Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 204   Season: Spring   
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Cinquemani
06:58:15 Emani
I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol
Thornwood Manor
06:55:22 Caal
I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃
Cinquemani
06:54:26 Emani
She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol
Triple E
06:52:47 Campbell AD
Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
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Campbell Equestrian
06:51:44 Hails
I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies
Cinquemani
06:51:30 Emani
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Excited about her!
Campbell Equestrian
06:42:36 Hails
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Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!
Rubygem-Chenya
06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Blue
That's gorgeous.
Bluegrass Racing
06:33:50 Blue
so pretty
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Red Willow Stables
06:18:49 
I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it
Kk shows
06:16:47 
Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper
Centura stable
06:16:36 Centura
yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time
Red Willow Stables
06:10:10 
That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol
Centura stable
06:09:19 Centura
I can't do well with either lol.
Red Willow Stables
06:09:04 
Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils
Red Willow Stables
06:08:49 
it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw
Centura stable
06:07:43 Centura
red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol
Red Willow Stables
06:07:03 
Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip
Thunderbolt Park
06:06:18 Bolt
Not sure sorry
Centura stable
06:05:07 Centura
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can I get some feedback on this art? I realise the brindle needs work, but anything else and how can I improve on it?

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Cinquemani
06:58:15 Emani
I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol
Thornwood Manor
06:55:22 Caal
I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃
Cinquemani
06:54:26 Emani
She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol
Triple E
06:52:47 Campbell AD
Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
-HEE Click-
Campbell Equestrian
06:51:44 Hails
I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies
Cinquemani
06:51:30 Emani
-HEE Click-

Excited about her!
Campbell Equestrian
06:42:36 Hails
-HEE Click-

Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!
Rubygem-Chenya
06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Blue
That's gorgeous.
Bluegrass Racing
06:33:50 Blue
so pretty
-HEE Click-
Red Willow Stables
06:18:49 
I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it
Kk shows
06:16:47 
Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper
Centura stable
06:16:36 Centura
yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time
Red Willow Stables
06:10:10 
That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol
Centura stable
06:09:19 Centura
I can't do well with either lol.
Red Willow Stables
06:09:04 
Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils
Red Willow Stables
06:08:49 
it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw
Centura stable
06:07:43 Centura
red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol
Red Willow Stables
06:07:03 
Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip
Thunderbolt Park
06:06:18 Bolt
Not sure sorry
Centura stable
06:05:07 Centura
-Click-
can I get some feedback on this art? I realise the brindle needs work, but anything else and how can I improve on it?

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What tier? Critique my work, please! January 20, 2024 09:56 AM


Sungold Eventing
 
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Hiya!! I have started to get back into art recently, and this is my most recent completed piece.
I am sort of looking for some advice/guidance/critique on it - feel free to be nit-picky and ruthless, I need to know my weak points! I am also looking for pricing/tier advice. Right now, I would probably put myself at low/middle tier 2, as I am not the best at grounding etc. but let me know your thoughts!
And for pricing, this piece was recently sold for 350k, I don't know if that was a good price bracket or not?
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Thank you in advance <3
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Edit: I have just realised I have forgotten to fix the tail, I'll do that later xD

Edited at January 20, 2024 10:02 AM by Sungold Eventing
What tier? Critique my work, please! January 20, 2024 10:05 AM


Zomb

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Oooo I love this piece.

If you can make art consistently like this, you'd 100% be in T1. I'd happily pay 250-300k for a horse Avi - 350-450k for all cuts.
What tier? Critique my work, please! January 20, 2024 10:10 AM


Amethyst Ranch
 
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I agree with Zomb <3 Would definitely order art from you if you open a shop:D
What tier? Critique my work, please! January 20, 2024 10:17 AM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Zomb said:
Oooo I love this piece.

If you can make art consistently like this, you'd 100% be in T1. I'd happily pay 250-300k for a horse Avi - 350-450k for all cuts.


That's the biggest thing-consistency. If this one came out really well like this but the others... not so much, i'd say T2. However, if you can consistently make art like this, T1 would suit you. Another thing is complex and happy patterns, it looks like you've got tobiano down really well, but how well can you do sabinos like this or this? Or even appy patterns like this? What I'm asking is if you opened a T1 art shop, how confident in your ability to do whatever patterns customers throw at you?
What tier? Critique my work, please! January 20, 2024 10:56 AM


Sungold Eventing
 
Posts: 791
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Thank you Zomb and Echo <3 opening a shop is definitely on my mind once I have done a few more practice pieces!

Zomb said:
Oooo I love this piece.

If you can make art consistently like this, you'd 100% be in T1. I'd happily pay 250-300k for a horse Avi - 350-450k for all cuts.



Amethyst Ranch said:
I agree with Zomb <3 Would definitely order art from you if you open a shop:D


I agree, consistence is key! I think (/hope) that I am fairly consistent, however I may hover around T2 just to make sure that I am confident on my pattern abilities. I am fairly confident on sabino, however peacock is not my strong point!

KPH Equestrian said:

Zomb said:
Oooo I love this piece.

If you can make art consistently like this, you'd 100% be in T1. I'd happily pay 250-300k for a horse Avi - 350-450k for all cuts.


That's the biggest thing-consistency. If this one came out really well like this but the others... not so much, i'd say T2. However, if you can consistently make art like this, T1 would suit you. Another thing is complex and happy patterns, it looks like you've got tobiano down really well, but how well can you do sabinos like this or this? Or even appy patterns like this? What I'm asking is if you opened a T1 art shop, how confident in your ability to do whatever patterns customers throw at you?


What tier? Critique my work, please! January 20, 2024 12:20 PM


Tranquility
 
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One thing right off the bat, although I do love this piece, to me the horse is green. It has way greener tones than the bg. The bg hues are very blue. To match the horse to the bg better, take a brush and a new layer and color over the horse with a color from the bg. Then go and either 1. Overlay it, 2. Soft light it, or 3 hard light if. And then just play with the opacity of those layers.
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If the horse is still green and off, it's probable best to play around with the color balance again.
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Oh, and that, is just me being nitpicky. :D

Edited at January 20, 2024 12:21 PM by Tranquility
What tier? Critique my work, please! January 21, 2024 08:17 AM


Sungold Eventing
 
Posts: 791
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Thank you!! I agree, I tried to change the hue of the horse but I think I chose more of a greeny-blue than a colour matching the background!
What tier? Critique my work, please! January 22, 2024 11:06 AM


DaisyMeadowEventing
 
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Love this piece! Personally I'd start out as high tier 2, but you are very close to tier 1.

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