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Transformers Acres
11:05:27 Geek, Eek
She was a brown and white purebred Jack Russell Terrier, with tiny brown dots on her legs. Hang on, I might be able to post a picture.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:05:15 Arctic Katz
When my first two cats died, I was a EMOTIONAL WRECK
Glacier Bay Cove
11:04:21 Arctic Katz
Yes it makes sense to me. What did your puppy look like, if I may ask
Transformers Acres
11:03:18 Geek, Eek
Arctic

Yeah. I've seen a picture of her, and I won't lie, she is very adorable and apparently, she's clingy and cuddly. However, I haven't gotten over my puppy (she died Monday), and I don't know what my mind will think. Essentially, my heart is wanting to love and bond with her, but my brain is refusing. If that makes sense.
Transformers Acres
11:01:29 Geek, Eek
Bird

Oh, same. My mental health is also shit, but my mom got me into therapy. If they actually bother to even talk to me, unlike my past four therapists.
The Joker
11:01:17 Ari <3
Good for you! That's a huge step in making mental recoveries, and moving past things that are keeping you from healing ♡
Glacier Bay Cove
11:00:33 Arctic Katz
Oh, I can understand that completely
Transformers Acres
11:00:05 Geek, Eek
Arctic

Oh, it's nothing against her, rest assured. I'm just grieving my puppy still. I may get attached to my new dog, I may not. It just depends on me.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:59:54 Arctic Katz
And who knows, she might be exactly what you are needing in a support and therapy dog
Hummingbird Meadows
10:58:40 Bird
@Ari, I appreciate the advice. I have been working with a therapist, but she reduced her hours and I had to switch to one that worked with my schedule. I hope it works out because my mental health hasn't been good lately.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:58:34 Arctic Katz
Geek, I wouldn't. Your new dog might be missing a leg, but she deserves a loving home
The Joker
10:56:49 Ari <3
Bird

It's not that the choices you've made aren't good choices, they are just your own and not other people's. And a victim mentality will make your brain box yourself in far more than anyone else's decisions will for you :) don't get caught up in that, it won't do you any good
Dash and Duchess
10:55:16 DD | ~Squizard~
Bin, Ooo could be >.> that'd be a dream 🤩
Dash and Duchess
10:54:47 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, you got this! XD just think about how good sleep is going to be after the grain!
-
Ah well, I've got to poof! See yall!
Transformers Acres
10:54:05 Geek, Eek
My mom got me a three-legged dog for emotional support and therapy. She's cute and all, but I have no idea if I'll reject her or not. I still want my puppy back. :(
Pearlescent Shores
10:54:02 Bin/Bingus
With 3/3 grey foals and no gene test, that mare might actually be GG o.o

Or just likes to pass on shine unlike my grey girl :')
Hummingbird Meadows
10:53:55 Bird
@Ari, it just feels like I have tried to make good choices, but almost all the struggles in my life are from the poor decisions of others.
The Joker
10:53:21 Ari <3
DD

Same! Just got in from training, I'm starting horse feed then I'm gonna make tea and try not to fall asleep before I run out grain 😂
The Joker
10:52:43 Ari <3
McFossil
Tell me about it x.x when did the world become so expensive
Dash and Duchess
10:52:37 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, doing good! About to go crash after a long day XD how're you?

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Transformers Acres
11:05:27 Geek, Eek
She was a brown and white purebred Jack Russell Terrier, with tiny brown dots on her legs. Hang on, I might be able to post a picture.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:05:15 Arctic Katz
When my first two cats died, I was a EMOTIONAL WRECK
Glacier Bay Cove
11:04:21 Arctic Katz
Yes it makes sense to me. What did your puppy look like, if I may ask
Transformers Acres
11:03:18 Geek, Eek
Arctic

Yeah. I've seen a picture of her, and I won't lie, she is very adorable and apparently, she's clingy and cuddly. However, I haven't gotten over my puppy (she died Monday), and I don't know what my mind will think. Essentially, my heart is wanting to love and bond with her, but my brain is refusing. If that makes sense.
Transformers Acres
11:01:29 Geek, Eek
Bird

Oh, same. My mental health is also shit, but my mom got me into therapy. If they actually bother to even talk to me, unlike my past four therapists.
The Joker
11:01:17 Ari <3
Good for you! That's a huge step in making mental recoveries, and moving past things that are keeping you from healing ♡
Glacier Bay Cove
11:00:33 Arctic Katz
Oh, I can understand that completely
Transformers Acres
11:00:05 Geek, Eek
Arctic

Oh, it's nothing against her, rest assured. I'm just grieving my puppy still. I may get attached to my new dog, I may not. It just depends on me.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:59:54 Arctic Katz
And who knows, she might be exactly what you are needing in a support and therapy dog
Hummingbird Meadows
10:58:40 Bird
@Ari, I appreciate the advice. I have been working with a therapist, but she reduced her hours and I had to switch to one that worked with my schedule. I hope it works out because my mental health hasn't been good lately.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:58:34 Arctic Katz
Geek, I wouldn't. Your new dog might be missing a leg, but she deserves a loving home
The Joker
10:56:49 Ari <3
Bird

It's not that the choices you've made aren't good choices, they are just your own and not other people's. And a victim mentality will make your brain box yourself in far more than anyone else's decisions will for you :) don't get caught up in that, it won't do you any good
Dash and Duchess
10:55:16 DD | ~Squizard~
Bin, Ooo could be >.> that'd be a dream 🤩
Dash and Duchess
10:54:47 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, you got this! XD just think about how good sleep is going to be after the grain!
-
Ah well, I've got to poof! See yall!
Transformers Acres
10:54:05 Geek, Eek
My mom got me a three-legged dog for emotional support and therapy. She's cute and all, but I have no idea if I'll reject her or not. I still want my puppy back. :(
Pearlescent Shores
10:54:02 Bin/Bingus
With 3/3 grey foals and no gene test, that mare might actually be GG o.o

Or just likes to pass on shine unlike my grey girl :')
Hummingbird Meadows
10:53:55 Bird
@Ari, it just feels like I have tried to make good choices, but almost all the struggles in my life are from the poor decisions of others.
The Joker
10:53:21 Ari <3
DD

Same! Just got in from training, I'm starting horse feed then I'm gonna make tea and try not to fall asleep before I run out grain 😂
The Joker
10:52:43 Ari <3
McFossil
Tell me about it x.x when did the world become so expensive
Dash and Duchess
10:52:37 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, doing good! About to go crash after a long day XD how're you?

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I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 10:50 PM

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https://s22.postimg.cc/4413ye2c1/Black_White_Chestnut_Horse_Stable_Avi-_HEE.png
Anything i can add to make it pop at all? Suggest anything you think would be Cute/Awesome/Amazing!

Edited at August 18, 2018 10:51 PM by ~Running Free~
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:26 PM

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The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:29 PM

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RavenHale said:
The horses seem out of proportion with each other.. Not sure if that's the idea for it or not.

It is, sorta. Like separate horses kinda
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:43 PM

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The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:44 PM

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RavenHale said:
The chestnut one just seems too large compared to the others, I could be seeing things, who knows.

It is higher up,and the back legs are stretched out but i am sleepy, i could be seeing thing as well *Yawns*
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:46 PM


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Are you looking for constructive critiques?
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 18, 2018 11:54 PM

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Just anything that could really help future pieces, stuff i did wrong, etc.
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 12:37 AM


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This is a cute idea! Although there are a few things I noticed. The edges of the horses are rough, the horses are out of proportion, the horses could be matched to the BG a bit more, and the credits could be smaller but less fuzzy. If you'd like tips on how to fix these issue just message me :)
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 08:36 AM


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Hi Running!

This piece is quite cute! I really like the concept and I love the contrasting colors of the horses' stock. It definitely makes each one stand out from the background.
Although, I do have a few critiques that I feel could help your art a lot.

First of all, it appears that you simply cut the horses out and pasted them onto a background. I would recommend looking up some horse prep tutorials on DeviantArt or see if there are any available on here in the forums. I feel that horse prep could help your work a lot.

Second, the horses don't look like they belong in the background. I would definitely work on highlights and shadows. In this piece, it appears the light source is coming from the top left hand corner. Parts of the horse facing this direction would be lighter than the sides not in the direct light. The stock images you chose don't have the same light source as the background. Working with highlights and shadows would fix this. :) Also, I'm not sure what program you are using but try to mess around with some of the Auto-Color, Auto-Contrast, and Auto-White Balance features. When I was starting out with art, these helped me make my horse seem as though it is really in the background.

Third, the manes and tails are really awkward and unnatural looking. They seem blocky and do not flow. When working with manes and tails really try out different tools and brushed. And definitely watch or view some tutorials! Tutorials as well as studying natural horse manes help a ton! Manes aren't blocky so be sure to make some fly aways and strands of different lengths.

I hope this helps! Please mail me if you have any questions or if you would like any future tips! :)

Thanks!
Willow
I Need Thoughts On This Piece.. August 19, 2018 10:07 AM

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Ok thank you so much guys! Now i can see a;ll of that now because i am actually looking for it <3 All the tips and stuff will really help future pieces, like the light parts for example. I am testing out a different art site, so i can probably find a small brush. Thank Y'all!

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