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I accidentally inverted the wing colors and actually loved it lol. Be as harsh as you need, I really want to improve.

okay so i.love.this!

i honestly dont think there is that much to critique on. just a couple thing i want to say though.

-first, i think the top half of the tail looks pretty thin, so maybe increade the volume of that.

-i think the mane would look nice a little longer and more flowy to match the long look of the tail, maybe add some more flyaway strands too.

body prep looks good and i especially love what you have dot with the ripples and the reflection.

pricing wise id say 100-200k

Nevermind :)

I really love this Zomb! The only thing is that the tail looks like a blob without much detail.

Thank you!
And yes I agree XD I'm still learning tails >.<

Practiced my mane and tails, any tips? Be harsh, picky, whatever (:

(was based off a laying down horse, thats why its an odd angle

Got another one out! Would love thoughts on it! :D

Put on your seatbelts, this is going to be another long one.
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@Apex on the chestnut in water

Just wow, absolutely stunning and I would snatch this in a heartbeat. I genuinely had difficulty finding anything I could nag you about. The only suggestion I have for you is the ripples around the legs. As opposed to having single ripples around the pairs of legs, five each leg it's own individual ripples that overlap and interact with each other. Branching off of that, I would reccomend rounding where the legs meet the water as opposed to having it just cut off. Please please let me know if planning on selling <3

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@Black Rose Stables

Its hard to give critique on this considering it's a silhouette. All I can really reccomend would be to make the strands in the tail less 'clumpy' with more individual strands.
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@Zomb on the big ol' chonk

Keep practicing on the tail, but the mane strands look very nice. I would reccomend making sure the mane has highlights and shadows like the body of the horse. Side note from that, make sure the hair casts a shadow on the horse.
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@Pegasus

Im just going to quickly glaze over these because of the sheer volume of pieces ;)

Galaxy/Cedar's Eventers avatar: I like to see that you're drawing manes, try using decreasingly smaller brushes for each lighter color. A shadow of the hair on the horse would add some more realism. Not sure what the diver in the neck is toward state far right part of the mane.
Flaxen chestnut in mountains: Pose works nicely, same thing on the mane, try to cut down on the fuzziness of the horse if possible.
Rearing black horse: lighting is really off, try making the horse significantly darker with the darkest shadows being on the bottom edges on the horse. Try to add some curve to the mane as opposed to just straight. That will help add a more natural look.
Ocean horse: I see that you decreased the contrast of the horse to make it fit the background. I don't think this worked in your favor. You lost a lot of detail that can only be regained with some work on muscling and body prep. I like the improvement in the tail.

Flaxen chestnut paint: This is your best mane and tail yet, whit patches look very nice. Maybe add more strands in the tail. Other than that, blur the shadow significantly and place it directly under the horse.
Hair: I like what you're doing using different shades and also adding wave but if the strands are going to be wavy then the base should also be wavy.
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@RRR

The overall fantasy of the scene and the horse work very well together. I like what you're doing with the body prep and color change. I'd work on lighting l, just noticing that the light source is directly behind the horse so the parts of the horse closest to the viewer should be darkest.

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@CC

Hot darn. That's gorgeous beyond all belief. Gorgeous mane. Gorgeous color change. Gorgeous body prep. Gorgeous details. I kind of wish the accents around the feet were emitting light in the horse and grass but I love it either way. I can tell that you took a photo in the daylight and turned the brightness way down. At first glance, this works. Upon closer inspection, not so much. I'd reccomend cutting out a starry sky and incorporating it instead or painting over the clouds and adding some stars. Please let me know of planning on auctioning/selling <3

Thank you Gem! I hadn't even thought about the sky. XD II'll keep that in mind for future pieces! :D

No problem! <3