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Glacier Bay Farms
10:45:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Waiting for Ven to come online
SandWitch Arabians
10:42:53 Witchypoo
keep up with her tracking
Pegasus Lane
10:39:35 Peggy (or) Peg
I am super anxious for week 7s so I can match her. Whatever it is, she'll probably be svened
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Spirtasi Whims
10:37:20 Tasi / Chat Killer
30 minutes or more later and I got blues hair done. This art piece is going to kill me...
Red Springs
10:33:29 
Never new a horse could be this gorgeous -HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:24:07 Technically Tangle
Oohhh love the appy
Spirtasi Whims
10:18:50 Tasi / Chat Killer
It was okay, I got a WWW boy i'm currently working on arts for
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Tanglewood
10:16:55 Technically Tangle
Tasi! How did RO treat you?
Columet Farms
10:16:36 The Coffee Purist
Love the sooty
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SandWitch Arabians
10:13:40 Witchypoo
It's almost instant
Spirtasi Whims
10:13:08 Tasi / Chat Killer
Hey Tangle!
Spirtasi Whims
10:12:59 Tasi / Chat Killer
I believe the store switches out every 10 minutes?
Tanglewood
10:12:51 Technically Tangle
Every ten minutes :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:11:04 Arctic Cove Katz
How many minutes
Glacier Bay Farms
10:10:35 Arctic Cove Katz
After the store expires, how long does it take for it to get new inventory
Wisteria Run Farm
09:41:20 Solar/Ria
What a cutie ^_^
-HEE Click-
Ice Crystal Mares
09:31:57 
-HEE Click-
woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz
Currently stalking the HEE store
All Breeds
09:08:59 Fawn
Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
09:02:19 Arctic Cove Katz
Where’s my lottery ticket, lol

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Glacier Bay Farms
10:45:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Waiting for Ven to come online
SandWitch Arabians
10:42:53 Witchypoo
keep up with her tracking
Pegasus Lane
10:39:35 Peggy (or) Peg
I am super anxious for week 7s so I can match her. Whatever it is, she'll probably be svened
-HEE Click-
Spirtasi Whims
10:37:20 Tasi / Chat Killer
30 minutes or more later and I got blues hair done. This art piece is going to kill me...
Red Springs
10:33:29 
Never new a horse could be this gorgeous -HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:24:07 Technically Tangle
Oohhh love the appy
Spirtasi Whims
10:18:50 Tasi / Chat Killer
It was okay, I got a WWW boy i'm currently working on arts for
-HEE Click-
Tanglewood
10:16:55 Technically Tangle
Tasi! How did RO treat you?
Columet Farms
10:16:36 The Coffee Purist
Love the sooty
-HEE Click-
SandWitch Arabians
10:13:40 Witchypoo
It's almost instant
Spirtasi Whims
10:13:08 Tasi / Chat Killer
Hey Tangle!
Spirtasi Whims
10:12:59 Tasi / Chat Killer
I believe the store switches out every 10 minutes?
Tanglewood
10:12:51 Technically Tangle
Every ten minutes :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:11:04 Arctic Cove Katz
How many minutes
Glacier Bay Farms
10:10:35 Arctic Cove Katz
After the store expires, how long does it take for it to get new inventory
Wisteria Run Farm
09:41:20 Solar/Ria
What a cutie ^_^
-HEE Click-
Ice Crystal Mares
09:31:57 
-HEE Click-
woops - captured a apricot insted of a wild bay
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:03 Arctic Cove Katz
Currently stalking the HEE store
All Breeds
09:08:59 Fawn
Ugh so close to getting my first all pattern X boy Dx
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
09:02:19 Arctic Cove Katz
Where’s my lottery ticket, lol

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The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 09:19 AM


Gem

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Snowmass Horses said:
What would you pay for this, as I cant figure out a steady price for my art, and critiques?


What caught my attention was body prep or rather lack thereof. The horse still has most of the texture from the original image but in some places, such as the hip, it's smoother. Smooth is more the look most artists aim for. Also; the mane/forelock. To me, these don't match. The forelock is long, flowy, while the mane is short and chopped. For me that takes away from the realism of the piece. Very nice job with the markings and the tail. I personally would pay 70-80k for this piece.


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Gem said:
@Barkers Run
I think this piece looks great! Very nice job with the lighting. The mark on the shoulder isn't actually what slightly bothers me about this. What caught my attention was actually the right front leg. It seems fuzzy, for lack of better word. It's hard to tell the edge of the leg from the ground behind the leg. 40-55k


i see what you mean haha, but thats how the original image was, there was a bit hoof but i removed it as his stepping over the top, if that makes sense, but thank you heaps! :) will take it into consideration for my next one


You are very welcome! Glad I could help 😊
The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 12:10 PM


HRS
 
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I rarely post here, but now I need validation xD
To me it feels that the tail is alright but the mane ruins the piece. Is it as bad as it feels for me?

The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 12:13 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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First of all this absolutely gorgeous HRS, I love the colors together.
Now for the mane it's not bad it's really good actually but I feel like whats getting you is the fact it just kind of looks stiff, like it doesn't look like its flowing with the horse, that piece between the shoulder and neck should be falling down as well as the hair along the outside of the neck instead of out. Nothing really drastic needs to change it just needs to droop a little
The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 12:20 PM


HRS
 
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Thank you! I was following the mane of the stock horse but I guess I shouldn't have. Now that you point it out it really does look weird :,D

Spirtasi Whims said:
First of all this absolutely gorgeous HRS, I love the colors together.
Now for the mane it's not bad it's really good actually but I feel like whats getting you is the fact it just kind of looks stiff, like it doesn't look like its flowing with the horse, that piece between the shoulder and neck should be falling down as well as the hair along the outside of the neck instead of out. Nothing really drastic needs to change it just needs to droop a little


The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 12:24 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Holy crap HRS that's drop dead gorgeous *^* I need like 12 XD
The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 12:37 PM


HRS
 
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Yay thank you :3 Not sure if I could produce 12 identical images though...

Breezie Rose said:
Holy crap HRS that's drop dead gorgeous *^* I need like 12 XD


The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 02:00 PM

Former Stable
 
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My half of a collab... a 12 limbed horse(8 legs ,4 wings) the others are doing bg ,hair,lighting ect
The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 07:57 PM


Snowmass Horses
 
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How is this one looking so far? I need help with how i should flow the tail if that makes sense?
The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 08:02 PM


Ponys Imagination
 
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Snowmass Horses said:
How is this one looking so far? I need help with how i should flow the tail if that makes sense?


I like it! I'm thinking you could maybe have a raised tail, like that of an Arab? Or possibly one that curls around the hind legs.
The Official Art Critique Forum June 22, 2020 08:03 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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This looks great so far! I would suggest looking back at the original stock image and pull your tail inspiration from there if you can. It's always helped me!

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