Mythological
05:43:28 Crowley | Myth
Honestly I'd skip.
Clover Stud
05:42:33 Pugs
ItÂ’s a quest Iv still got it there but donÂ’t think I can face it haha.
Mythological
05:40:13 Crowley | Myth
Ru
They were refering to a new quest.
Sagruesal
05:36:58 Ru
Clover
Why capture, there's plenty on sale
Golden Crest
05:23:37 | Eve
and apricot *-*
Golden Crest
05:23:29 | Eve
He may be an ASS but at least he is brindle and premium bravery -HEE Click- <3
Mythological
05:09:55 Crowley | Myth
Unlikely xD
Mythological
05:08:02 Crowley | Myth
Only 37 people on >.>
Whitewater Nursery
05:07:34 
lol you should go sleep maybe?
Mythological
05:06:47 Crowley | Myth
Severely sleep deprived.
Whitewater Nursery
05:05:51 
ohh you miss readed okay ^^
Mythological
05:05:34 Crowley | Myth
Sorry my bad
Whitewater Nursery
05:05:00 
im not selling tho just wanted to show
Mythological
05:05:00 Crowley | Myth
Ah shit miss read that
Mythological
05:04:16 Crowley | Myth
This ain't sales.
Whitewater Nursery
05:03:32 
got this gorg brindle filly off action -HEE Click-
Clover Stud
03:51:29 Pugs
Capture a horse with WC in dressage omg I think that will take all my Ebs trying haha ..pass
Utmostroxy
03:39:20 Cassie
ive found if you can gather heaps of PPP geldings to show it gathers money quicker. Geldings train faster than stallions.
Utmostroxy
03:38:17 Cassie
luna, what are your plans/goals for the game?
Lunalovegood
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Sorry this is all new to me
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The Official Art Critique Forum May 4, 2021 09:59 PM


Caprina Springs
 
Posts: 877
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Cold Grape Knabbies said:

Tear it apart!!

Pre-made Auction Piece

(I'd also like to add how much I love all the new sooty pieces! X3)



Damn it's been a minute since I've been on here.

This is amazing Knab!! I love the dramatic lighting, the windswept hair, the lovely shadow/highlight work. just *chef kiss* magnique!

One thing that I think can be tampered but isn't really anything major is the shadow on the sand, I feel like it should be blurred or kind of wiggly looking against the sand since the surface is kinda bumpy and uneven in a lot of places. So, the shadow would follow that sort of irregular shape as well since you're looking at the shadow from a distance. Now, if you were the horse looking down, the shadow would look like any other shadow. This is where the complicated little shit called perception comes in lol

Edited at May 4, 2021 10:00 PM by Caprina Springs
The Official Art Critique Forum May 4, 2021 10:06 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
Posts: 926
#884136
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Caprina Springs said:

Cold Grape Knabbies said:

Tear it apart!!

Pre-made Auction Piece

(I'd also like to add how much I love all the new sooty pieces! X3)



Damn it's been a minute since I've been on here.

This is amazing Knab!! I love the dramatic lighting, the windswept hair, the lovely shadow/highlight work. just *chef kiss* magnique!

One thing that I think can be tampered but isn't really anything major is the shadow on the sand, I feel like it should be blurred or kind of wiggly looking against the sand since the surface is kinda bumpy and uneven in a lot of places. So, the shadow would follow that sort of irregular shape as well since you're looking at the shadow from a distance. Now, if you were the horse looking down, the shadow would look like any other shadow. This is where the complicated little shit called perception comes in lol


Ahh thank you! I did try to make the shadow a bit more bumply than I usually would, but I guess not enough XD I've always struggled with shadows as they get longer and shorter. They're horrible!
The Official Art Critique Forum May 5, 2021 03:49 PM

Rocky Creek Ranch
 
Posts: 1656
#884315
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Critique on this?
The Official Art Critique Forum May 6, 2021 09:38 PM


Red River Ranch
 
Posts: 1890
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I recently tried out some new methods and I'd love some critiques on this piece.
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The Official Art Critique Forum May 7, 2021 12:16 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
Posts: 926
#884865
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Playing with perspective and tried a new mane/tail technique that I really enjoyed!
Sorry, it's not the picture, but my phone refuses to just let me copy the image 😂

Palomino (closer to buckskin) Art

The Official Art Critique Forum May 23, 2021 09:38 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
Posts: 1000
#889076
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Be as harsh as you like, this is my first time trying a manip instead of painting the horse myself <3
Also did the background myself

Edited at May 23, 2021 09:39 PM by Cherry River Elites
The Official Art Critique Forum May 24, 2021 01:30 PM


HMH Reality Check

Rumble Team
 
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I'm going a few pages back, as I have been noticing a lot of posting and not so much feedback!
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Country Farms Equine
Not sure if you used a line, or drew it your self. Looks pretty good. I would personally clean up the lines, and thin them out a bit. Adding details like an eye to the horse would make it much better. Looking at the colors, changing the markings to an off white looks more realistic, as well as adding a background. I would have also colored the saddle and the horses nether regions.
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Misty Steams
You should be proud. Body prep looks good. Try adding some depth to the hair with a shadow or multiple layers (I would also recommend a different brush as yours is quite blocky). The glitter(?) looks awesome, You added some grey drawing at the bottom, not sure if that is a shadow (?), I would duplicate the horse layer, make it black, and then use perspective to please it under the horse, then blue it and lower the opacity until your satisfied.
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CC
I have no critique, I don't what to do about the pumpkin, but everything else is beautiful, the lens flare and the highlighting, it's perfect, the only thing is maybe trying less straight strnags in your hair.
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Wildfield
Im sorry, I can no longer see the image.
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Apex
This looks amazing, I love your art. (You need to open an art shop!) The lighting is impressive, as well as the body prep. Live the background. The only think that stands out the me, is you choose a purple based hair color on a blue and brown based horse. I would have gone with a blue or reddish based hair color and it would blend better.
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CC
This piece is very... Green, lol. It looks nice, I like the more painted approach, I personally don't think the eye fits into the whole picture, and I would have liked a little more highlights, as the horse overall, is quite dark.
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Zomb
I love the overall theme of this image, it looks very elegant. The hair looks amazing, I love the neck piece, the crown seems a bit awkward, her muzzle is a little overly pink. The dapples are great, her markings fit in, a little smudging on her hooves would have finished it, and I did notice a speck of unerased background by the extended from pastern.
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Night Shadow Stables
This looks really nice, good job on the sooty. I have no tips, you aced it! Everything looks incredible.
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CC
This piece looks really good, the hair and lighting is amazing, the only thing that stands out the me is the strange coloring, the muzzle is black, the face down to the base of the neck is brown, the body is black and fades to brown legs, maybe that's just the stock, or the lighting, but it definitely catches your eye.
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Dev
You over smudged a little bit, and have lost some of the muscling, your hair looks good though, nice depth. I like the stock pairing. A darker shadow would have been nice, and there is some original background left around the horse.
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RRR
The horse looks amazing, I think he should be sunk in the water a bit more, the hair has nice color but is a little straight, try adding movement.
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CC
The only thing I have is the overly blue markings, the rest of it is perfection!
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Cherry River
That looks awdoy, nice hair, gorgeous background. I would definitely keep up on your painting skills though, The shading and body prep looks very clean.
The Official Art Critique Forum May 24, 2021 01:51 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
Posts: 926
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Thank you, lots, HMH! ^^

I have this... "adoptable" kind of thing that I drew and painted from scratch. It's the first actual thing I've drawn since my cheap drawing tablet took a crap XD No tablet used, just a mouse. I plan on doing another one later on, on a bigger canvas so I can mess around more with line variation! :D

Mod edit: image removed - art is uncredited, and you cannot use images that pop up on a google image search as reference.

This was my reference: https://www.google.com/search?q=are+palominos+a+horses+breed&rlz=1CAEOEW_enUS919US919&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiK8c72_eLwAhU8JDQIHSJHCs8Q_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=1366&bih=617&safe=active&ssui=on#imgrc=-GTtdfg59eEZyM

I had also used a lot of anatomy references. - And I'm now quite sad, as I realize the horse's body is too short :') -


Edited at May 24, 2021 02:06 PM by Stormsong Manor
The Official Art Critique Forum May 24, 2021 02:15 PM


HMH Reality Check

Rumble Team
 
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CC Knabbstruppers said:

Thank you, lots, HMH! ^^

I have this... "adoptable" kind of thing that I drew and painted from scratch. It's the first actual thing I've drawn since my cheap drawing tablet took a crap XD No tablet used, just a mouse. I plan on doing another one later on, on a bigger canvas so I can mess around more with line variation! :D

Mod edit: image removed - art is uncredited, and you cannot use images that pop up on a google image search as reference.

This was my reference: https://www.google.com/search?q=are+palominos+a+horses+breed&rlz=1CAEOEW_enUS919US919&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiK8c72_eLwAhU8JDQIHSJHCs8Q_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=1366&bih=617&safe=active&ssui=on#imgrc=-GTtdfg59eEZyM

I had also used a lot of anatomy references. - And I'm now quite sad, as I realize the horse's body is too short :') -



Looks cool, wish I could see it.
Edit, SOUNDS cool.

Edited at May 24, 2021 02:15 PM by HMH Reality Check
The Official Art Critique Forum May 25, 2021 11:57 PM


Barkers Run
 
Posts: 16
#889662
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Im on the fence with this piece.
very blury, mane and tail are not the greatest either,
I also love the rearing horse and feel ive gotten him to match the background quiet well, but the lighting just isnt right?or the exact position of the horse..
I know it needs improvment so please help me XD

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