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Equile
04:38:31 Tosk's RID
Oh wow, AL :o
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ArcticLights
04:34:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Nice Tosky!
Breadcrumbs
04:29:57 
Oh heck
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ArcticLights
04:26:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Cute mare
Amethyst Ranch
04:18:18 Echo <3
Good girl <3
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ArcticLights
04:02:26 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh dear, almost kill-script time
ArcticLights
03:59:54 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I dont waste coffee on him. Its not like it makes any difference
Greenheart Stables
03:50:59 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Al
Wished they didn't eat the money first, it scares the accountant and I only have so many coffees to chill him out lol
ArcticLights
03:42:04 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Worry not Green. You earn money
Greenheart Stables
03:36:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Yikes these rider fees 😭
Golden Crest
03:19:03 | Eve
Didn’t expect this quest foal to rate good but I will take that -HEE Click- <3
Kolibri
03:16:20 
Sem
He is gorgeous! Defo not jealous at all..
Pandemonium
02:54:46 Pan's RID Mess
Woohoo now I get 7 days off before starting my new (old) job!
Amoret
02:44:58 Aki <3
WEE w a map..that’s better -HEE Click-
Maco Stables
02:36:07 Maco
Wow, he is gorgeous!
Siren Sound Estates
01:51:35 S҉ Sem
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Damn, what a nice mix of DD and Sooty
Siren Sound Estates
01:51:01 S҉ Sem
Hi everyone
Looking Glass Stable
01:10:05 IA Glass 👋
Haha I'm glad you liked him, Blaze. Hope he does well for you! ♡
Unwanted Ones
01:02:45 
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Oh how pretty
Glacier Bay Cove
12:51:02 Arctic Katz
Congratulations, Starborn

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Equile
04:38:31 Tosk's RID
Oh wow, AL :o
-HEE Click-
ArcticLights
04:34:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Nice Tosky!
Breadcrumbs
04:29:57 
Oh heck
-HEE Click-
ArcticLights
04:26:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Cute mare
Amethyst Ranch
04:18:18 Echo <3
Good girl <3
-HEE Click-
ArcticLights
04:02:26 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh dear, almost kill-script time
ArcticLights
03:59:54 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I dont waste coffee on him. Its not like it makes any difference
Greenheart Stables
03:50:59 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Al
Wished they didn't eat the money first, it scares the accountant and I only have so many coffees to chill him out lol
ArcticLights
03:42:04 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Worry not Green. You earn money
Greenheart Stables
03:36:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Yikes these rider fees 😭
Golden Crest
03:19:03 | Eve
Didn’t expect this quest foal to rate good but I will take that -HEE Click- <3
Kolibri
03:16:20 
Sem
He is gorgeous! Defo not jealous at all..
Pandemonium
02:54:46 Pan's RID Mess
Woohoo now I get 7 days off before starting my new (old) job!
Amoret
02:44:58 Aki <3
WEE w a map..that’s better -HEE Click-
Maco Stables
02:36:07 Maco
Wow, he is gorgeous!
Siren Sound Estates
01:51:35 S҉ Sem
-HEE Click-

Damn, what a nice mix of DD and Sooty
Siren Sound Estates
01:51:01 S҉ Sem
Hi everyone
Looking Glass Stable
01:10:05 IA Glass 👋
Haha I'm glad you liked him, Blaze. Hope he does well for you! ♡
Unwanted Ones
01:02:45 
-HEE Click-

Oh how pretty
Glacier Bay Cove
12:51:02 Arctic Katz
Congratulations, Starborn

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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


Clover Realm
 
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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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