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08:04:10 The Coffee Purist

A pasture bred foal exchanged my top dressage mares I love it

Fossil's Dreams

08:04:10 PK or Fossil

The thunder just roared & the idiots are still at it out there

Fossil's Dreams

08:02:57 PK or Fossil

Eury you must live in my neighbor lol

Glacier Bay Farms

08:01:56 Arctic Cove Katz

Khaleesi, such a gorgeous horse

07:59:38 Void Malign

...I like how there's a thunderstorm that's coming in and people are trying to pop off their fireworks. Like no. Go inside.

Westeros Livery

07:58:58 Khaleesi

-HEE Click-

I love when colors turn out nice in ratings!

07:55:50 Ly/Lyra

Oh I thought the darker black/black going up the neck and back was a variation of sooty lol

Nightmarish Estate

07:54:59 SA || Neptune or Nep

Of course, the plain-looking Sport Horse turns out WWW LMAO
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07:54:46 Fawn

Homozygous for Dun. That's what those markings are on the first foal

07:54:08 Ly/Lyra

DD?

Nightmarish Estate

07:52:44 SA || Neptune or Nep

Oh my, they're so prettyyy!

Magik

07:52:11

I think the first foal is only DD. At least that's what the pattern on the shoulder/legs are

07:50:07 Ly/Lyra

my recent favorite sooties
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Lorelei

07:45:51 Lore

Sooty's are superior

Nightmarish Estate

07:44:25 SA || Neptune or Nep

Also, that sooty Swanky is gorgeous :o <3

Nightmarish Estate

07:42:22 SA || Neptune or Nep

Nooo, I just bred a mare to the wrong stud T-T

07:40:41 Ly/Lyra

ugh I love sooty ponies

07:38:57 Swanky

extra sooty *.*
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07:34:59 Storm

It's a red based grey?

07:17:00 Centura

dae
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08:04:10 The Coffee Purist

A pasture bred foal exchanged my top dressage mares I love it

Fossil's Dreams

08:04:10 PK or Fossil

The thunder just roared & the idiots are still at it out there

Fossil's Dreams

08:02:57 PK or Fossil

Eury you must live in my neighbor lol

Glacier Bay Farms

08:01:56 Arctic Cove Katz

Khaleesi, such a gorgeous horse

07:59:38 Void Malign

...I like how there's a thunderstorm that's coming in and people are trying to pop off their fireworks. Like no. Go inside.

Westeros Livery

07:58:58 Khaleesi

-HEE Click-

I love when colors turn out nice in ratings!

07:55:50 Ly/Lyra

Oh I thought the darker black/black going up the neck and back was a variation of sooty lol

Nightmarish Estate

07:54:59 SA || Neptune or Nep

Of course, the plain-looking Sport Horse turns out WWW LMAO
-HEE Click-

07:54:46 Fawn

Homozygous for Dun. That's what those markings are on the first foal

07:54:08 Ly/Lyra

DD?

Nightmarish Estate

07:52:44 SA || Neptune or Nep

Oh my, they're so prettyyy!

Magik

07:52:11

I think the first foal is only DD. At least that's what the pattern on the shoulder/legs are

07:50:07 Ly/Lyra

my recent favorite sooties
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Lorelei

07:45:51 Lore

Sooty's are superior

Nightmarish Estate

07:44:25 SA || Neptune or Nep

Also, that sooty Swanky is gorgeous :o <3

Nightmarish Estate

07:42:22 SA || Neptune or Nep

Nooo, I just bred a mare to the wrong stud T-T

07:40:41 Ly/Lyra

ugh I love sooty ponies

07:38:57 Swanky

extra sooty *.*
-HEE Click-

07:34:59 Storm

It's a red based grey?

07:17:00 Centura

dae
thanks

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March 25, 2019 02:45 PM

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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

*Click for better quality*

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites

March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)

March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.

For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.

March 29, 2019 04:30 PM

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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡

April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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