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Dash and Duchess
01:23:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Wait is that dog tag a lil sheriffs badge 🤣 that's so cute!
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:23:04 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
How bout 'free biggie snacks' ?
Dash and Duchess
01:22:49 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, aww she's adorable!
KPH Equestrian
01:22:48 Rapcoon | Jester
-Click-
Lunalovegood
01:22:05 Loony/Loony Tune
KPH
So majestic *-* XD
KPH Equestrian
01:21:58 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
ehh maybe
KPH Equestrian
01:21:49 Rapcoon | Jester
xD tobi
I'm glad to be of entertainment lmao
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:20:26 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Wait kph if they chanted 'free gas for the next 8 years' would it work
Tobiano Lady
01:20:20 Tobi 👻
Have it on record that my friend enjoyed your guys' exorcism fight.
KPH Equestrian
01:20:18 Rapcoon | Jester
xD she's on the smaller side, and very athletic lol
I coudln't get it on video, but here's her trying to flip majestically xD (if the link'll work >>;)
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:19:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Noice
Tobiano Lady
01:18:57 Tobi 👻
lol Fern
Lunalovegood
01:18:18 Loony/Loony Tune
DD
We have to love the shadows xD
Dash and Duchess
01:18:10 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, what now??
Lunalovegood
01:17:56 Loony/Loony Tune
KPH
Oh My Days, seriously what am I hearing XD
Dash and Duchess
01:17:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Loony xD we love the shadows lol
Lunalovegood
01:17:19 Loony/Loony Tune
DD may have to follow you…..
Dash and Duchess
01:17:07 DD | ~Squizard~
*backs >.>
KPH Equestrian
01:17:03 Rapcoon | Jester
when attacking the garden hose, yes lmao. She's done at least half a dozen flawless flips that I've seen xD
Dash and Duchess
01:16:58 DD | ~Squizard~
*bacs away slowly into the shadows again* xD

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Dash and Duchess
01:23:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Wait is that dog tag a lil sheriffs badge 🤣 that's so cute!
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:23:04 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
How bout 'free biggie snacks' ?
Dash and Duchess
01:22:49 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, aww she's adorable!
KPH Equestrian
01:22:48 Rapcoon | Jester
-Click-
Lunalovegood
01:22:05 Loony/Loony Tune
KPH
So majestic *-* XD
KPH Equestrian
01:21:58 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
ehh maybe
KPH Equestrian
01:21:49 Rapcoon | Jester
xD tobi
I'm glad to be of entertainment lmao
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:20:26 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Wait kph if they chanted 'free gas for the next 8 years' would it work
Tobiano Lady
01:20:20 Tobi 👻
Have it on record that my friend enjoyed your guys' exorcism fight.
KPH Equestrian
01:20:18 Rapcoon | Jester
xD she's on the smaller side, and very athletic lol
I coudln't get it on video, but here's her trying to flip majestically xD (if the link'll work >>;)
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:19:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Noice
Tobiano Lady
01:18:57 Tobi 👻
lol Fern
Lunalovegood
01:18:18 Loony/Loony Tune
DD
We have to love the shadows xD
Dash and Duchess
01:18:10 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, what now??
Lunalovegood
01:17:56 Loony/Loony Tune
KPH
Oh My Days, seriously what am I hearing XD
Dash and Duchess
01:17:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Loony xD we love the shadows lol
Lunalovegood
01:17:19 Loony/Loony Tune
DD may have to follow you…..
Dash and Duchess
01:17:07 DD | ~Squizard~
*backs >.>
KPH Equestrian
01:17:03 Rapcoon | Jester
when attacking the garden hose, yes lmao. She's done at least half a dozen flawless flips that I've seen xD
Dash and Duchess
01:16:58 DD | ~Squizard~
*bacs away slowly into the shadows again* xD

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The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:47 AM


Versailles
 
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Hermes Warmbloods said:

Versailles said:

I actually quite like the horse on that background. As the background is not super vibrant, the coat of the horse would not reflect the colour very strongly, which is what you have done. It fits fine. Your grounding is fine here. What a gorgeous colour change. <3
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The shadow appears to be in the correct place. The thing that can be improved about it is some blurring. Basically, since the light in the background seems to be muted and not directly on the horse, the shadow from the horse would not have a bold and specific outline. It'd be more a dark puddle on the floor. :)


thats pretty similar to what i was thinking, however its pretty easy to accidentally over-blur something so i dont blame you :) been there done that millions of times


If I may make a gentle suggestion, Hermes- when it comes to critique, I really encourage to try and directly name ways that the person can improve. :) Say what you think, the only limitation is to not be rude. <3
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When I went through art courses in college, it was huge to name something they've done well, and then walk them through something to improve- that's the constructive piece. Instead of naming what they've done poorly or incorrectly and nothing else. By saying what they've done wrong but not saying exactly what to change about that, it ultimately leaves them in a similar spot. They might need that guidance if they do not understand exactly what is wrong.

Edited at April 30, 2022 08:50 AM by Versailles
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 01:15 PM


Lumix Estates
 
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edit: nevermind, i finished the piece ^^

Edited at April 30, 2022 08:41 PM by Lumix Estates
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 01:18 PM


Hellscape
 
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ooooh I love the background/coat color combo :D
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 01:23 PM


Hellscape
 
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speaking of critique while I'm here, I might as well get a few opinions XD
I'm trying to steer away from blurriness so I've moved more towards higher clarity images, and the only issues I'm having with this particular piece (WIP :) besides the funky shadow is the highlight difference between the mane & tail
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:13 PM

Former Stable
 
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Hermes Warmbloods said:
speaking of critique while I'm here, I might as well get a few opinions XD
I'm trying to steer away from blurriness so I've moved more towards higher clarity images, and the only issues I'm having with this particular piece (WIP :) besides the funky shadow is the highlight difference between the mane & tail


I really like this pieces. I would almost add a bit more movement/flyaways to the tail.
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:42 PM


Lumix Estates
 
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any critique on the finished product?
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:52 PM


Rivendell Steeds
 
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Lumix Estates said:
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any critique on the finished product?


Overall, the piece itself looks very good! I like how you did the hooves.
However, there is one thing I'd like to point out: the hair. Cremellos don't typically (if they even) have dark hair. Their hair is always lighter in color, and their coat practically white. I would highly suggest going back and making the hair a lighter color, otherwise it may look off. Another thing, the coat. While the coat color itself is amazing, I think the shade should be just slightly lighter. It looks a little more yellow than white right now, but I love how smooth it looks!
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 09:20 PM


Lumix Estates
 
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Rivendell Steeds said:

Lumix Estates said:
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any critique on the finished product?


Overall, the piece itself looks very good! I like how you did the hooves.
However, there is one thing I'd like to point out: the hair. Cremellos don't typically (if they even) have dark hair. Their hair is always lighter in color, and their coat practically white. I would highly suggest going back and making the hair a lighter color, otherwise it may look off. Another thing, the coat. While the coat color itself is amazing, I think the shade should be just slightly lighter. It looks a little more yellow than white right now, but I love how smooth it looks!


thank you! <3 how does this look? Cremello Version 2
The Official Art Critique Forum May 2, 2022 04:15 AM


Kiber Stable
 
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Yeet and spageet, I did a hippocampus looking ass fish boi and want some feedback. I did far more painting than normal and even did some repainting and hate life so really, what I'm chasing, is some pointers for the next time I decide to try a fish stick
The Official Art Critique Forum May 2, 2022 04:18 AM

The Golden Horse
 
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wow Kiber!

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