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The Official Art Critique Forum December 1, 2019 01:23 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Maqaroon said:
<p style="font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: Helvetica;">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20802100

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I tried real hard on this one, any critique?



Shadow is alot better! I would try and blend those feet in better so it is not floating looking, other than that great!
The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 01:21 AM


Tanglewood
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/KYHrRc1R/Greys-Anatomy-banner-1.png

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The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 10:18 AM


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Tanglewood said:
https://i.postimg.cc/KYHrRc1R/Greys-Anatomy-banner-1.png

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that looks great tangle! As far as lighting, it looks like the light source is coming from the left side. But it has light coming down on the right side if you know what I mean. I don't see a tail at all, if you need help with making a tail I can help with that as well :)
The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 11:16 AM


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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.ibb.co/5TYVFH7/Untitled410.jpg

thoughts on the mane and tail?



*Still looking*
The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 11:49 AM


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The tail and mane colors look like different shades, but it still looks great! The tail also does look slightly blurry unlike the mane.

Lambo Farms said:


Lambo Farms said:
https://i.ibb.co/5TYVFH7/Untitled410.jpg

thoughts on the mane and tail?



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The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 12:05 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/PqsdSrhF/My-Drawing.png

Thoughts on this lineart?
The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 12:11 PM


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Star Catcher Estate said:
https://i.postimg.cc/PqsdSrhF/My-Drawing.png

Thoughts on this lineart?


It looks adorbs! Maybe you could add more muscle lines, also it looks like its about to start flying, not sure if thats what you were going for or not.
The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 12:17 PM

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AnimeAcres said:


Star Catcher Estate said:
https://i.postimg.cc/PqsdSrhF/My-Drawing.png

Thoughts on this lineart?


It looks adorbs! Maybe you could add more muscle lines, also it looks like its about to start flying, not sure if thats what you were going for or not.

If you don't mind me asking, where should I add more muscles? And thank you! :D The stock photo I referenced is, I think a landing picture, but yes, it is related to flying.
The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 12:21 PM


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Star Catcher Estate said:


AnimeAcres said:


Star Catcher Estate said:
https://i.postimg.cc/PqsdSrhF/My-Drawing.png

Thoughts on this lineart?


It looks adorbs! Maybe you could add more muscle lines, also it looks like its about to start flying, not sure if thats what you were going for or not.

If you don't mind me asking, where should I add more muscles? And thank you! :D The stock photo I referenced is, I think a landing picture, but yes, it is related to flying.

it needs more muscle in the butt and shouldeer where the neck and shoulder tie together ;)
The Official Art Critique Forum December 2, 2019 12:22 PM


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Star Catcher Estate said:


AnimeAcres said:


Star Catcher Estate said:
https://i.postimg.cc/PqsdSrhF/My-Drawing.png

Thoughts on this lineart?


It looks adorbs! Maybe you could add more muscle lines, also it looks like its about to start flying, not sure if thats what you were going for or not.

If you don't mind me asking, where should I add more muscles? And thank you! :D The stock photo I referenced is, I think a landing picture, but yes, it is related to flying.

Maybe try a smaller, finer brush and draw some lines around where the ribs would be, but only a few. Some small around the back legs and maybe more details in the tail? No problem :)

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