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Phantom Farms said:
https://postimg.cc/6TQCy5wC https://postimg.cc/1g9f2J3D
First- Maybe try to get a background in instead of keeping it black Second- The horse is really blurred in so it's hard to see it's mane and tail. The tail and mane isn't the best quality. I suggest you use a smaller pixel brush and really taking time to draw each hair strand then gently smudge it. Third- I don't see a tail? I kind of see the mane but I suggest you draw more hair strands to make it a mane. The place around the front hooves aren't that clear and is a bit blurry. I suggest sharpening that. That's all! PM with any questions or if we want to lean a new and easy mane techquine :). I'm open to PM! |
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Wings Of Glory said:
Any critiques on my latest?
Oh wings it's so good! |
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HMHRealityCheck said:
Love the horse, try to lessen the glow, but don't rid of it completely. Maybe highlight the head more, seems a little lost. That might just be the glow though ---- Would love some critique on this piece. This is my first price of art. I know there's no credits, don't plan on selling. Devianart is where my photos came from and Polish is my editor
Just a heads up, credits must be on the image, regardless of whether you are selling it or not. |
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Tanglewood said:
HMHRealityCheck said:
Love the horse, try to lessen the glow, but don't rid of it completely. Maybe highlight the head more, seems a little lost. That might just be the glow though ---- Would love some critique on this piece. This is my first price of art. I know there's no credits, don't plan on selling. Devianart is where my photos came from and Polish is my editor
Just a heads up, credits must be on the image, regardless of whether you are selling it or not.
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Breezie Rose said:
Looking for critique :)
Might just be me, but the length of the skin on the tail is freaking me out. Maybe shorten it, or cover it more with the tail? |
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Phantom Farms said:
Breezie Rose said:
Looking for critique :)
Might just be me, but the length of the skin on the tail is freaking me out. Maybe shorten it, or cover it more with the tail?
Haha! It's supposed to be long XD he's a demonic type oc (credits to Fleur) |
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Breezie Rose said:
Looking for critique :)
Awesome as all your pieces breeze One thing I noticed is at the very bottom of the mane there is a white line that needs a tiny bit of smudging to make it a part of the mane. That tail looks awesome |
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Breezie Rose said:
Phantom Farms said:
Breezie Rose said:
Looking for critique :)
Might just be me, but the length of the skin on the tail is freaking me out. Maybe shorten it, or cover it more with the tail?
Haha! It's supposed to be long XD he's a demonic type oc (credits to Fleur)
Oh, well then it's just not my style haha |
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