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 Looking for critique on this piece. I think I did a pretty good job but there's always room for improvement.
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 Quality isn't the best due to compressing it, but I'm pretty proud of this one
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Phoenix Rising Ranch said:  Looking for critique on this piece. I think I did a pretty good job but there's always room for improvement.
This is great!! I only suggest giving the mane some orange highlights that gives the viewer an impression that the flames behind it are affecting the lighting of the hair. If you'd allow me, I can PM you what I mean and the areas you woudl do it on? (:
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Breezie Rose said:  Quality isn't the best due to compressing it, but I'm pretty proud of this one
I LOVE THIS OMG! You have gotten so good Breezie!! The only thing I would critique is the hair, give it more of a windblown look and messy strands to show the movement. A horse's mane doesn't clump into a few strands, it has lots of different strands and messy flyaways. Also, I would some more highlights on the mane and forelock to give it the same look that the front of the horse has. Because, the same amount of light is hitting the hair just like it is hitting the horses front of the body
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Critique? Just trying to work myself out of an art slump lol. Also, I'm considering moving from T2 to T1. Thoughts on that? Edited at February 29, 2020 10:06 PM by Diamanté
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Things I could work on in this? Tips?
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Diamanté said: Critique? Just trying to work myself out of an art slump lol. Also, I'm considering moving from T2 to T1. Thoughts on that?
I think this looks very nice. Great job with lighting and highlights. My only recommendation would be to maybe add a little shadow to the front hoof :)
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Snowmass Horses said: Things I could work on in this? Tips?
Mabe consider where the light is coming from in this image. Judging by the horses highlights, the light should be coming from in front of the horse when, in the background, it actually appears to be coming from behind the horse. Try removing the current highlights in order to replace them more accurately based on the lights source. Edited at February 29, 2020 10:36 PM by Gem
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Any suggestions for me? :) Edited at February 29, 2020 11:31 PM by Gem
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Without fractals ⬇️  Edited at February 29, 2020 11:30 PM by Gem
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