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The Joker

11:03:48 Ari <3

Awwe what a cutie!

Dash Warmbloods

11:02:34

399 yearlings trained.

Sylvan Lake Stables

10:51:19 Tano

Me too Dash

Dash Warmbloods

10:48:21

Wish one could change an entire barns training in one click

Birch Creek

10:45:52 Em

what a pretty filly Ven

Lismore Studs

10:38:59 River | TB's

-Click-

Lismore Studs

10:37:36 River | TB's

Ari
He's a sweetheart, when I was tacking him up he was just about asleep xD

The Joker

10:36:01 Ari <3

Thats awesome River! That horse is super cute!!

Lismore Studs

10:29:06 River | TB's

I need to keep my heels down xD

Lismore Studs

10:25:43 River | TB's

Ignore how I sucked at covering my face xD
The video quality is so bad though I'm sure nothing is that recognizable lol. I cantered as well but my dad didn't get it on video :/
-Click-

The Joker

10:19:49 Ari <3

Thats amazing!

Spirtasi Whims

10:19:22 Tasi / Chat Killer

I know! I didn't even realize the homo leopard was possible with that match

Lismore Studs

10:16:45 River | TB's

I got to ride today 🙏

Glacier Bay Farms

10:16:29 Arctic Cove Katz

When Tenebris Hollow gets back, I want to show her the art progress I have made

The Joker

10:16:09 Ari <3

Oh I love him *-* LpLp too <33

Spirtasi Whims

10:14:42 Tasi / Chat Killer

For a long time, my alarm was set to play Geruda Desert music to wake me up

Spirtasi Whims

10:14:10 Tasi / Chat Killer

-HEE Click-
Of course!

The Joker

10:10:21 Ari <3

All good Tasi, I'm cruising around HEE in between meetings XD Ooh do you have a link?

Gaelic Gladiacres

10:07:46 Gladius

ven - I heard Zelda music, I am running to listen xD song of storms is so fun

Swank Plateau

09:58:06 Swanky

Completely forgot I had you.
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The Joker

11:03:48 Ari <3

Awwe what a cutie!

Dash Warmbloods

11:02:34

399 yearlings trained.

Sylvan Lake Stables

10:51:19 Tano

Me too Dash

Dash Warmbloods

10:48:21

Wish one could change an entire barns training in one click

Birch Creek

10:45:52 Em

what a pretty filly Ven

Lismore Studs

10:38:59 River | TB's

-Click-

Lismore Studs

10:37:36 River | TB's

Ari
He's a sweetheart, when I was tacking him up he was just about asleep xD

The Joker

10:36:01 Ari <3

Thats awesome River! That horse is super cute!!

Lismore Studs

10:29:06 River | TB's

I need to keep my heels down xD

Lismore Studs

10:25:43 River | TB's

Ignore how I sucked at covering my face xD
The video quality is so bad though I'm sure nothing is that recognizable lol. I cantered as well but my dad didn't get it on video :/
-Click-

The Joker

10:19:49 Ari <3

Thats amazing!

Spirtasi Whims

10:19:22 Tasi / Chat Killer

I know! I didn't even realize the homo leopard was possible with that match

Lismore Studs

10:16:45 River | TB's

I got to ride today 🙏

Glacier Bay Farms

10:16:29 Arctic Cove Katz

When Tenebris Hollow gets back, I want to show her the art progress I have made

The Joker

10:16:09 Ari <3

Oh I love him *-* LpLp too <33

Spirtasi Whims

10:14:42 Tasi / Chat Killer

For a long time, my alarm was set to play Geruda Desert music to wake me up

Spirtasi Whims

10:14:10 Tasi / Chat Killer

-HEE Click-
Of course!

The Joker

10:10:21 Ari <3

All good Tasi, I'm cruising around HEE in between meetings XD Ooh do you have a link?

Gaelic Gladiacres

10:07:46 Gladius

ven - I heard Zelda music, I am running to listen xD song of storms is so fun

Swank Plateau

09:58:06 Swanky

Completely forgot I had you.
-HEE Click-

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2686
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1530
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! IÂ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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