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Star Catcher Estate said:
I'm going to lay this down here... It's already done (based on a photo), but I wanted some opinions. This was done on a tablet that I have called a reMarkable, it only has three pen colors, so much layering with shading had to be done. Anyhoo, thoughts?
https://i.postimg.cc/CK75k8zv/3.jpg
Your anatomy seems pretty accurate. The amount of gray used kinda looks muddy. I would add more shadows and highlights to better define the horse's features, especially in the face. |
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Edited at December 3, 2019 10:49 AM by Maqaroon |
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https://i.ibb.co/fdQjWcp/art-trade.jpg
Thoughts? |
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I don't know if it's intentional but the vgreen on the stomach is honestly putting me off
The pink on the muzzle should be lighter and more link, not purple
Try adding a more noticeable iris to the eye
Otherwise looks great! |
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Sunset Grove Farm said:
I don't know if it's intentional but the vgreen on the stomach is honestly putting me off
The pink on the muzzle should be lighter and more link, not purple
Try adding a more noticeable iris to the eye
Otherwise looks great!
Thanks, I will think about these on my next commison :D And I forgot to do the eyes glad you pointed that out XD |
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https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg Critique? |
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Lazy Duck Elites said:
https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpgCritique?
I love the concept on this but For me the forelock is throwing me off it looks stiff and has no flyways or aything. I would try adding some lower light and highlight and a few fly aways to fix that :) |
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Lazy Duck Elites said:
https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpgCritique?
Overall think this is great, but the hair is very wonky.
The forelock is far too long and stiff, it just looks super fake. Same goes for that weird long piece of mane at the withers. The horses mane is fairly short and cut straight and the really long piece at the end is most certainly not something that would happen unless the horses got a really bad haircut, haha. Just doesn't look right to me. Try adding some more highlights and lowlights to the hair too. That's my only critique for this piece though, I think it's stunning otherwise :) |
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20073710
First horse avi I've done since September? (maybe longer) I definitely feel rusty, so any critiques on this would be appreciated. Will o the whisp thingies are hand drawn. |
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Heya folks. I haven't done art in a while, and this was my first time using ibis Paint X, so forgive my monstrosity xD https://horseeden.com/showimage.php?loc=../uploads/banners/248208_3080.png https://horseeden.com/showimage.php?loc=../uploads/avatars/248208_3117.jpg Thoughts? It's for an art trade. |
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