Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

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Sunrise Shadows

12:07:12 Syrdar = Myth XD

I needs heeelp

KPH Equestrian

12:06:52 Rapcoon | Jester

witchy
i saw her, cograts! Glad my boy was nice to you<3 He hates me LOL

Sunrise Shadows

12:04:00 Syrdar = Myth XD

Is Ceci around?

Blue Diamond

12:01:57 Bluey

I was so surprised when she came out of my loyal WEE mare <3 I love that mare so much lol

SandWitch Arabians

12:00:01 Witchypoo

I got my 1st WWW as well.
-HEE Click-

Blue Diamond

11:59:41 Bluey

Thank you, guys <3

Lynx Glory

11:58:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx

Ayy congrats bluey!! She's such a pretty girl! <3

KPH Equestrian

11:56:14 Rapcoon | Jester

congrats bluey! she's pretty :D

Blue Diamond

11:55:20 Bluey

My very first WWW!!!
-HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

11:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester

*-* even if she doesn't get good bravery, I'm happy xD
-HEE Click-

Lynx Glory

11:48:12 ⛈ whisper/lynx

aw i didn't see you lol sorry

Lynx Glory

11:47:58 ⛈ whisper/lynx

myth!

Breadcrumbs

11:47:35

Zooombs.. are you there?

Angels angels

11:40:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel

With my bank you are also supposed to be able to just take a picture of a check and it will go into your account, or put it in through an atm but for some reason it doesn't work on mine.

Angels angels

11:38:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Then she shouldn't be working the money center

Glacier Bay Cove

11:37:03 Arctic Katz

Maybe she is a new employee and doesn't know that they cash hand written checks

Angels angels

11:36:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Every single week when I get my paycheck I take it to Kroger to cash it. Never had any issues with it. Then I tried to do it today and the lady says they don't cash handwritten check. Um yes they do .-.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:34:54 Arctic Katz

What did she do

Angels angels

11:34:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ugh this lady just pissed me off so bad

Glacier Bay Cove

11:32:38 Arctic Katz

To see if there's anything good there

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Sunrise Shadows

12:07:12 Syrdar = Myth XD

I needs heeelp

KPH Equestrian

12:06:52 Rapcoon | Jester

witchy
i saw her, cograts! Glad my boy was nice to you<3 He hates me LOL

Sunrise Shadows

12:04:00 Syrdar = Myth XD

Is Ceci around?

Blue Diamond

12:01:57 Bluey

I was so surprised when she came out of my loyal WEE mare <3 I love that mare so much lol

SandWitch Arabians

12:00:01 Witchypoo

I got my 1st WWW as well.
-HEE Click-

Blue Diamond

11:59:41 Bluey

Thank you, guys <3

Lynx Glory

11:58:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx

Ayy congrats bluey!! She's such a pretty girl! <3

KPH Equestrian

11:56:14 Rapcoon | Jester

congrats bluey! she's pretty :D

Blue Diamond

11:55:20 Bluey

My very first WWW!!!
-HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

11:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester

*-* even if she doesn't get good bravery, I'm happy xD
-HEE Click-

Lynx Glory

11:48:12 ⛈ whisper/lynx

aw i didn't see you lol sorry

Lynx Glory

11:47:58 ⛈ whisper/lynx

myth!

Breadcrumbs

11:47:35

Zooombs.. are you there?

Angels angels

11:40:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel

With my bank you are also supposed to be able to just take a picture of a check and it will go into your account, or put it in through an atm but for some reason it doesn't work on mine.

Angels angels

11:38:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Then she shouldn't be working the money center

Glacier Bay Cove

11:37:03 Arctic Katz

Maybe she is a new employee and doesn't know that they cash hand written checks

Angels angels

11:36:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Glacier Bay Cove

11:34:54 Arctic Katz

What did she do

Angels angels

11:34:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ugh this lady just pissed me off so bad

Glacier Bay Cove

11:32:38 Arctic Katz

To see if there's anything good there

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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