Horse Eden : critique please

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Ice Crystal Mares

09:31:57

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woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay

Glacier Bay Farms

09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz

Currently stalking the HEE store

All Breeds

09:08:59 Fawn

Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
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Glacier Bay Farms

09:02:19 Arctic Cove Katz

Where’s my lottery ticket, lol

Black Raven TBs

08:56:34

thank you All Breeds

Silver Melody Acres

08:53:20 Solar - KNNs

Oh, another world class girl, nice!
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Namerik Stables

08:41:12 Rose

Can you buy one for me too LoL

Markeva

08:40:10

so I'm stuffed

Ivy Wall Ranch

08:39:41

I think I should go buy a lottery ticket now! like what are the chances
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Markeva

08:37:14

storm
i don't have the money nor the horses

All Breeds

08:36:39 Fawn

It's a premium feature Raven

Black Raven TBs

08:34:14

how do i brand my horses

Black Raven TBs

08:31:00

no luck on captures

Black Raven TBs

08:30:31

same here

Bioshock Manor

08:29:07 Storm

What's so hard about that?

Namerik Stables

08:28:52 Rose

I got a WWW TB mare months ago on a capture party day without a map I think since then all my luck has been down the toilet when it comes to capturing

Markeva

08:23:52

Breed a homozygous Tobiano foal. This is a foal with two dominant Tobiano genes:ToTo. Both parents must be Tobiano to have a chance at a ToTo foal.

Are you kidding me?

Santana Rising

08:23:17 San

I think it depends on the quantity too. I have a lot of SSS captures with maps too, but also get my fair amount of EEE+ when I use them on capture day

Namerik Stables

08:06:26 Rose

Ash you must be very lucky because in my experience they don't work

Black Raven TBs

08:05:34

Cloud Peak Stables im having the same lag issues too

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Ice Crystal Mares

09:31:57

-HEE Click-
woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay

Glacier Bay Farms

09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz

Currently stalking the HEE store

All Breeds

09:08:59 Fawn

Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Farms

09:02:19 Arctic Cove Katz

Where’s my lottery ticket, lol

Black Raven TBs

08:56:34

thank you All Breeds

Silver Melody Acres

08:53:20 Solar - KNNs

Oh, another world class girl, nice!
-HEE Click-

Namerik Stables

08:41:12 Rose

Can you buy one for me too LoL

Markeva

08:40:10

so I'm stuffed

Ivy Wall Ranch

08:39:41

I think I should go buy a lottery ticket now! like what are the chances
-HEE Click-

Markeva

08:37:14

storm
i don't have the money nor the horses

All Breeds

08:36:39 Fawn

It's a premium feature Raven

Black Raven TBs

08:34:14

how do i brand my horses

Black Raven TBs

08:31:00

no luck on captures

Black Raven TBs

08:30:31

same here

Bioshock Manor

08:29:07 Storm

What's so hard about that?

Namerik Stables

08:28:52 Rose

I got a WWW TB mare months ago on a capture party day without a map I think since then all my luck has been down the toilet when it comes to capturing

Markeva

08:23:52

Breed a homozygous Tobiano foal. This is a foal with two dominant Tobiano genes:ToTo. Both parents must be Tobiano to have a chance at a ToTo foal.

Are you kidding me?

Santana Rising

08:23:17 San

I think it depends on the quantity too. I have a lot of SSS captures with maps too, but also get my fair amount of EEE+ when I use them on capture day

Namerik Stables

08:06:26 Rose

Ash you must be very lucky because in my experience they don't work

Black Raven TBs

08:05:34

Cloud Peak Stables im having the same lag issues too

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critique please

September 18, 2018 06:50 PM

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http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

looking for critique on this piece

I use gimp

improved version :

http://oi65.tinypic.com/1zzgvtd.jpg

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:12 PM by Scarlett Breeze Farm

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September 20, 2018 11:45 AM

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still looking :)

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September 23, 2018 09:58 AM

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I thought this piece was SUPER cute!

If anything it's a little bit bright where you have the light flare since it's on a light coated horse. Even though it's a tad bright, you did excellent on matching the lighting to the horse.

I think the horses eyes could have a bit more detail, and the forelock with more stray strands of hair.

Beautiful piece!

critique please

September 23, 2018 01:10 PM

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i made a better version, fetching link now :)

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September 23, 2018 01:25 PM

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I love them both, but I'm not a fan on the sparkly, glowing, floating balls xP

On the second one, I'd lower the brightness and contrast on the horse just a tad. The mane looks very good, love the fly away hairs however the forelock looks spiked almost. I'd bring the hairs downwards more and give them slightly more movement. The back foot looks like it cuts away to suddenly as well. Other than that, fantastic work!!! :D

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:26 PM by Trinity Equine

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September 23, 2018 02:34 PM

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