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Breadcrumbs
06:20:32 
I got a wild PEW apricot brindle
Breadcrumbs
06:19:30 
That's pretty, Val
Vahana Hollow
06:18:14 Val
-HEE Click-

I am so sad she is not a W but I might be keeping her as a pretty surrogate
Basgiath
05:57:06 
Ugghhh
At Wit's End
05:55:02 Gosky
since it ended on tuesday, it should be until friday, i believe?
Basgiath
05:54:21 
It's been like 2-3 days since I ran an auction but I still can't make another one? How long do I have to wait? o.O
At Wit's End
05:52:24 Gosky
I am a sucker for this sooty.. but i also love copper or golden bay x.x

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Riverstone Grove
05:50:23 Lee
Nice
At Wit's End
05:46:14 Gosky
from #60 to #23 X LB
Woohoo
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Ashcroft Park Stud
05:45:03 Ash
-HEE Click-

Ooh wasn't expecting this colour to pop up
Craic Magic Stables
05:44:55 
my luck has changed, bred 4 wild bays now
Riverstone Grove
05:43:54 Lee
Nice. Long sleeps are the best.

Eh, the weather is lousy today so I'm hiding inside XD
At Wit's End
05:43:33 Gosky
awe. not even a w
-HEE Click-
Craic Magic Stables
05:43:31 
-HEE Click- ooo and another one
Craic Magic Stables
05:42:45 
-HEE Click- FINALLY! oh she is pretty!
Craic Magic Stables
05:41:58 
-HEE Click- youre pretty but youre not a wild bay
Zeta Equestrian
05:41:15 Eps TB
I am also in need of a name because what the hell is this 😭
-HEE Click-
At Wit's End
05:39:59 Gosky
How are you, Lee Bee?
At Wit's End
05:39:51 Gosky
Good good, can't complain :D Vacations are nice. I slept till like 10 am
Riverstone Grove
05:39:17 Lee
How is the Tosky today?

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Breadcrumbs
06:20:32 
I got a wild PEW apricot brindle
Breadcrumbs
06:19:30 
That's pretty, Val
Vahana Hollow
06:18:14 Val
-HEE Click-

I am so sad she is not a W but I might be keeping her as a pretty surrogate
Basgiath
05:57:06 
Ugghhh
At Wit's End
05:55:02 Gosky
since it ended on tuesday, it should be until friday, i believe?
Basgiath
05:54:21 
It's been like 2-3 days since I ran an auction but I still can't make another one? How long do I have to wait? o.O
At Wit's End
05:52:24 Gosky
I am a sucker for this sooty.. but i also love copper or golden bay x.x

-HEE Click-
Riverstone Grove
05:50:23 Lee
Nice
At Wit's End
05:46:14 Gosky
from #60 to #23 X LB
Woohoo
-HEE Click-
Ashcroft Park Stud
05:45:03 Ash
-HEE Click-

Ooh wasn't expecting this colour to pop up
Craic Magic Stables
05:44:55 
my luck has changed, bred 4 wild bays now
Riverstone Grove
05:43:54 Lee
Nice. Long sleeps are the best.

Eh, the weather is lousy today so I'm hiding inside XD
At Wit's End
05:43:33 Gosky
awe. not even a w
-HEE Click-
Craic Magic Stables
05:43:31 
-HEE Click- ooo and another one
Craic Magic Stables
05:42:45 
-HEE Click- FINALLY! oh she is pretty!
Craic Magic Stables
05:41:58 
-HEE Click- youre pretty but youre not a wild bay
Zeta Equestrian
05:41:15 Eps TB
I am also in need of a name because what the hell is this 😭
-HEE Click-
At Wit's End
05:39:59 Gosky
How are you, Lee Bee?
At Wit's End
05:39:51 Gosky
Good good, can't complain :D Vacations are nice. I slept till like 10 am
Riverstone Grove
05:39:17 Lee
How is the Tosky today?

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The Official Art Critique Forum May 26, 2022 05:11 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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#991268
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I would also love thoughts on this one :D
Herme-s-underwater.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum May 26, 2022 05:29 PM


Hellscape
 
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love the mane, the first thing I see though is there's a part in the back right leg missing :) you also want the hair to flow in a more messy sense when its under water, just as human hair does when you swim. Other than that, its just a bit blurry and not very 3D :) sharpening your image and defining muscle details with an airbrush can help with that !
The Official Art Critique Forum May 26, 2022 10:00 PM

Former Stable
 
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Any thoughts on this boi?
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*Click The Image For Detail*

Edited at May 27, 2022 09:37 PM by Moon Estates
The Official Art Critique Forum May 28, 2022 09:43 AM


Nightshade Stables
 
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Moon Estates said:
Any thoughts on this boi?
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*Click The Image For Detail*


Ok, so one of the main things I notice is the horse appears a little flat. I think simply adding a bit more contrast to him would help a bit, since the background has quite a lot of contrast and I would say he needs a bit more to match it. (Depends on what program you use, but I use GIMP and I would just go into the Brightness-Contrast and increase the contrast, and adjust the brightness if necessary). It would also help if you tried painting in some of the smaller shadows/highlights on the horse, if you want a tutorial I recommend HRS' tutorial, I love the whole tutorial but the part about lighting is really helpful
Additionally, the horse's feet appear to be floating and aren't "on the ground" really, one way you could fix this is maybe just make his legs in general darker so his feet would be dark and would almost blend in to the ground better
The wing is also a bit small, if you think about it needing to carry the horse's whole weight (though maybe that's partially because some of it is out of the picture), I would make it bigger and also move it down onto the horse's shoulder more
And finally I can just see a few tiny spots around the horse's legs where there's a bit of light background left from when you cut out the horse, so just be sure to get all those little bits!
Overall, it looks great and I love the concept you chose!
The Official Art Critique Forum June 6, 2022 12:37 PM


Riders of Rohan
 
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Moon Estates said:
Any thoughts on this boi?
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*Click The Image For Detail*


The first thing I notice on this is that his shoulder is practically invisible. You don't want that. I do, however like the orange eye! I would suggest trying a different body prep technique, like using the gaussian blur to slightly blur the horse before you start shading. Also, I would suggest studying the muscles in a horse, so that you know where the little divets and highlights are supposed to be. Another thing to practice is lighting. Trying doing some very simple practice pieces where you go and set a point where light is coming from, and go from there. Also, I would highly suggest using a low oppacity airbrush for shading, rather than changing the entire color of the horse so it looks good.
The Official Art Critique Forum June 7, 2022 08:47 PM


Dulcie Goodfairy
 
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I am wonder how to price my art, I'm brand new at it & my skills haven't settled into a pattern yet, my favorite & first piece was displayed in chat a few days ago & I immediately was asked what I would charge for a horse avi. I'm also wonder since I'm the mistress of 4 accounts how to keep everything above board & fair.
Anything else i should know about but I'm to new to ask about will be appreciated.
The Official Art Critique Forum June 7, 2022 10:22 PM

Former Stable
 
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Black Forest Horses said:
I am wonder how to price my art, I'm brand new at it & my skills haven't settled into a pattern yet, my favorite & first piece was displayed in chat a few days ago & I immediately was asked what I would charge for a horse avi. I'm also wonder since I'm the mistress of 4 accounts how to keep everything above board & fair.
Anything else i should know about but I'm to new to ask about will be appreciated.


Examples?
The Official Art Critique Forum June 8, 2022 01:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Thoughts? I just recently started doing art with ibis paint and this is my second piece. I also recently started hand drawing the mane and tail. Its still a WIP
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Clicky Image for detail and whatsoever

Edited at June 8, 2022 01:45 PM by Moon Estates
The Official Art Critique Forum June 8, 2022 01:40 PM


Zomb

Art Team
 
Posts: 2436
#994367
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If you could change/improve something on this, what would it be?
Also, rip it to shreds
The Official Art Critique Forum June 10, 2022 06:21 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
Posts: 1907
#994828
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Thoughts on this piece? 🥰 Its pretty dang big, so please click the image to get all the details ❤️ I'd also love thoughts on the bird! I repainted 90% of it
Rivendale-s-Forestgoddes.jpg

Edited at June 10, 2022 06:22 PM by ~Pegasus Lane~

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