Horse Eden : Critique Me Please!

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Centura stable

05:30:37 Centura

-HEE Click-
still getting over the shock of managing to breed him

Namerik Stables

05:23:19 Rose

Sorry that must have been confusing it was meant to say I'll end up with a quest that's worse

Namerik Stables

05:22:41 Rose

Because I have so many eee's and above

Namerik Stables

05:22:12 Rose

But I don't want to skip it because knowing my luck I'll end up with

Centura stable

05:21:51 Centura

rose
why?

Namerik Stables

05:21:46 Rose

I have breed a triple p foal with a pattern and the money is just too good to pass up but now I'm starting to regret it

Namerik Stables

05:20:47 Rose

I'm starting to regret breeding my horses in order to get higher ratings now

Centura stable

05:17:44 Centura

she was meant to be a brindle paint lol

Kk shows

05:16:22

Cool

Centura stable

05:11:34 Centura

-Click-
been getting into art, happy with how this art peice went

Kk shows

05:08:43

Me too. My starter stud when I first started playing g would only produce rare coats an he is just a flaxen chestnut frame he produced rare coats on all his offspring for three game years

Centura stable

05:07:44 Centura

-HEE Click-
Should I geld him?

Centura stable

05:06:08 Centura

Kk
I love those studs that just give you great foals

Kk shows

05:05:16

I am so happy with him and what he has produced

Centura stable

05:04:23 Centura

basilisk
it's hard to get out of being broke now

Basilisks Domain

05:04:07

Ooo, that's lovely!

Kk shows

05:03:57

Foal 4 of his falls with the rarity of 1 of 101

Kk shows

05:03:08

-HEE Click-
My freshman SH stallion has given me 3/5 foals with rare coats with a game population of less than 10

Basilisks Domain

05:03:05

I've tried even super cheap prices, but its just not doable. Losing more than I'm making.

Centura stable

05:00:57 Centura

yes same!

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Centura stable

05:30:37 Centura

-HEE Click-
still getting over the shock of managing to breed him

Namerik Stables

05:23:19 Rose

Sorry that must have been confusing it was meant to say I'll end up with a quest that's worse

Namerik Stables

05:22:41 Rose

Because I have so many eee's and above

Namerik Stables

05:22:12 Rose

But I don't want to skip it because knowing my luck I'll end up with

Centura stable

05:21:51 Centura

rose
why?

Namerik Stables

05:21:46 Rose

I have breed a triple p foal with a pattern and the money is just too good to pass up but now I'm starting to regret it

Namerik Stables

05:20:47 Rose

I'm starting to regret breeding my horses in order to get higher ratings now

Centura stable

05:17:44 Centura

she was meant to be a brindle paint lol

Kk shows

05:16:22

Cool

Centura stable

05:11:34 Centura

-Click-
been getting into art, happy with how this art peice went

Kk shows

05:08:43

Me too. My starter stud when I first started playing g would only produce rare coats an he is just a flaxen chestnut frame he produced rare coats on all his offspring for three game years

Centura stable

05:07:44 Centura

-HEE Click-
Should I geld him?

Centura stable

05:06:08 Centura

Kk
I love those studs that just give you great foals

Kk shows

05:05:16

I am so happy with him and what he has produced

Centura stable

05:04:23 Centura

basilisk
it's hard to get out of being broke now

Basilisks Domain

05:04:07

Ooo, that's lovely!

Kk shows

05:03:57

Foal 4 of his falls with the rarity of 1 of 101

Kk shows

05:03:08

-HEE Click-
My freshman SH stallion has given me 3/5 foals with rare coats with a game population of less than 10

Basilisks Domain

05:03:05

I've tried even super cheap prices, but its just not doable. Losing more than I'm making.

Centura stable

05:00:57 Centura

yes same!

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Critique Me Please!

October 9, 2019 02:27 PM

Bridle Rock

Posts: 3730
#462828
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=19625028

I did this pretty girl's art this morning and I tried a new prep and hair technique so I'd love some help on what I can improve on. Be as harsh as needed! I want to improve!

Also, I am not selling this piece, but I'd love to know how much it'd be worth if I did. Thanks!

Edit: Here's another piece I did today, and I'm actually quite proud of it :D

https://i.postimg.cc/7Pmv4YQ6/Untitled83-2.jpg

Edited at October 9, 2019 09:04 PM by BreezieM30w RIDs

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:50 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#463393
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You should be proud!especially the second,the lighting is very pretty

Just depth in the hair,highlights,shadows ect instead of being one block colour

A user called rhiaan on DA has nice turourials (she's amazing btw check her out)

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:56 PM

Sagebrush

Posts: 4704
#463399
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For #1, I would suggest for you to make the hair flow more smoothly, instead of being as strait. For #2, I would try to get rid of the glow around the horse, unless that was the ghost theme you were going for. Overall, really great! I Love the lighting and colours! These are amazing!

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