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Gemstone Stable
06:55:27 Snow❆Gem
@tasi

Ah, OK. So he does something like that again... make a remark with a smile back? lol
Gemstone Stable
06:53:25 Snow❆Gem
@tasi

To be honest, I've been wanting to interact more with him, but only can get smiley when he passes. Can't even say hi or anything. >.<

Maybe he knows once I start talking with some of the women, I get more comfortable? So he MADE me talk to him. lol
Whitewolf
06:53:09 Fang
Now to watch Bambi while eating “Bambi’s father ” no regrets to spend my 4th alone 😂
Spirtasi Whims
06:51:51 Tasi / Chat Killer
At Gemstone
Spirtasi Whims
06:51:43 Tasi / Chat Killer
The best way to know for sure, is to call him out on it. I say be bold
Gemstone Stable
06:49:58 Snow❆Gem
@tasi

Is that for me? And yeahhhh. I looked it up. He's either testing or lighthearted flirting/teasing?

Not used to it. lol Took him long enough. ;P
Whitewolf
06:49:52 Fang
Definitely is. Cream cheese is underrated a lot XD
Glacier Bay Farms
06:49:36 Arctic Cove Katz
@Fang
Glacier Bay Farms
06:49:26 Arctic Cove Katz
Oh, my, that sounds so yummy
Spirtasi Whims
06:48:17 Tasi / Chat Killer
He's making a move
Spirtasi Whims
06:48:07 Tasi / Chat Killer
Oooh
Whitewolf
06:47:40 Fang
A little more cream cheese or less sausage would be a little better but it’s good. Haven’t had it in a year or two probably
Gemstone Stable
06:46:13 Snow❆Gem
Well, the guy I like at work *wink wink* ... put something in my way and smiled a bit to himself. O.o I'm used to him being shier then me and both of us staying out of each others way.

So I HAD to say excuse me to get through.
Whitewolf
06:45:32 Fang
Sausage and cream cheese 😂
Just browned a pound of deer sausage and added a block. My parents use it to stuff in mushrooms but I don’t like mushrooms
Glacier Bay Farms
06:43:50 Arctic Cove Katz
What is your favorite food, Fang
Whitewolf
06:39:45 Fang
Somehow I always end up alone on holidays.
That’s fine, made myself my favorite food :p
Glacier Bay Farms
06:27:39 Arctic Cove Katz
Me: WHY: Quest Level 139
Capture
Capture 400 horses.

Completed: 5/400
Reward: 50,000 Eden Bucks 32,000Store Credits 5Appaloosa Horse 1Bravery Medallion
Lucky Strides
06:25:57 Luck
I’m trying to breed a W wild bay and keep getting E Ones ugh this quest
Wisteria Run Farm
06:04:31 Solar/Ria
Oh, I love her!
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
06:01:48 Arctic Cove Katz
Out of curiosity, what would your favorite avatar look like, Echo

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Gemstone Stable
06:55:27 Snow❆Gem
@tasi

Ah, OK. So he does something like that again... make a remark with a smile back? lol
Gemstone Stable
06:53:25 Snow❆Gem
@tasi

To be honest, I've been wanting to interact more with him, but only can get smiley when he passes. Can't even say hi or anything. >.<

Maybe he knows once I start talking with some of the women, I get more comfortable? So he MADE me talk to him. lol
Whitewolf
06:53:09 Fang
Now to watch Bambi while eating “Bambi’s father ” no regrets to spend my 4th alone 😂
Spirtasi Whims
06:51:51 Tasi / Chat Killer
At Gemstone
Spirtasi Whims
06:51:43 Tasi / Chat Killer
The best way to know for sure, is to call him out on it. I say be bold
Gemstone Stable
06:49:58 Snow❆Gem
@tasi

Is that for me? And yeahhhh. I looked it up. He's either testing or lighthearted flirting/teasing?

Not used to it. lol Took him long enough. ;P
Whitewolf
06:49:52 Fang
Definitely is. Cream cheese is underrated a lot XD
Glacier Bay Farms
06:49:36 Arctic Cove Katz
@Fang
Glacier Bay Farms
06:49:26 Arctic Cove Katz
Oh, my, that sounds so yummy
Spirtasi Whims
06:48:17 Tasi / Chat Killer
He's making a move
Spirtasi Whims
06:48:07 Tasi / Chat Killer
Oooh
Whitewolf
06:47:40 Fang
A little more cream cheese or less sausage would be a little better but it’s good. Haven’t had it in a year or two probably
Gemstone Stable
06:46:13 Snow❆Gem
Well, the guy I like at work *wink wink* ... put something in my way and smiled a bit to himself. O.o I'm used to him being shier then me and both of us staying out of each others way.

So I HAD to say excuse me to get through.
Whitewolf
06:45:32 Fang
Sausage and cream cheese 😂
Just browned a pound of deer sausage and added a block. My parents use it to stuff in mushrooms but I don’t like mushrooms
Glacier Bay Farms
06:43:50 Arctic Cove Katz
What is your favorite food, Fang
Whitewolf
06:39:45 Fang
Somehow I always end up alone on holidays.
That’s fine, made myself my favorite food :p
Glacier Bay Farms
06:27:39 Arctic Cove Katz
Me: WHY: Quest Level 139
Capture
Capture 400 horses.

Completed: 5/400
Reward: 50,000 Eden Bucks 32,000Store Credits 5Appaloosa Horse 1Bravery Medallion
Lucky Strides
06:25:57 Luck
I’m trying to breed a W wild bay and keep getting E Ones ugh this quest
Wisteria Run Farm
06:04:31 Solar/Ria
Oh, I love her!
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
06:01:48 Arctic Cove Katz
Out of curiosity, what would your favorite avatar look like, Echo

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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