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Cassa Belle said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvR6qWRR/Untitled18-20191106181912.png
:D
For this piece, I would recommend bringing a light source in (the lightning provides one, so you can play off that) and highlight parts of the horse that are affected by the lighting. As it is, the horse is dark and a little hard to make out. You can fix this by adding small highlights or lightening the whole piece a bit to bring the horse to the center of attention. Personally, I would add *light* highlights to the nose, neck, and *slightly* stronger highlights to the back, and a few on the tail. |
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BreezieM30w RIDs said:
Oak valley said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvNLcD60/Untitled127.png
My first attempt at lineart, thoughts??
It looks good! Personally I would use a blue tool so that the shading is not so harsh. Also, be sure to clean up afterwards using an eraser. It looks a bit messy since the coloring goes outside the lines.
Thank you! Lol I was being a bit lazy by not cleaning it up. :) |
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https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg
Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD |
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BreezieM30w RIDs said:
https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg
Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD
Nice composition! The first thing I see is off is the lighting. The direction of the light don't match on the horse and on the background. You can fix it easily by mirroring either the horse or the bg. Also try to add more flow to the mane and tail, those look a bit stiff. |
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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=17&t=33061 Looking for some help please <3 (i haven't forgotten. About critique just doing some stuff atm, will get to them ASAP) |
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Yellowtail Ranch said:
https://i.ibb.co/ngcFyyG/Kia.jpg
I use ibis paint but any help/advice would be appreciated. :D
I used this image for reference to the pose but not the color. The color was all me as well as painting. This was my first time doing something like this but it was very refreshing from the normal manips so I plan on making more.
https://www.deviantart.com/blissfully-blind/art/Horse-Stock-53-162205611
I didn't like how the original mane and tail was so I brought them to more attention. I don't exactly like the super wispy mane so I just did the basic mane/tail if ya know what I mean. I did the markings after I shaded and highlighted which I wholly regretted. Lol. It was so much extra shading/highlighting. Yes this horse is supposed to be mostly realistic with the exception of markings.
Is there anything you don't like about it? Anything you love? What should I try to improve? Any tips and tricks that could help? I do plan on making more only this time with more realistic mane/tail. Any way to paint manes/tails?
Thankyou in advance! :D
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https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png
Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks |
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https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg
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Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg
Thoughts??
I like it :) The quality could be improved but that probably isn't your mistake. Also, the fairy lights seem to appear from nowhere. Maybe make them into a ring around the horse's neck? |
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Tanglewood said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png
Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks
It looks good. I would give the horse a more Orange ish lighting or over shade if you know what I mean. |
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