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Ambrosia
12:28:46 Amb
Crying in the club ✊😔
Thornwood Manor
12:24:37 Caal
Amb, omg me too 😭
Poppy Land
12:21:47 Poppy
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He dodged everything possible...
NeverGonnaTrivYouUp
12:19:07 The Mane Brains
We didnt even get any fireworks for the first this year it was to wet and I am kinda sad about it
Ambrosia
12:18:37 Amb
Eury,
As a night shift dispatcher I'm saying the same. I'm over it already
Blue Diamond
12:16:17 Bluey/PM abt books^^
void
Literally
The Old Gods
12:14:57 Void Malign
Fuck's sake. It's midnight. Stop with the fireworks.
Cinquemani
12:09:51 Emani
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Hehe
Obsidian Meadows
12:03:56 Sidi
Gorgeous girl, Shady
Jernigan Stables
11:55:42 
Ouhh she's so pretty!
Shady Tree Farm
11:55:08 Shady
Miss fancy girl
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Snitches' Stitches
11:53:12 Snitch
2.5 barns through a major cull before capture day and this is the first time I’ve had under 900 horses in months🫠 I don’t think I ever want this many horses to go through again😭
7 Bar 6 Ranch
11:51:30 RRR (Jo)
I got him and a couple of EWE combo fillies on this account. I got a pretty shiny WWW WB girl on one of my side accounts *.*
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Dash Warmbloods
11:45:06 
I had mixed results this year.
The Joker
11:03:48 Ari <3
Awwe what a cutie!
Dash Warmbloods
11:02:34 
399 yearlings trained.
Sylvan Lake Stables
10:51:19 Tano
Me too Dash
Dash Warmbloods
10:48:21 
Wish one could change an entire barns training in one click
Birch Creek
10:45:52 Em
what a pretty filly Ven
Lismore Studs
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Ambrosia
12:28:46 Amb
Crying in the club ✊😔
Thornwood Manor
12:24:37 Caal
Amb, omg me too 😭
Poppy Land
12:21:47 Poppy
-HEE Click-

He dodged everything possible...
NeverGonnaTrivYouUp
12:19:07 The Mane Brains
We didnt even get any fireworks for the first this year it was to wet and I am kinda sad about it
Ambrosia
12:18:37 Amb
Eury,
As a night shift dispatcher I'm saying the same. I'm over it already
Blue Diamond
12:16:17 Bluey/PM abt books^^
void
Literally
The Old Gods
12:14:57 Void Malign
Fuck's sake. It's midnight. Stop with the fireworks.
Cinquemani
12:09:51 Emani
-HEE Click-

Hehe
Obsidian Meadows
12:03:56 Sidi
Gorgeous girl, Shady
Jernigan Stables
11:55:42 
Ouhh she's so pretty!
Shady Tree Farm
11:55:08 Shady
Miss fancy girl
-HEE Click-
Snitches' Stitches
11:53:12 Snitch
2.5 barns through a major cull before capture day and this is the first time I’ve had under 900 horses in months🫠 I don’t think I ever want this many horses to go through again😭
7 Bar 6 Ranch
11:51:30 RRR (Jo)
I got him and a couple of EWE combo fillies on this account. I got a pretty shiny WWW WB girl on one of my side accounts *.*
-HEE Click-
Dash Warmbloods
11:45:06 
I had mixed results this year.
The Joker
11:03:48 Ari <3
Awwe what a cutie!
Dash Warmbloods
11:02:34 
399 yearlings trained.
Sylvan Lake Stables
10:51:19 Tano
Me too Dash
Dash Warmbloods
10:48:21 
Wish one could change an entire barns training in one click
Birch Creek
10:45:52 Em
what a pretty filly Ven
Lismore Studs
10:38:59 River | TB's
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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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