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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:29 PM

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Hi!! I'm looking for some honest, down to earth critique on my art. What do I need to improve, what on my art looks good, the whole run down! Gimme your personal thoughts! Tear it apart. ;)

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:32 PM

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I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 03:18 PM

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Lambo Farms said:
I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!

Thank you!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:14 PM

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I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:57 PM

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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.


Thank you, I really appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to try much harder, especially the shadow since I always seem to forget it lol
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 01:34 PM
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Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 04:47 PM

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White Crown Stables said:
Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to help! :)

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