Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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10:47:29 Fawn
Tasi, did you see the filly I got?
Glacier Bay Farms
10:45:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Waiting for Ven to come online
SandWitch Arabians
10:42:53 Witchypoo
keep up with her tracking
Pegasus Lane
10:39:35 Peggy (or) Peg
I am super anxious for week 7s so I can match her. Whatever it is, she'll probably be svened
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Spirtasi Whims
10:37:20 Tasi / Chat Killer
30 minutes or more later and I got blues hair done. This art piece is going to kill me...
Red Springs
10:33:29 
Never new a horse could be this gorgeous -HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:24:07 Technically Tangle
Oohhh love the appy
Spirtasi Whims
10:18:50 Tasi / Chat Killer
It was okay, I got a WWW boy i'm currently working on arts for
-HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:16:55 Technically Tangle
Tasi! How did RO treat you?
Columet Farms
10:16:36 The Coffee Purist
Love the sooty
-HEE Click-
SandWitch Arabians
10:13:40 Witchypoo
It's almost instant
Spirtasi Whims
10:13:08 Tasi / Chat Killer
Hey Tangle!
Spirtasi Whims
10:12:59 Tasi / Chat Killer
I believe the store switches out every 10 minutes?
Tanglewood
10:12:51 Technically Tangle
Every ten minutes :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:11:04 Arctic Cove Katz
How many minutes
Glacier Bay Farms
10:10:35 Arctic Cove Katz
After the store expires, how long does it take for it to get new inventory
Wisteria Run Farm
09:41:20 Solar/Ria
What a cutie ^_^
-HEE Click-
Ice Crystal Mares
09:31:57 
-HEE Click-
woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz
Currently stalking the HEE store
All Breeds
09:08:59 Fawn
Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
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All Breeds
10:47:29 Fawn
Tasi, did you see the filly I got?
Glacier Bay Farms
10:45:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Waiting for Ven to come online
SandWitch Arabians
10:42:53 Witchypoo
keep up with her tracking
Pegasus Lane
10:39:35 Peggy (or) Peg
I am super anxious for week 7s so I can match her. Whatever it is, she'll probably be svened
-HEE Click-
Spirtasi Whims
10:37:20 Tasi / Chat Killer
30 minutes or more later and I got blues hair done. This art piece is going to kill me...
Red Springs
10:33:29 
Never new a horse could be this gorgeous -HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:24:07 Technically Tangle
Oohhh love the appy
Spirtasi Whims
10:18:50 Tasi / Chat Killer
It was okay, I got a WWW boy i'm currently working on arts for
-HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:16:55 Technically Tangle
Tasi! How did RO treat you?
Columet Farms
10:16:36 The Coffee Purist
Love the sooty
-HEE Click-
SandWitch Arabians
10:13:40 Witchypoo
It's almost instant
Spirtasi Whims
10:13:08 Tasi / Chat Killer
Hey Tangle!
Spirtasi Whims
10:12:59 Tasi / Chat Killer
I believe the store switches out every 10 minutes?
Tanglewood
10:12:51 Technically Tangle
Every ten minutes :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:11:04 Arctic Cove Katz
How many minutes
Glacier Bay Farms
10:10:35 Arctic Cove Katz
After the store expires, how long does it take for it to get new inventory
Wisteria Run Farm
09:41:20 Solar/Ria
What a cutie ^_^
-HEE Click-
Ice Crystal Mares
09:31:57 
-HEE Click-
woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz
Currently stalking the HEE store
All Breeds
09:08:59 Fawn
Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
-HEE Click-

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Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 08:30 AM


desert palms
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/vZfHwMWX/Screen-Shot-2018-10-15-at-7-34-00-PM.jpg
I made this manipulation yesterday, and I've been working on improving/finding my style lately. What are some things I could work on and improve, and what would you say is a good starting price for an avatar like this? -M

Edited at October 16, 2018 08:30 AM by desert palms
Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 08:36 AM

Former Stable
 
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That's beautiful!
Maybe 10k-20k?
Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 10:54 AM

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gonna have to disagree
this piece is outstanding!
he amonts of detail have bene put into this
100k-250k ^^

in memory of sugar said:
That's beautiful!
Maybe 10k-20k?



Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 11:26 AM


WildWillow
 
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If this were my piece, I would charge 30k.
There are a few things I can notice that if it were my piece I would change.
You definitely need to work on having the lighting on the horse blend into the background. For example, on the horse's belly and legs there is a yellowy-green tinge. Either from a stain on the stock horse or reflection from grass. Since the horse is in water, the reflection should be blue.
The lighting coming from the left side of the background is yellow yet the highlights on the horse are blue. The white blur around the horse also does not make sense on the backside of the horse since the light is coming from the left side.
The mane and tail look good. Although, it does look like you forgot to cut out part of the original stock horse's background between the back leg and the tail. From what I can see, it looks like there is brown behind the tail. I am unsure exactly what this is, but it does look like the stock horse's background.
The horse is walking through the water so there should be ripples or splashes in the water. In the reflection, the hooves should not be visible since the hooves are under the water. I do think lowering the opacity on the reflection could help as well.
The last thing I think you could change and it would increase the price of your work is working on horse prep. The lines on the horse's barrel needs to be smoothed out. It looks very rigid and looks like you smudged down. In other places, the smudging looks inconsistent. At the bottom of the horse's barrel, it looks like it wasn't smoothly cut out. Take your time - it may seem like it takes forever but it really makes a difference! If the stock horse's barrel was actually formed like that, it is okay to "sculpt" the horse or trim down a bit farther to make it look smooth. I do this a lot in some of my pieces!


Overall your piece is very stunning and I love the idea for it! The grey horse definitely the perfect color for this background. :) I can't wait to see some of your pieces in the future and how you improve.
Pricing and art critiques? October 16, 2018 05:49 PM


desert palms
 
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WildWillow said:
If this were my piece, I would charge 30k.
There are a few things I can notice that if it were my piece I would change.
You definitely need to work on having the lighting on the horse blend into the background. For example, on the horse's belly and legs there is a yellowy-green tinge. Either from a stain on the stock horse or reflection from grass. Since the horse is in water, the reflection should be blue.
The lighting coming from the left side of the background is yellow yet the highlights on the horse are blue. The white blur around the horse also does not make sense on the backside of the horse since the light is coming from the left side.
The mane and tail look good. Although, it does look like you forgot to cut out part of the original stock horse's background between the back leg and the tail. From what I can see, it looks like there is brown behind the tail. I am unsure exactly what this is, but it does look like the stock horse's background.
The horse is walking through the water so there should be ripples or splashes in the water. In the reflection, the hooves should not be visible since the hooves are under the water. I do think lowering the opacity on the reflection could help as well.
The last thing I think you could change and it would increase the price of your work is working on horse prep. The lines on the horse's barrel needs to be smoothed out. It looks very rigid and looks like you smudged down. In other places, the smudging looks inconsistent. At the bottom of the horse's barrel, it looks like it wasn't smoothly cut out. Take your time - it may seem like it takes forever but it really makes a difference! If the stock horse's barrel was actually formed like that, it is okay to "sculpt" the horse or trim down a bit farther to make it look smooth. I do this a lot in some of my pieces!


Overall your piece is very stunning and I love the idea for it! The grey horse definitely the perfect color for this background. :) I can't wait to see some of your pieces in the future and how you improve.


Thank you! I will definitely try to fix some of those things

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