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Dash and Duchess
09:14:44 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully it'll live up to expectations <3 this is the first time in years I'm actually home for my city's, so we'll see how long it tortures me lol
Heartsong Acres
09:08:59 Versa
DD,
Mortars are legal back in Tennessee so I'm sure my street is noisy too. But people are claiming this to be the biggest firework show in history so, I'm excited.
Dash and Duchess
09:07:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, have fun! I can only imagine how awful the traffic is, I just heard the fireworks show start down here since unfortunately it's at the park near my very in-the-city house lol
Heartsong Acres
09:07:24 Versa
Centura,
Record highs today in certain parts of the US. It has been horrible
Heartsong Acres
09:06:07 Versa
DD,
I guess we'll see. I'm currently perched with an excellent view of the memorial, waiting for the firework show. Getting absolutely poured on. We'll see how traffic is after
Centura stable
09:06:07 Centura
As an aussi, it's so strange watching you guys talk about heat, it's winter over here for me
Dash and Duchess
09:05:06 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully you'll be able to escape back there then xD
Heartsong Acres
09:03:55 Versa
DD,
Bleh. Yeah, though, I can't wait to get back to my air conditioned hotel hidey hole. I feel the hiding part. LOL
Dash and Duchess
09:02:43 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, it is, people push themselves way too hard, thankfully I've been holed up at home today haha
Clear Springs
09:02:27 Froggie
I came home from a long night of work in Florida, fell into bed in my south-facing bedroom because I had been up almost 26 hours, woke up in trouble. My air conditioner had quit while I was comatose and I couldn't even stand up out of the bed. Took 2 liters of IV fluid to get my temp down from 104. Of course, I was born well before Armstrong landed on the moon, so...
Ambrosia
09:02:08 Amb
-HEE Click-
Oh nice little surprise
Heartsong Acres
09:01:38 Versa
I'm thankful to be really tolerant. But I think it's partially because of the obscene amounts of water I drink lol
The Old Gods
09:01:03 Void Malign
Yeah, I gotta watch myself because I have bad heat tolerance and I'm on meds that make me more sensitive to the heat.
Stormsong Manor
09:00:21 Ven
Even athletes in great shape are at risk
Stormsong Manor
08:59:44 Ven
My uncle died at 21 running a marathon in NYC in over one hundred degree heat. He pushed himself too hard and ended up with heat stroke and full kidney failure before he passed away. Always hydrate and be careful of the heat
Heartsong Acres
08:58:24 Versa
DD,
Dehydration is a huge reason for heat ailments. Combined with ignoring your body saying "hey, please stop" is when people faint
Dash and Duchess
08:57:15 DD | ~Squizard~
*suck at hydrating on top of that
Dash and Duchess
08:56:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, oh definitely, it's pretty commonplace to drop during the summer here, but unfortunately I suck at hydrating lol
Heartbeat Haven
08:54:11 Versa
DD,
I'm pretty heat resistant, I've never had troubles. But having grown up in Colorado, I know to properly hydrate and sit if I feel even a little off. I see too many people here pushing themselves a little too hard and then facing consequences
The Old Gods
08:53:46 Void Malign
the thunder was pretty loud so the cats were hiding. Storm finally calmed down, so they're getting tasty cat food

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Dash and Duchess
09:14:44 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully it'll live up to expectations <3 this is the first time in years I'm actually home for my city's, so we'll see how long it tortures me lol
Heartsong Acres
09:08:59 Versa
DD,
Mortars are legal back in Tennessee so I'm sure my street is noisy too. But people are claiming this to be the biggest firework show in history so, I'm excited.
Dash and Duchess
09:07:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, have fun! I can only imagine how awful the traffic is, I just heard the fireworks show start down here since unfortunately it's at the park near my very in-the-city house lol
Heartsong Acres
09:07:24 Versa
Centura,
Record highs today in certain parts of the US. It has been horrible
Heartsong Acres
09:06:07 Versa
DD,
I guess we'll see. I'm currently perched with an excellent view of the memorial, waiting for the firework show. Getting absolutely poured on. We'll see how traffic is after
Centura stable
09:06:07 Centura
As an aussi, it's so strange watching you guys talk about heat, it's winter over here for me
Dash and Duchess
09:05:06 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, hopefully you'll be able to escape back there then xD
Heartsong Acres
09:03:55 Versa
DD,
Bleh. Yeah, though, I can't wait to get back to my air conditioned hotel hidey hole. I feel the hiding part. LOL
Dash and Duchess
09:02:43 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, it is, people push themselves way too hard, thankfully I've been holed up at home today haha
Clear Springs
09:02:27 Froggie
I came home from a long night of work in Florida, fell into bed in my south-facing bedroom because I had been up almost 26 hours, woke up in trouble. My air conditioner had quit while I was comatose and I couldn't even stand up out of the bed. Took 2 liters of IV fluid to get my temp down from 104. Of course, I was born well before Armstrong landed on the moon, so...
Ambrosia
09:02:08 Amb
-HEE Click-
Oh nice little surprise
Heartsong Acres
09:01:38 Versa
I'm thankful to be really tolerant. But I think it's partially because of the obscene amounts of water I drink lol
The Old Gods
09:01:03 Void Malign
Yeah, I gotta watch myself because I have bad heat tolerance and I'm on meds that make me more sensitive to the heat.
Stormsong Manor
09:00:21 Ven
Even athletes in great shape are at risk
Stormsong Manor
08:59:44 Ven
My uncle died at 21 running a marathon in NYC in over one hundred degree heat. He pushed himself too hard and ended up with heat stroke and full kidney failure before he passed away. Always hydrate and be careful of the heat
Heartsong Acres
08:58:24 Versa
DD,
Dehydration is a huge reason for heat ailments. Combined with ignoring your body saying "hey, please stop" is when people faint
Dash and Duchess
08:57:15 DD | ~Squizard~
*suck at hydrating on top of that
Dash and Duchess
08:56:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, oh definitely, it's pretty commonplace to drop during the summer here, but unfortunately I suck at hydrating lol
Heartbeat Haven
08:54:11 Versa
DD,
I'm pretty heat resistant, I've never had troubles. But having grown up in Colorado, I know to properly hydrate and sit if I feel even a little off. I see too many people here pushing themselves a little too hard and then facing consequences
The Old Gods
08:53:46 Void Malign
the thunder was pretty loud so the cats were hiding. Storm finally calmed down, so they're getting tasty cat food

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:29 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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Hi!! I'm looking for some honest, down to earth critique on my art. What do I need to improve, what on my art looks good, the whole run down! Gimme your personal thoughts! Tear it apart. ;)

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:32 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 03:18 PM


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Lambo Farms said:
I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!

Thank you!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:14 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:57 PM


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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.


Thank you, I really appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to try much harder, especially the shadow since I always seem to forget it lol
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 01:34 PM

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Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 04:47 PM


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White Crown Stables said:
Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to help! :)

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