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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please!

September 21, 2024 10:13 PM

KPH Equestrian

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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.

Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>

Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian

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September 26, 2024 04:15 PM

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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:

Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm

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September 26, 2024 07:17 PM

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Clover Realm said:

I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:

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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD

Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3

Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes

I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3

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October 5, 2024 03:25 PM

Dash and Duchess

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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3

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October 5, 2024 08:29 PM

KPH Equestrian

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Dash and Duchess said:

maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3

like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)

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Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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