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Stable set contest
900k prize.
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WWW Stalion 1m
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Stained glass horses
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MakeEm Fancy
11:30:02 Ally 💜
Int glass 90k
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Sunshinez
10:58:22 
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Come get you some colorful KNN, I am cleaning out my barn.
I've been away for a while and now I am back to cause chaos in the KNN world.
Alpine Acres
10:21:57 Lily
PEE colts and fillies, all under 400ebs sb!
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KPH Equestrian
10:19:41 Jake From State Farm
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Sunni
09:42:45 Sunni bunny
Wanted broodmares with the pearl coat.
Need them for a quest.
Willing to pay a decent amount to use them.
Thank you.
Tobiano Lady
09:08:44 *Mr. Krabs*
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E brave PON mares for 1k!
Horse Haven Stables
09:04:35 HHS⎹ Lyla
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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Port Royal Equines
08:54:47 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
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PPP+ Braves and Geldings at auction. 1k start. Please consider bidding. They will be FRed at RO.
pandemoniu_m
08:49:56 pheezy
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—I/SH COLOR—
-EWE/EEE Colts
10k or 3k respectively
-PEW Mare 3k
-PEP/PEE Color Mares/Fillies
900 or 1k respectively
—ISH AD+BRAVERY—
-PEE-W Dunskin Mare, 40k
-EEE-W Grullo Frost Appy Mare, 160k
-UNBRED PEP-W Dun Overo Mare, 22k
(Compare to other PPP+ Bravery Mares on the market!)
—TB COLOR—
-PPP Zz Dd Toto Oo Filly 900

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 Cozmic Elite
11:51:09 Z
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Stable set contest
900k prize.
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WWW Stalion 1m
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Stained glass horses
Movement
Speed
Intelligence
MakeEm Fancy
11:30:02 Ally 💜
Int glass 90k
-HEE Click-
Sunshinez
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-HEE Click-

Come get you some colorful KNN, I am cleaning out my barn.
I've been away for a while and now I am back to cause chaos in the KNN world.
Alpine Acres
10:21:57 Lily
PEE colts and fillies, all under 400ebs sb!
-HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
10:19:41 Jake From State Farm
-HEE Click-
Sunni
09:42:45 Sunni bunny
Wanted broodmares with the pearl coat.
Need them for a quest.
Willing to pay a decent amount to use them.
Thank you.
Tobiano Lady
09:08:44 *Mr. Krabs*
-HEE Click-
E brave PON mares for 1k!
Horse Haven Stables
09:04:35 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Port Royal Equines
08:54:47 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
-HEE Click-
PPP+ Braves and Geldings at auction. 1k start. Please consider bidding. They will be FRed at RO.
pandemoniu_m
08:49:56 pheezy
-HEE Click-

—I/SH COLOR—
-EWE/EEE Colts
10k or 3k respectively
-PEW Mare 3k
-PEP/PEE Color Mares/Fillies
900 or 1k respectively
—ISH AD+BRAVERY—
-PEE-W Dunskin Mare, 40k
-EEE-W Grullo Frost Appy Mare, 160k
-UNBRED PEP-W Dun Overo Mare, 22k
(Compare to other PPP+ Bravery Mares on the market!)
—TB COLOR—
-PPP Zz Dd Toto Oo Filly 900

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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


 KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


 KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


 Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


 KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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