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Come check out my art shop! I can typically finish pieces withing a few hourse ;)

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WEE WB fillies and mares for sale, bred with colour in mind! Priced for quick sale
Port Royal Equines
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Watercolored
02:05:56 WC
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Hundreds of horses for sale, more just added!!
EEEs, 1/1s, 12 Homozygous genetic tested color horses, and everything in between!
Winterfell Meadows
01:59:48 
Greetings all, I am urgently in need of a 3 months premium upgrade. Please pm if you can assist. Thanks
Pegasus Lane
01:56:33 Peggy (or) Peg
Flight Of Fear rumble auction! Three completely different concepts, so there's a great chance you vibe with one 😉💕
-HEE Click-

Please help me test my up-and-coming freshie! #1 ABLB x #16 ABLB & has PEARL! 🎉
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
01:55:27 Lily/Alpine
EEE+ and colour auction!
-HEE Click-

Tack giveaway
-HEE Click-
Golden Heart
01:54:18 Gold
Come check out my art shop! I can typically finish pieces withing a few hourse ;)

-HEE Click-
Bangtan Boys
01:48:14 Kas
Does anyone have a wormy apple
starmutt
01:19:45 happy pride! :3
looking for premium upgrade! <3 swapping for art
-HEE Click-
Zuno
12:55:48 Katie
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Zuno
12:55:42 Katie
WEE WB fillies and mares for sale, bred with colour in mind! Priced for quick sale
Port Royal Equines
12:41:57 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Anyone need Decor? Only 50 ebs!

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Lvl 5+ geldings and Brave mares for sale!

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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