Horse Eden : Critique and Tips Wanted!

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Glacier Bay Cove

11:43:08 Arctic Katz

Help with what

11:42:48 Ivy / poison ivy

people, i need help

Glacier Bay Cove

11:42:39 Arctic Katz

After RO, I hope I can complete this quest Quest Level 100
Breeding
Breed a Brindle foal.
Reward: 10,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits

11:42:39 pheezy

ooh sunni what a pretty girl

Sunni

11:41:34 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
I hope this girl dose well RO.

11:41:21 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved

11:41:08 Ally 💜

I have laundry to do but ugh I just want to lay around today

Transformers Acres

11:40:56 Geek, Eek

I mean, my uncle's girlfriend let's his 7 year old son watch Shameless, and other shit 7 year olds shouldn't watch. Same as his 12 year old daughter.

11:40:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Angel

we'll have to meet up sometime then and teach each other what we dont know xD

Glacier Bay Cove

11:40:42 Arctic Katz

And also a lot of crafting books

11:40:13 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved

Glacier Bay Cove

11:40:08 Arctic Katz

I used the internet to teach myself both crocheting and knitting

11:39:45 Ally 💜

I let her watch what she wants as long as she asks me first. Venom is nothing compared to what others let their kids watch.

11:39:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I can't knot but I can crochet lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:39:22 Arctic Katz

Crochet >reading

11:39:04 Ivy / poison ivy

i can knit though

11:39:00 Ivy / poison ivy

Angel

crochet. i've always wanted to learn crochet

11:38:44 Ivy / poison ivy

Ally

lol

11:38:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Read or crochet?

11:38:22 Ally 💜

Dachshund mix :) its for my mom @Glacier

Because she can lol

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Glacier Bay Cove

11:43:08 Arctic Katz

Help with what

11:42:48 Ivy / poison ivy

people, i need help

Glacier Bay Cove

11:42:39 Arctic Katz

After RO, I hope I can complete this quest Quest Level 100
Breeding
Breed a Brindle foal.
Reward: 10,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits

11:42:39 pheezy

ooh sunni what a pretty girl

Sunni

11:41:34 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
I hope this girl dose well RO.

11:41:21 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved

11:41:08 Ally 💜

I have laundry to do but ugh I just want to lay around today

Transformers Acres

11:40:56 Geek, Eek

I mean, my uncle's girlfriend let's his 7 year old son watch Shameless, and other shit 7 year olds shouldn't watch. Same as his 12 year old daughter.

11:40:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Angel

we'll have to meet up sometime then and teach each other what we dont know xD

Glacier Bay Cove

11:40:42 Arctic Katz

And also a lot of crafting books

11:40:13 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved

Glacier Bay Cove

11:40:08 Arctic Katz

I used the internet to teach myself both crocheting and knitting

11:39:45 Ally 💜

I let her watch what she wants as long as she asks me first. Venom is nothing compared to what others let their kids watch.

11:39:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I can't knot but I can crochet lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:39:22 Arctic Katz

Crochet >reading

11:39:04 Ivy / poison ivy

i can knit though

11:39:00 Ivy / poison ivy

Angel

crochet. i've always wanted to learn crochet

11:38:44 Ivy / poison ivy

Ally

lol

11:38:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Read or crochet?

11:38:22 Ally 💜

Dachshund mix :) its for my mom @Glacier

Because she can lol

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Critique and Tips Wanted!

June 12, 2017 09:14 PM

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I would love some critique for this piece! Please give honest opinions don't be afraid to tell me exactly what you think.

http://oi63.tinypic.com/21j26h3.jpg

Edited at June 12, 2017 09:14 PM by Freedom Ranch

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June 13, 2017 05:04 AM

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Looks nice. But you have smudged the horse to much, making it look fake. I'd suggest using a different rate or opacity. Other than that it looks good!

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June 13, 2017 10:58 AM

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Moonlight stud said:
Looks nice. But you have smudged the horse to much, making it look fake. I'd suggest using a different rate or opacity. Other than that it looks good!

Thanks, I will try a lower opacity next time.

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June 13, 2017 06:13 PM

Andraste Equine

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Yeah, it's blended a bit too much and the horse is too bright for the backround. I suggest looking for horse stock that matches the brightness.

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July 3, 2017 06:36 PM

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Maybe add an shadow. It can help the image look more like a photo than a manip.

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