Shamrock Equines
05:20:14 Crowley
You should have flopped
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Råvn Warmbloods
05:19:10 RAVN/Cherry
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never noticed her eyes haha
Shamrock Equines
05:15:11 Crowley
Quit that. I need to track training.
Band Together
05:14:36 Band / Bandy
Alright, thanks. I just wanted to make sure it was not going to surprise me and my rusty bits waisted
Grimmoire Gardens
05:14:30 Grimm(us)
Myth
And
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Shamrock Equines
05:14:25 Crowley
Nice Grimm
Sunni
05:13:33 
Event ends on March the 1st
Warm hearted
05:13:18 
it was there show page for my geldings winnings
Angels angels
05:12:39 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Bandy
The end of Feb I believe
Grimmoire Gardens
05:12:28 Grimm(us)
Hey Myth
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Shamrock Equines
05:11:40 Crowley
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KPH Equestrian
05:11:37 Rapcoon | Jester
digital paintings are fun :3
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Band Together
05:10:37 Band / Bandy
I meant when
Band Together
05:10:20 Band / Bandy
Anyone know what the event ends?
Shamrock Equines
05:07:28 Crowley
?
Angels angels
05:07:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have no idea what I am looking at..
Warm hearted
05:06:35 
thoughts
Warm hearted
05:06:22 

E >Blu (PPP) SH Gelding 4 1242 2415 0 0
E >spot (PPP) SH Gelding 4 0 69 0 0
E >Chili (PPP) SH Gelding 4 1656 2760 2 2
F > Snow KIssed(SPP) SH Gelding 2 0 0 0 0
Dressage
E >Sunny (EPP) SH Gelding 15 0 132671 0 57
E >Mask (EPP) SH Gelding 6 6555 15775 7 24
E >Rodeo (EPP) SH Gelding 2 0 0 0 0
Jumping
E >Champion (PPP) SH Gelding 7 3956 23330 6 38
E >Moon (PPP) SH Gelding 5 345 9356 0 15
E >Fenrir (PPE) SH Gelding 4 1288 3565 0 5
E >Raindrop (PEW) SH Gelding 2 3381 3381 9 9
E >Bumble Bee(PPP) SH Gelding 2 621 966 1 1
E >Milky (PPP) SH Gelding 2 2829 2829 3 3
E >Voodoo (PPE) SH Gelding 2 0 0 0 0
Angels angels
05:06:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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Throw her to a random dude on RO or be patient for her wk 4?
Shamrock Equines
05:05:44 Crowley
Hello Sexy
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Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:14 PM


Freesia Hill Estate
 
Posts: 6
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So I've just started doing manips and by no means anywhere near perfect, but I thought I'd ask about my first completed piece. It's also a realllly big piece, so I'm already having trouble resizing it without losing most of the quality lol
Here it is:
https://postimg.cc/bZ9t7dLx
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:17 PM

The Golden Horse
 
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It's looks good! however i would proably thicken up the tail where it joins to the body. other than that it looks pretty good! I would ask somewhere between 15-50k for it
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:29 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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this is really well done for somebody new to art!
i have been doing manips on here for a while, so here is some advice <3
i feel like the horse is FAR too contrasted to the background, lower that contrast and up the brightness just a bit.
also if you understand how lighting works and if you are able to do that, it would be really nice to see a litthe bit of a lighter part around the horses back, because you can see in the background the sun shines through.
also it could be really nice to see some ripples in the reflection, you can do this by grabbing the smudge tool and setting it to high, and do some straight, curves or squiggly lines across the reflection to make it seem more realistic.
if you do all that, id say its probably worth 20-45k!
super well done, great job!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:36 PM


Freesia Hill Estate
 
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Thank you so much guys!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:42 PM


Over the Garden Wall
 
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The horse feels really flat/2D and I think adding a little rim lighting or some very soft highlights could really make a difference.
I'm borrowing CC Knabs' piece from the Official Critique thread for an example:
Critique for a Newbie! December 9, 2021 07:32 PM


Wolf Dancer
 
Posts: 3497
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Great job, Starting Bid should be around 10-15k and AB 30k-40k

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