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J and B
07:02:01 Catalina
Thank you Opal!
Tamarack Mountain
07:00:49 Opal
congrats
J and B
06:56:28 Catalina
Just tooting my own horn for a minute bc I actually never expected to win a HEWG
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
06:52:08 Cali
Thanks, this is the first horror\murder mystery I've made so I am quite self-conscious about it
FirstLightFarms
06:50:32 puck
No they have a definite vibe to them that suits a darker story
Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it

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J and B
07:02:01 Catalina
Thank you Opal!
Tamarack Mountain
07:00:49 Opal
congrats
J and B
06:56:28 Catalina
Just tooting my own horn for a minute bc I actually never expected to win a HEWG
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
06:52:08 Cali
Thanks, this is the first horror\murder mystery I've made so I am quite self-conscious about it
FirstLightFarms
06:50:32 puck
No they have a definite vibe to them that suits a darker story
Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it

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Critique please? <3 January 12, 2024 03:41 PM


Passerine Acres
 
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Don't get me wrong, i LOVE how these turned out. but perhaps that could've clouded my judgement.
I would like some criticism ( be as harsh, nitpicking, even mean as you please ) on my art work, as i feel i've not been improving much as of late and have kind of plateaued in terms of skill
Much love <3
Edit: wonder if it's obvious how much i love back lighting? hehe maybe i should try with other harsh directed lighting

Edited at January 12, 2024 03:43 PM by Passerine Acres
Critique please? <3 January 12, 2024 03:48 PM


Prismatic Cove
 
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I absolutely love the style. As far as I can see all I would work on is less direct/sharp shadows/reflections, more shading on the horse. I'd do a little browsing at how shadows work for the lighting you do with the piece. The snowy and fight club ones are breathtaking! As are your manes and tails. Keep up the good work!
Critique please? <3 January 12, 2024 07:20 PM


Florestä
 
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So stunning. I'd just go lighter on the smudging especially on that last piece, a little texture isn't a bad thing, don't be afraid of it ;)
I used to do that (over-smudging) too. they just turn out looking swirly.

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