Sam
03:25:58 Rain, peep
Haley♡
Same 😑😐😮‍💨
Sam
03:25:35 Rain, peep
Cherry ugh that's going to take awhile
ShowJumpingChampions
03:25:24 SJC | Haley
Some people are so uninformed about agriculture it drives me nuts.
Sam
03:25:16 Rain, peep
Star we have complete opposite classmates 😆
*Rising Stars TBs*
03:24:11 Star / Sarah
Sam, 😂 the boys of my grade are kinda adorable 🤭
Cherryfall Stud
03:23:34 Cherry
Trying to breed Champagne and Cream back into my colour lines without losing homozygousity :/
Sam
03:20:54 Rain, peep
Okay thanks
Sam
03:20:47 Rain, peep
It's the boys for my grade
Ugh I hate them so much
*Rising Stars TBs*
03:19:36 Star / Sarah
Sam, yes it is
*Rising Stars TBs*
03:19:00 Star / Sarah
Sam, are you talking about
"my" classmates (the girls NOT the boys)? XD
Sam
03:17:15 Rain, peep
-HEE Click-
Is her name spelled right?
Sam
03:16:54 Rain, peep
Panther okay!♡
Panther PONs
03:16:12 Lurker-Penny-Pella
Ello Rain :)
Ill be on in 30, gotta shower
Sam
03:15:59 Rain, peep
And so incredibly immature
Sam
03:14:17 Rain, peep
I hate it so much but they are racist and sexist
Gemini Estate
03:13:12 Elf the 3rd
Rain
Exactly!
It's quite scary actually
Sam
03:12:24 Rain, peep
Elf exactly
I'm actually like scared that some kids in my grade will be adults
Gemini Estate
03:10:37 Elf the 3rd
That was my mom's rule as well.
Honestly with her help, of not charging rent, paid half the utilities though.

But it allowed to me able to buy a home.

Rain
Thank you. ♡
I think people forgot parents are raising little people they'll eventually be part of society
Dun Fall Estates
03:07:56 Remalyn | Remi | Rem
Some one go to my barn and tell me which horse I should release any horse above 2 years old
Sam
03:07:24 Rain, peep
Lucky I never got kicked out but honestly some days I'd rather live with friends
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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM

Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM
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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM

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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM

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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM

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