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I love this mare
Black Raven TBs
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ppl setting off fireworks
Rose Trails Barn
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Oh 🥹
Black Raven TBs
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bbl going to put them in my barn
Rose Trails Barn
11:37:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
How?
Black Raven TBs
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my horses are freaking out
Centura stable
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what tack would suit her?
Centura stable
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arctic cove
you to
Rose Trails Barn
10:50:38 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Doing fireworks but I wanted to sleep T-T
Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Happy 4th of July, and 5th of July, Centura
Rose Trails Barn
10:46:59 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats funny
Centura stable
10:44:46 Centura
I think you guys are a day behind me, it's the 5th for me. So strange having everyone talk about the 4th of July lol
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:42 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th boomer
Lighting Estates
10:42:23 BOOOMER?
Happy 4th of July gng \(^o^)/
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:10 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Can someone like.. Help me make a brand idea for my Arabians?
Rose Trails Barn
10:41:16 Echo/ Eco Friendly
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So pretty
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:35 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I'mma work on my Arabian eee/ppp breeding to get on the leaderboard
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:02 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh! Yippieee!!
Glacier Bay Farms
10:39:52 Arctic Cove Katz
I will start on your art tomorrow afternoon
Rose Trails Barn
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Centura stable
11:42:45 Centura
-HEE Click-
I love this mare
Black Raven TBs
11:38:27 
ppl setting off fireworks
Rose Trails Barn
11:38:18 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh 🥹
Black Raven TBs
11:37:54 
bbl going to put them in my barn
Rose Trails Barn
11:37:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
How?
Black Raven TBs
11:37:19 
my horses are freaking out
Centura stable
10:54:53 Centura
-HEE Click-
what tack would suit her?
Centura stable
10:51:56 Centura
arctic cove
you to
Rose Trails Barn
10:50:38 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Doing fireworks but I wanted to sleep T-T
Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Happy 4th of July, and 5th of July, Centura
Rose Trails Barn
10:46:59 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats funny
Centura stable
10:44:46 Centura
I think you guys are a day behind me, it's the 5th for me. So strange having everyone talk about the 4th of July lol
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:42 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th boomer
Lighting Estates
10:42:23 BOOOMER?
Happy 4th of July gng \(^o^)/
Rose Trails Barn
10:42:10 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Can someone like.. Help me make a brand idea for my Arabians?
Rose Trails Barn
10:41:16 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
So pretty
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:35 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I'mma work on my Arabian eee/ppp breeding to get on the leaderboard
Rose Trails Barn
10:40:02 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh! Yippieee!!
Glacier Bay Farms
10:39:52 Arctic Cove Katz
I will start on your art tomorrow afternoon
Rose Trails Barn
10:37:36 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Ok.

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:29 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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Hi!! I'm looking for some honest, down to earth critique on my art. What do I need to improve, what on my art looks good, the whole run down! Gimme your personal thoughts! Tear it apart. ;)

Examples:
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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:32 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 03:18 PM


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Lambo Farms said:
I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!

Thank you!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:14 PM


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I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:57 PM


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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.


Thank you, I really appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to try much harder, especially the shadow since I always seem to forget it lol
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 01:34 PM

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Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 04:47 PM


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White Crown Stables said:
Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to help! :)

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