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-HEE Click- She’s so pretty
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all tobi, all 2 up wk3, all pretty
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ok!
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A HEE breeding club, I can pm details!
Barbury Estates
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what kind of club?
Foal Me Once Farms
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Hmm,
would anyone here like to be a part of or help manage a club if I was to create one?
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Foal Me Once Farms
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phew I need to clean my barns out I'm running out of space. .
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We were just talking about getting a speaker for it when it decided to work 🤦🏻‍♀️
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How's it going??
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03:07:03 Tobi 👻
Heyo Myth!!
Nightfall Dressage
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-HEE Click- She’s so pretty
Mythological
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Hey Tobi!
Fire_Rescue
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oh
Nightfall Dressage
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Fire
You need a premium membership
Angel Haven
02:58:48 Hay Hay
Fire, you have to have a premium account.
Fire_Rescue
02:55:44 
How do I make a club?
Tobiano Lady
02:55:08 Tobi 👻
all tobi, all 2 up wk3, all pretty
Tobiano Lady
02:54:27 Tobi 👻
the audacity to give me 4 XC boys :/
Foal Me Once Farms
02:38:26 Roan🦋⃤
Amelia,

I sent a pm!
Barbury Estates
02:28:28 Amelia
ok!
Foal Me Once Farms
02:23:58 Roan🦋⃤
A HEE breeding club, I can pm details!
Barbury Estates
02:23:39 Amelia
what kind of club?
Foal Me Once Farms
02:22:51 Roan🦋⃤
Hmm,
would anyone here like to be a part of or help manage a club if I was to create one?
MakeEm Fancy
02:18:43 Ally 💜
Total Horses : 1111

Hmmmm
Foal Me Once Farms
02:17:45 Roan🦋⃤
phew I need to clean my barns out I'm running out of space. .
MakeEm Fancy
02:17:17 Ally 💜
We were just talking about getting a speaker for it when it decided to work 🤦🏻‍♀️
Angels angels
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Ally
Lol we love technology
MakeEm Fancy
02:13:36 Ally 💜
Our tv speaker went out and yesterday it randomly decided to start working again 🙃

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The Official Art Critique Forum February 26, 2022 10:43 PM


Tranquility
 
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So, right off the bat I think the lighting needs to be stronger on the horse. On the edges, you could possibly paint a single line to highlight the edge of the horse and just make the lighting stronger in general.
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The mane of the horse is confusing my eyes, sort of. Is it supposed to be a braid? Anyways, pretty, but I would thicken the overall mane to lay across the shoulder better.
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The jewelry lighting almost looks inversed or something to me, it fits the overall lighting though and it your style, so I love it! I would just try to make the jewelry on the face stand out more against the white face.
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Your markings are really realistic and tie in great with the horse and overall piece!
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Overall, lovely job and I would love a piece from you someday! 😊
The Official Art Critique Forum February 26, 2022 10:51 PM


Silent Hill Equines
 
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Critique on my latest piece?
Any long term changes I need to make for future pieces?
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 03:05 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:09 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.


out of everything, i'd say the hair needs the mos the long lighting wise, the ends are very light when they shouldn't be. when shading, treat the hair liek the body. Use add layers around the edges of the hair for lighting, ESPECIALLY with harsh down/back lighting, and make the ' middle ' of the hair darker compared to the edges.
Id also make the feet a bit darker, not by too much though. But make sure to leave a bit of unshaded area on the right hand side of the feet for this pice, since it is sort of back lighted.
something not lighting related, but try not to blend the horse out as much, your body prep is beautiful but i feel like you may have lost some details
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:12 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Silent Hill Equines said:
Critique on my latest piece?
Any long term changes I need to make for future pieces?


this lighting on thsi is really good! it's one of the first things that i noticed, which is good because it's eye catching, i love it <3
as for critique, your hair is quite smoother out, rather than the layers and shades within the hair standing out. Hair in manip should look relatively shady if that makes sense? there are plenty of tutorials in the forums and on youtube as far as hair is concerned, but over all i'd say you ahve real potential to make some gorgeous pieces :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:15 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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anyways, i'm back again :D plead click on this peice because it's huge... like 3200x4000 and 85MB huge. And make sure to zoom because i need to be judged super hard. i don't care if it sounds harsh lmao i want it to be harsh

Edited at March 1, 2022 06:01 PM by Bermuda Estate
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 05:35 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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Thank you! I'll work on each of these suggestions and post the edited piece here.

Bermuda Estate said:

Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.


out of everything, i'd say the hair needs the mos the long lighting wise, the ends are very light when they shouldn't be. when shading, treat the hair liek the body. Use add layers around the edges of the hair for lighting, ESPECIALLY with harsh down/back lighting, and make the ' middle ' of the hair darker compared to the edges.
Id also make the feet a bit darker, not by too much though. But make sure to leave a bit of unshaded area on the right hand side of the feet for this pice, since it is sort of back lighted.
something not lighting related, but try not to blend the horse out as much, your body prep is beautiful but i feel like you may have lost some details


The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:20 PM


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Rumble Team
 
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Bermuda Estate said:
anyways, i'm back again :D plead click on this peice because it's huge... like 3200x4000 and 85MB huge. And make sure to zoom because i need to be judged super hard. i don't care if it sounds harsh lmao i want it to be harsh


1. Is this piece already spoken for? If not, can I buy it from you?
2. The body prep is beautiful, the horse looks a bit bright compared to the BG, but I do really like the glowy golden horse. Your hair as always is super pretty. The lighting on it looks a bit bright, there's not much highlights in the BG. Your markings are flawless.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:29 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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aww thankyou :) i've dimmed the lighting about to match the BG, and no it isn't spoken for but it is going for auction 0-0
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:40 PM


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Bermuda Estate said:
aww thankyou :) i've dimmed the lighting about to match the BG, and no it isn't spoken for but it is going for auction 0-0


I'm gonna keep my eye on that one, lol

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