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100% trained bravery horses for auction. All have been in AD training as well as bravery. So they are duel use bravery and eventers! Most are still UNBRED. Place your bids now:
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#1 ABLB x #16 ABLB + prl. He was all up week 4/8 🎉
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Only a few more days to take home one of these pieces!
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Valhalla Acreage
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5 Sherpa Maps in my shop as well as rusty bits and much more returning costumers get a 10% discount
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Sunni
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WWW SH colt for sale, on week 4 of training.
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Horse Haven Stables
09:26:32 HHS⎹ Lyla
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194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!
Whispering Windz
09:25:33 
Looking for a premium upgrade please mail me
Sunfeather Stables
09:14:33 SF / Sunfeather
Two art auctions!
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Elysium Opalus
10:08:39 free palestine
-HEE Click-
W+, EEE+, elite bravery, rare colors, KNN auction
-HEE Click-


G1/short gens
WEEs and KNN
WC Braves
Rare colors
CHEAP sales studs and broods
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
The Lone Star
10:06:44 
100% trained bravery horses for auction. All have been in AD training as well as bravery. So they are duel use bravery and eventers! Most are still UNBRED. Place your bids now:
-HEE Click-
Pegasus Lane
09:53:18 Peggy (or) Peg
Please help me test my freshie!
#1 ABLB x #16 ABLB + prl. He was all up week 4/8 🎉
-HEE Click-

Only a few more days to take home one of these pieces!
-HEE Click-

Also in search of someone to help critique an art piece ;)
MakeEm Fancy
09:52:29 Ally 💜
All up week 4 WWW ISH colt
-HEE Click-
Valhalla Acreage
09:38:05 Eivor
-HEE Click-
5 Sherpa Maps in my shop as well as rusty bits and much more returning costumers get a 10% discount
Hot 2 Trot *Showing*
09:33:14 Holly
Giving away all horses for free in barn!!! EEE+
-HEE Click-
Sunni
09:30:42 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
WWW SH colt for sale, on week 4 of training.
$500'000
Horse Haven Stables
09:26:32 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
Auction!
Includes:
WWE SH Stallion
EWE Combos
EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
-
-HEE Click-
194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!
Whispering Windz
09:25:33 
Looking for a premium upgrade please mail me
Sunfeather Stables
09:14:33 SF / Sunfeather
Two art auctions!
Summer/flower piece:
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Autumn/Fall piece:
-HEE Click-

All cuts available. Go check them out!

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Art Critique (Hair) October 14, 2022 09:58 AM


Everglade Equestrian
 
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Hello! So im really trying to make my hair look nice and this is the best I've done for a long while, any advice on improvements is greatly appreciated as im still very much learning ❤️ (The mane hasn't been updated yet as im focusing on the tail before progressing because i find them easier 😊) The top of the tail will be sorted before moving on.

Edited at October 14, 2022 10:30 AM by Everglade Equestrian
Art Critique (Hair) October 14, 2022 10:01 AM


Brookfield Stables
 
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I just want to say, It looks amazing to me!! <3
Art Critique (Hair) October 14, 2022 10:10 AM


Everglade Equestrian
 
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Thank you so much! That means alot :D
Art Critique (Hair) October 14, 2022 10:43 AM


Calico Acres
 
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It looks super realistic. I love it! I literally have no critique to give. Bravo!!
Art Critique (Hair) October 14, 2022 11:38 AM


Everglade Equestrian
 
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Thank you very much! <3 I find tails easier than manes so hopefully i don't end up pulling my hair out with the mane xD

Edited at October 14, 2022 12:19 PM by Everglade Equestrian
Art Critique (Hair) November 26, 2022 09:36 PM


Verdant Acres
 
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I think you have totally nailed the hair on the tail!!
Art Critique (Hair) November 27, 2022 04:09 PM


Rivendell Steeds
 
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The top of the tail looks very well done, however the overall shape of the bottom part of the tail could use improvement. Considering where the horse is placed, and the pose the horse is in, the tail should have more of a shape like the original stock. Consider the flyaways; how they move, where they're placed, and how often they appear. I also suggest taking more of an off-white coloring in the hair as the shadows in the tail currently look a little too dark for the horse.
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Adding on, I think you should look where the light is in your background, and add highlights and shadows based on that, rather than where the hair falls behind the legs.

Edited at November 27, 2022 04:11 PM by Rivendell Steeds

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