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Angel Warmblood Stud
03:55:13 Angel
I think running wild
Centura stable
03:53:11 Centura
angel
yep, those where just some random ideas though.
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:52:21 Angel
Its dificult I know
so I could cal her half a success or running wild?
Centura stable
03:52:10 Centura
peh
congrats!
SilverDolphin
03:51:29 
Should I have a Schoolmaster in each discipline?
Pegasus Lane
03:51:28 Peggy (or) Peg
Omg I made it through the day 😭😭 that was rough
Centura stable
03:49:18 Centura
Angel
either, also I still have no success getting any black chestnuts yet, still trying though :)
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:47:54 Angel
so wich names?
Centura stable
03:47:01 Centura
for name ideas
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:46:32 Angel
?? :)
Centura stable
03:46:10 Centura
angel
half a success, running wild
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:43:51 Angel
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name ideas?
Namerik Stables
03:16:04 Rose
Thanks
MC Ace
03:11:00 McFossil
Sure I don't mind.
Namerik Stables
03:09:54 Rose
Can I steal her for a colour breeding quest if I get it again
Centura stable
03:09:05 Centura
okay, thanks for letting me know. Now I can make sure I don't do frame x frame
Namerik Stables
03:09:03 Rose
Thanks Ace

Centura yes exactly like lethal white
Sometimes there is the off chance where the foal survives in real life
MC Ace
03:08:13 McFossil
Yes, so this mare has frame. I try not to keep frame stallions so there are fewer mistakes.

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Cataclysm
03:06:54 Maple Syrup ✨
Kinda cute
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Angel Warmblood Stud
03:55:13 Angel
I think running wild
Centura stable
03:53:11 Centura
angel
yep, those where just some random ideas though.
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:52:21 Angel
Its dificult I know
so I could cal her half a success or running wild?
Centura stable
03:52:10 Centura
peh
congrats!
SilverDolphin
03:51:29 
Should I have a Schoolmaster in each discipline?
Pegasus Lane
03:51:28 Peggy (or) Peg
Omg I made it through the day 😭😭 that was rough
Centura stable
03:49:18 Centura
Angel
either, also I still have no success getting any black chestnuts yet, still trying though :)
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:47:54 Angel
so wich names?
Centura stable
03:47:01 Centura
for name ideas
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:46:32 Angel
?? :)
Centura stable
03:46:10 Centura
angel
half a success, running wild
Angel Warmblood Stud
03:43:51 Angel
-HEE Click-
name ideas?
Namerik Stables
03:16:04 Rose
Thanks
MC Ace
03:11:00 McFossil
Sure I don't mind.
Namerik Stables
03:09:54 Rose
Can I steal her for a colour breeding quest if I get it again
Centura stable
03:09:05 Centura
okay, thanks for letting me know. Now I can make sure I don't do frame x frame
Namerik Stables
03:09:03 Rose
Thanks Ace

Centura yes exactly like lethal white
Sometimes there is the off chance where the foal survives in real life
MC Ace
03:08:13 McFossil
Yes, so this mare has frame. I try not to keep frame stallions so there are fewer mistakes.

-HEE Click-
Cataclysm
03:06:54 Maple Syrup ✨
Kinda cute
-HEE Click-

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The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2020 04:36 PM


Moonglade Manor
 
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Thanks, I'll definitely try that!
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2020 04:57 PM


Moonglade Manor
 
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Thank you!
Your advice was super helpful and I love how it looks now, still looking for critique on it though!
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2020 07:26 PM

Wonderland
 
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Added some stuff to this looking for critique
https://i.postimg.cc/Jh8JGcZ7/A8002095-8-C79-4909-9423-95-B19-A36-DBDA.png
The Official Art Critique Forum January 27, 2020 01:58 PM

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Moonglade Manor said:
Thank you!
Your advice was super helpful and I love how it looks now, still looking for critique on it though!


The hair could use more lighting and shadows within the strands itself.
The Official Art Critique Forum January 27, 2020 02:14 PM

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Icicle Ridge Acres said:

Moonglade Manor said:
Thank you!
Your advice was super helpful and I love how it looks now, still looking for critique on it though!


The hair could use more lighting and shadows within the strands itself.


Agreed.

Phoenix Rising Ranch said:
Added some stuff to this looking for critique
https://i.postimg.cc/Jh8JGcZ7/A8002095-8-C79-4909-9423-95-B19-A36-DBDA.png


The quality of the image is a bit fuzzy, but overall this is a nice piece. I think some very light blurring on the right/center will draw more attention to the horse versus the light. The mane is a little straggly for my tastes, but it doesn't look bad in the slightest. I'd just add a little more definition (perhaps small, faint highlights) in the dark spots of it. Also, the eye could use a slight lowering of the opacity, as it's a little too stand-out-ish, if ya get what I'm saying.
The Official Art Critique Forum January 29, 2020 02:48 AM


Moonglade Manor
 
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Want do you think of this?
I'm so proud of it :)
The Official Art Critique Forum January 29, 2020 10:24 PM


Sagebrush
 
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Ok, this is my most favourite piece of art I've ever done. The colour change from chestnut to grullo was really fun to try, and so was the roan and sabino. Any and all critique is very welcome! (Clickable Imgae)

Edited at January 29, 2020 10:24 PM by Sagebrush
The Official Art Critique Forum January 29, 2020 10:26 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Sagebrush said:
Ok, this is my most favourite piece of art I've ever done. The colour change from chestnut to grullo was really fun to try, and so was the roan and sabino. Any and all critique is very welcome! (Clickable Imgae)


That's freaking gorgeous :0
The only thing I'd say is to add a few flyaways to the hair, but I think that may just be a preference thing. I love this!
The Official Art Critique Forum January 29, 2020 11:53 PM


Sagebrush
 
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Thank you breeze! <3
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To moonglade, that looks awesome! I love how the lighting matches the horse really well, and that eye is really good! Next time I would try to lock the horse layer when smudging, since around the back you ca see it off of the horse. For the mane I'd say try not to make it all so strait, let it fade out a bit and be slightly wild. I would also try and erase the overlapping part of the tail that goes into the stomach. Overall great job!
The Official Art Critique Forum January 30, 2020 12:04 AM

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Moonglade Manor said:
Want do you think of this?
I'm so proud of it :)


I agree with Sagebrush. Besides that, I just think it needs more definition lines-- mainly on the legs and stomach. I'd also give a light blur to the sky/background to draw more focus to the horse. Try not to make the blur noticeable at first glance, but make sure it changes focus.

Edited at January 30, 2020 12:05 AM by Amhain Dull Liath

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