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Frog Judgment Acers
09:15:59 Dulcie/Crazy
Wk 2s for my WWWs
Fingers crossed for the next 2 wks!
Faith Meadow
09:13:52  Spirit,pony
Cinch- well you can Pm Rp on you mail box or on forums there is a rp section and you can do a sign up role-play or if you have someone like a 1x1 role-play you can go to 1x1 page
It's A Cinch
09:11:54 
I just have one question... how do yall rp on here... like ik over-chat but like-
Faith Meadow
09:10:33  Spirit,pony
Anyone want to role-playing with me Pm me I am trying to be active on here
Glacier Bay Cove
09:07:39 Arctic Katz
I have to be careful because I don't tan, I burn in the sun
Glacier Bay Cove
09:07:09 Arctic Katz
*Doing the happy dance, I almost have enough Ebs for another barn
Lynx Glory
09:04:01 ⛈ whisper/lynx
Currently very tan as well since I've been camping at a beach for the last few days
Lynx Glory
09:03:16 ⛈ whisper/lynx
I've never sunburned lol. I just get super tan :p
MakeEm Fancy
09:03:01 Ally 💜
I have a random tan line on my leg but dont tan anywhere else 🤣
Dash and Duchess
09:02:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Angel, same here 🥲 the most 'tan I get' is light pasty before I peel xD
Angels angels
08:57:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
When I was younger I would burn like crazy, peel, then be white as a ghost again lol
Sforzando
08:56:56 
everyone in my immediate family has skin cancer since we're all super sensitive to the sun so ive given up, i only wear long sleeves and pants now lol not risking it
Fantasy Horses
08:56:47 Fantasy | Fanta
Thanks for the help everyone!
MakeEm Fancy
08:56:28 Ally 💜
I burn so bad unfortunately :/
Angels angels
08:55:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have been redder than a lobster before but I thankfully never got blisters from a sun burn. Now that I am older I don't even burn anymore it just goes tan lol
MakeEm Fancy
08:45:31 Ally 💜
Well had. My last one popped today
MakeEm Fancy
08:44:56 Ally 💜
Yeah I have blisters on my chest.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:44:26 Arctic Katz
Oh ouchie sunburn
MakeEm Fancy
08:43:59 Ally 💜
Im peeling so bad 😅
Arctic Dusk
08:43:27 AL - Hateful RIDs
Its also the part that a www stallion pretty much only brings in income if he is good enough for breeding

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Frog Judgment Acers
09:15:59 Dulcie/Crazy
Wk 2s for my WWWs
Fingers crossed for the next 2 wks!
Faith Meadow
09:13:52  Spirit,pony
Cinch- well you can Pm Rp on you mail box or on forums there is a rp section and you can do a sign up role-play or if you have someone like a 1x1 role-play you can go to 1x1 page
It's A Cinch
09:11:54 
I just have one question... how do yall rp on here... like ik over-chat but like-
Faith Meadow
09:10:33  Spirit,pony
Anyone want to role-playing with me Pm me I am trying to be active on here
Glacier Bay Cove
09:07:39 Arctic Katz
I have to be careful because I don't tan, I burn in the sun
Glacier Bay Cove
09:07:09 Arctic Katz
*Doing the happy dance, I almost have enough Ebs for another barn
Lynx Glory
09:04:01 ⛈ whisper/lynx
Currently very tan as well since I've been camping at a beach for the last few days
Lynx Glory
09:03:16 ⛈ whisper/lynx
I've never sunburned lol. I just get super tan :p
MakeEm Fancy
09:03:01 Ally 💜
I have a random tan line on my leg but dont tan anywhere else 🤣
Dash and Duchess
09:02:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Angel, same here 🥲 the most 'tan I get' is light pasty before I peel xD
Angels angels
08:57:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
When I was younger I would burn like crazy, peel, then be white as a ghost again lol
Sforzando
08:56:56 
everyone in my immediate family has skin cancer since we're all super sensitive to the sun so ive given up, i only wear long sleeves and pants now lol not risking it
Fantasy Horses
08:56:47 Fantasy | Fanta
Thanks for the help everyone!
MakeEm Fancy
08:56:28 Ally 💜
I burn so bad unfortunately :/
Angels angels
08:55:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have been redder than a lobster before but I thankfully never got blisters from a sun burn. Now that I am older I don't even burn anymore it just goes tan lol
MakeEm Fancy
08:45:31 Ally 💜
Well had. My last one popped today
MakeEm Fancy
08:44:56 Ally 💜
Yeah I have blisters on my chest.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:44:26 Arctic Katz
Oh ouchie sunburn
MakeEm Fancy
08:43:59 Ally 💜
Im peeling so bad 😅
Arctic Dusk
08:43:27 AL - Hateful RIDs
Its also the part that a www stallion pretty much only brings in income if he is good enough for breeding

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The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 01:05 PM

Former Stable
 
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AA Stables said:
Critique is very much appreciated


I love it so much! I would do $150K
(Do you have a shop?)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 01:44 PM

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Moon_Showing said:

AA Stables said:
Critique is very much appreciated


I love it so much! I would do $150K
(Do you have a shop?)


Yep :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:17 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:18 PM


Moon Shadow Ranch
 
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Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


I would pay 10K so Tier 3.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:20 PM


Phantasm Farm
 
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Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


Did you colour change that horse? Lemme have a shower and I'll type up a critique :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:21 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Phantasm Farm said:

Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


Did you colour change that horse? Lemme have a shower and I'll type up a critique :)


I kinda did lol. It was originally a dark bay :) https://www.deviantart.com/amoretterose/art/RQS-Clydesdale-95-630984207
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:41 PM


Caprina Springs
 
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Breezie Rose said:

Phantasm Farm said:

Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


Did you colour change that horse? Lemme have a shower and I'll type up a critique :)


I kinda did lol. It was originally a dark bay :) https://www.deviantart.com/amoretterose/art/RQS-Clydesdale-95-630984207


Breezie, I think the piece is very nice! But here's a few things you may want to focus on in the future:

1. Horse Anatomy, it is very very important to understand when you're making art. The lines in the stomach are very exagerated and unrealistic, now if you up the size of the brush you used and lowered the opacity, then followed the line of the belly (horizontal strokes, not vertical) and just swooped it a couple times, this piece would be absolutely stunning!

2. Cutting the Horse, I can see a few pointy and jagged lines under the belly which was probably caused by the uneven surface from the girth strap on the original stock image. Try to revise details like this and smooth them out before getting too far ahead to the point where you can't fix things like that. What I do is I cut out, color change, reduce noise, and smudge the horse at the original stock image size. I find it stupid easy to do and to keep a detailed look to the image when I put it to the size I want it at later on.

3. Hair, this detail goes for manes, tails, and floofy feets like this Clyde has (: When I do hair, I first emphasize the direction I want it to flow in (ALWAYS pay attention to the atmosphere of your back image, it is easy to get caught up in your own idea and not realize that the hair you just spent hours on is flowing in the wrong direction... im talking from experience ok lol) Keep this initial messy flowy hair separate from the final, that way you can refer to it when highlighting and such.
Specifically for feet, just small wavy strands blowing in a similar direction as the mane/tail all around where visible hair lines are seen on your horse and of course at the bottom of the hooves.

Hope that helps! (:
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 06:48 PM

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Would love some critique on this please

Edited at March 18, 2020 06:49 PM by Oak valley
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 07:19 PM


Gem
 
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Oak valley said:
Would love some critique on this please


Lessen your highlights. It's very cloudy yet you have some very extreme highlights and shadows on the horse :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 10:45 PM


Sagebrush
 
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Critique? I'm not satisfied with this, but hey, I'm not sure what to do.

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