I came home from a long night of work in Florida, fell into bed in my south-facing bedroom because I had been up almost 26 hours, woke up in trouble. My air conditioner had quit while I was comatose and I couldn't even stand up out of the bed. Took 2 liters of IV fluid to get my temp down from 104. Of course, I was born well before Armstrong landed on the moon, so...
Ambrosia
09:02:08 Amb
-HEE Click-
Oh nice little surprise
Heartsong Acres
09:01:38 Versa
I'm thankful to be really tolerant. But I think it's partially because of the obscene amounts of water I drink lol
The Old Gods
09:01:03 Void Malign
Yeah, I gotta watch myself because I have bad heat tolerance and I'm on meds that make me more sensitive to the heat.
Stormsong Manor
09:00:21 Ven
Even athletes in great shape are at risk
Stormsong Manor
08:59:44 Ven
My uncle died at 21 running a marathon in NYC in over one hundred degree heat. He pushed himself too hard and ended up with heat stroke and full kidney failure before he passed away. Always hydrate and be careful of the heat
Heartsong Acres
08:58:24 Versa
DD,
Dehydration is a huge reason for heat ailments. Combined with ignoring your body saying "hey, please stop" is when people faint
Dash and Duchess
08:57:15 DD | ~Squizard~
*suck at hydrating on top of that
Dash and Duchess
08:56:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, oh definitely, it's pretty commonplace to drop during the summer here, but unfortunately I suck at hydrating lol
Heartbeat Haven
08:54:11 Versa
DD,
I'm pretty heat resistant, I've never had troubles. But having grown up in Colorado, I know to properly hydrate and sit if I feel even a little off. I see too many people here pushing themselves a little too hard and then facing consequences
The Old Gods
08:53:46 Void Malign
the thunder was pretty loud so the cats were hiding. Storm finally calmed down, so they're getting tasty cat food

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Dash and Duchess
09:14:44 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully it'll live up to expectations <3 this is the first time in years I'm actually home for my city's, so we'll see how long it tortures me lol
Heartsong Acres
09:08:59 Versa
DD,
Mortars are legal back in Tennessee so I'm sure my street is noisy too. But people are claiming this to be the biggest firework show in history so, I'm excited.
Dash and Duchess
09:07:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, have fun! I can only imagine how awful the traffic is, I just heard the fireworks show start down here since unfortunately it's at the park near my very in-the-city house lol
Heartsong Acres
09:07:24 Versa
Centura,
Record highs today in certain parts of the US. It has been horrible
Heartsong Acres
09:06:07 Versa
DD,
I guess we'll see. I'm currently perched with an excellent view of the memorial, waiting for the firework show. Getting absolutely poured on. We'll see how traffic is after
Centura stable
09:06:07 Centura
As an aussi, it's so strange watching you guys talk about heat, it's winter over here for me
Dash and Duchess
09:05:06 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully you'll be able to escape back there then xD
Heartsong Acres
09:03:55 Versa
DD,
Bleh. Yeah, though, I can't wait to get back to my air conditioned hotel hidey hole. I feel the hiding part. LOL
Dash and Duchess
09:02:43 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, it is, people push themselves way too hard, thankfully I've been holed up at home today haha
Clear Springs
09:02:27 Froggie
I came home from a long night of work in Florida, fell into bed in my south-facing bedroom because I had been up almost 26 hours, woke up in trouble. My air conditioner had quit while I was comatose and I couldn't even stand up out of the bed. Took 2 liters of IV fluid to get my temp down from 104. Of course, I was born well before Armstrong landed on the moon, so...
Ambrosia
09:02:08 Amb
-HEE Click-
Oh nice little surprise
Heartsong Acres
09:01:38 Versa
I'm thankful to be really tolerant. But I think it's partially because of the obscene amounts of water I drink lol
The Old Gods
09:01:03 Void Malign
Yeah, I gotta watch myself because I have bad heat tolerance and I'm on meds that make me more sensitive to the heat.
Stormsong Manor
09:00:21 Ven
Even athletes in great shape are at risk
Stormsong Manor
08:59:44 Ven
My uncle died at 21 running a marathon in NYC in over one hundred degree heat. He pushed himself too hard and ended up with heat stroke and full kidney failure before he passed away. Always hydrate and be careful of the heat
Heartsong Acres
08:58:24 Versa
DD,
Dehydration is a huge reason for heat ailments. Combined with ignoring your body saying "hey, please stop" is when people faint
Dash and Duchess
08:57:15 DD | ~Squizard~
*suck at hydrating on top of that
Dash and Duchess
08:56:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, oh definitely, it's pretty commonplace to drop during the summer here, but unfortunately I suck at hydrating lol
Heartbeat Haven
08:54:11 Versa
DD,
I'm pretty heat resistant, I've never had troubles. But having grown up in Colorado, I know to properly hydrate and sit if I feel even a little off. I see too many people here pushing themselves a little too hard and then facing consequences
The Old Gods
08:53:46 Void Malign
the thunder was pretty loud so the cats were hiding. Storm finally calmed down, so they're getting tasty cat food

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Art critique May 13, 2019 04:59 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I have not been doing art vervy long but I would love some help on how to make it better! Tear these pieces apart but please do this in a nice way and do not be rude.
https://postimg.cc/gallery/328v6n6nu/ ⬅ here are my examples

Edited at May 26, 2020 11:32 PM by Lambo Farms
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:26 PM

Former Stable
 
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Nice start, but your horses need to be way bigger. Maybe don't smudge the horse as much. Fix the lighting a bit. I see on one of the images you outlined the whole horse. Only outline a few sides of the horse where the sun is reflecting. Unless its really bright. Maybe fix the eyes a bit?
Other than that your onto a really nice start!
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:28 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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I use Ibis Paint X so, some pointers :P

Start out with a 500x500 blank piece. Choose your background to fit (you don't have to use the whole background, you can just make it bigger and use a certain piece)

Then, take your horse and import it into a totally new page. Work on it there, the colors, mane and tail, eyes, etc. Because you can see all the details that way.

When you get it how you like, make the background transparent and save as a PNG. Then import it onto your background picture, and play with the contrast/brightness until the horse looks like it belongs there, and don't forget the shadow!

Other pointers, make your horses a little bigger for the avatars so the background doesn't swallow the horse :3

I hope this helps!!
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:29 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Hollaway said:
Nice start, but your horses need to be way bigger. Maybe don't smudge the horse as much. Fix the lighting a bit. I see on one of the images you outlined the whole horse. Only outline a few sides of the horse where the sun is reflecting. Unless its really bright. Maybe fix the eyes a bit?
Other than that your onto a really nice start!


Thank you for your help!
Art critique May 13, 2019 05:30 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
I use Ibis Paint X so, some pointers :P

Start out with a 500x500 blank piece. Choose your background to fit (you don't have to use the whole background, you can just make it bigger and use a certain piece)

Then, take your horse and import it into a totally new page. Work on it there, the colors, mane and tail, eyes, etc. Because you can see all the details that way.

When you get it how you like, make the background transparent and save as a PNG. Then import it onto your background picture, and play with the contrast/brightness until the horse looks like it belongs there, and don't forget the shadow!

Other pointers, make your horses a little bigger for the avatars so the background doesn't swallow the horse :3

I hope this helps!!


Thank you! I will use all of your tips
Art critique May 14, 2019 06:58 AM


Angels angels
 
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I agree with Crystal
Thats what I do as well
And you may need to add some color to the horse to make the lighting match but not to much

One thing I would say for sure is you need to practice with shadows and lights, best thing to do is make a new layer as a clipping mask on the horse and color in black where the shadows should be then you can blur and smudge them to fit in and mess with the opacity until it fits in

Its all about practice ;) also of course you know you can always pm me if you have questions
Art critique May 14, 2019 07:01 AM


Angels angels
 
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Oh another thing once you pick your BG or horse stock whichever first you want to find the other that will fit together, such as if you find a horse stock first you want to find a BG with the same camera angle somewhat of the same light source direction and most important make sure there is a space in the BG the horse can be put that looks natural, such as a trail etc. And vise versa if you find the BG first
Art critique May 14, 2019 07:01 AM


Lambo Farms
 
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Angel's angels said:
I agree with Crystal
Thats what I do as well
And you may need to add some color to the horse to make the lighting match but not to much

One thing I would say for sure is you need to practice with shadows and lights, best thing to do is make a new layer as a clipping mask on the horse and color in black where the shadows should be then you can blur and smudge them to fit in and mess with the opacity until it fits in

Its all about practice ;) also of course you know you can always pm me if you have questions


thank you <3

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