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Ravenwood Farm
04:17:05 
Ooo nice colt! I'm gonna be eyeing that one when it's time for wk7s, maybe he matches one of my girls👀
Aurora's Fields
04:07:12 Jenifael
Thank you! I'm very happy about this one! It's an unexpected WWW too
Sunfeather
04:05:55 SF
Very nice week four on that one, Aurora :D
Armageddon
04:01:57 Arm
Ooooh 👀
Aurora's Fields
04:01:19 Jenifael
-HEE Click-

Hell yeah
Angel Haven
04:00:13 
Oh, okay
Bug in a Rug
03:59:53 Bug | Flea | KPH
angel
no, she's PrlPrl. Pearl is recessive, so prl mean they do have it
Angel Haven
03:59:13 
This girl pared with the right stallion could have an Apricot yes?
Armageddon
03:58:21 Arm
Grimm
Nice!
Wicca Wilds
03:58:01 Grimm(us)
ToTo and 3 up week 3 <-<
Armageddon
03:57:31 Arm
Cute Grimm.
Grimmoire Gardens
03:57:00 Grimm(us)
Myth
Lookie
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Armageddon
03:56:55 Arm
Sending her to a friend for training lol
KPH Equestrian
03:56:09 Rapcoon | Jester
ooh ToTo *-*
KPH Equestrian
03:56:02 Rapcoon | Jester
omg mythy x'D
Armageddon
03:55:27 Arm
-HEE Click-
Armageddon
03:54:44 Arm
My SDs aren't trained...
KPH Equestrian
03:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester
oop mythy lol. that's ok, my SD jumpers are a week behind, so I too am on wk3s there 😞
Armageddon
03:52:26 Arm
On the account ls I actually bothered with this month...

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Ravenwood Farm
04:17:05 
Ooo nice colt! I'm gonna be eyeing that one when it's time for wk7s, maybe he matches one of my girls👀
Aurora's Fields
04:07:12 Jenifael
Thank you! I'm very happy about this one! It's an unexpected WWW too
Sunfeather
04:05:55 SF
Very nice week four on that one, Aurora :D
Armageddon
04:01:57 Arm
Ooooh 👀
Aurora's Fields
04:01:19 Jenifael
-HEE Click-

Hell yeah
Angel Haven
04:00:13 
Oh, okay
Bug in a Rug
03:59:53 Bug | Flea | KPH
angel
no, she's PrlPrl. Pearl is recessive, so prl mean they do have it
Angel Haven
03:59:13 
This girl pared with the right stallion could have an Apricot yes?
Armageddon
03:58:21 Arm
Grimm
Nice!
Wicca Wilds
03:58:01 Grimm(us)
ToTo and 3 up week 3 <-<
Armageddon
03:57:31 Arm
Cute Grimm.
Grimmoire Gardens
03:57:00 Grimm(us)
Myth
Lookie
-HEE Click-
Armageddon
03:56:55 Arm
Sending her to a friend for training lol
KPH Equestrian
03:56:09 Rapcoon | Jester
ooh ToTo *-*
KPH Equestrian
03:56:02 Rapcoon | Jester
omg mythy x'D
Armageddon
03:55:27 Arm
-HEE Click-
Armageddon
03:54:44 Arm
My SDs aren't trained...
KPH Equestrian
03:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester
oop mythy lol. that's ok, my SD jumpers are a week behind, so I too am on wk3s there 😞
Armageddon
03:52:26 Arm
On the account ls I actually bothered with this month...

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The Official Art Critique Forum March 28, 2021 03:35 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:
Apprehensive about posting this here because I think I probably could've done better. But I feel like I've hit a wall here and would like some pointers.


I LOVE the body prep you've done here!! The eyes and mane, beautiful! Great job! I especially like how shiny the hoof is :D
The only thing I would do differently here is blur the bg directly behind the horse and a bit to the left
Purple.png
What /I/ would do (please feel free to do as you like):
Red - blur the most, I use the PS gaussian blur filter at like 2-3
Blue - blur less, I do 1-1.5
Teal - hardly blur, At this point, I use the blur tool at 35(ish) strength and play around until It looks right.
This should bring more attention to the horse and bring the piece together nicely
I hope this helps! Poke me if you have any questions :D
The Official Art Critique Forum March 29, 2021 10:32 AM


Zomb
 
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Im looking for some guidance with this tail, I'm really struggling! Any sort of pointers would help also!
Be cruel 🥺
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 04:29 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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It's gorgeous, Zomb, but maybe add some more definition to the strands of the mane? It looks flat and all one color at the moment.
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 04:33 PM


Zomb
 
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Cherry River Elites said:
It's gorgeous, Zomb, but maybe add some more definition to the strands of the mane? It looks flat and all one color at the moment.


Ah yes at that time it wasn't finished. This is it finished now

well the horse Avi cut
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 04:35 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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Yes that looks a lot better <3
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 05:45 PM


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Rumble Team
 
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I would do something like this
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/24/ec/08/24ec082d8196c3e0590f509ca873d867.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum April 10, 2021 08:13 PM


Gem
 
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Finally getting back into this XD
First off, would love any help you can provide about drawing fire. I'm pretty happy with this but I know there is always room to improve.
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@Night Shadow Stables
Looking at the kind of spooky black horse in the forest: I genuinely really like this piece. It's very smooth, clean, and aesthetically pleasing. The colors work well together as does the perspective. The first thing I would recommend taking a look at is the eyes. Front on eyes are the absolute hardest. The tricky part is making is look like the horse isn't looking in two directions at the same time. This can be adjusted by playing with iris placement. Secondly, ditch the thick white lines around the horse's butt and legs. I do agree that there should be stronger highlights there but not in that form. Add a shadow underneath the mane and horse and also a highlight to the left eye (horse's right). Also want to mention, this is me being very picky. I genuinely love this piece and definitely want to call dibs on it if you every consider selling <3
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@CC
This is probably one of my favorite pieces you've ever done. Body prep is wonderful along with the markings. Adore the jewelry. You're making my job hard and I love it. The highlights are too strong to be realistic but I think it works in this situation. The mane looks wonderful and very realistic but something feels slightly off about the tail even though I can't quite pinpoint what. Getting really picky here, make sure you are consistent when blurring the body for the prep. I can tell which places are more or less blurred. Overall, an incredible piece <3
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@Zomb
I don't honestly feel like this piece works. I like the wildness of the mane and tail and I like the way the stock sources fit together but... the lighting is completely throwing me off. You chose both horse and wing stock that already had strong highlights and shadows. These can't be converted up simply by lightly shading over them with black or such. If you want to use a stock image with high contrast, you make need to actually relapsing parts of the horse with the color of the horse's body and then add your shadows and highlights using darker and lighter shades of the same color. Same with the wings, the lighting is way off, the left wing especially. Make sure to be more consistent when blurring the horse in body prep, otherwise it's possible to pick out where you blurred more or less. The front legs aren't really working for me either. Besides lighting work, a clipping layer + a few swipes of an airbrush with the colors of the background would go a long way. Same with the face and stomach. Grounding - use a smaller brush to imitate the individual strands of grass. The horse itself is neatly cut out so I do commend you on that. Very fun horse pose, the piece just needs a little work <3
Edit: I'm going back and looking at the differences between the full image you posted and the horse avatar. (The previous notes are for the horse avi) I can see that you did a lot of blurring both with with horse and the background between the two pieces and I don't think that worked in your favor. I like the addition of the color on the front legs from the first image but it needs just a little more as I mentioned above.

Edited at April 10, 2021 08:16 PM by Gem
The Official Art Critique Forum April 10, 2021 08:52 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Thank you so much Gem!
The Official Art Critique Forum April 14, 2021 05:21 PM


Savannah Stables
 
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This is still a WIP since I don't feel like drawing on hair yet, but any critique is appreciated!
The Official Art Critique Forum April 14, 2021 05:41 PM


Gem
 
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@Savannah
First off, the eye is not equine. It genuinely looks like it belongs on a leopard or something 😜
If that's what you intended then you nailed it but if not, make the iris smaller/pupil bigger/highlight bigger. I like the smoothness of the body, grounding is nice. The only other part I'd look at is the muzzle. There's a sort of brown stripe on it that I don't think really works. I recommend picking a single color <3

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