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Echo Creek
12:40:41 Echo | River
Some more cool fireworks
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Echo Creek
12:38:57 Echo | River
We sit up high so this is my current view from my window
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QualitySH
12:37:16 Asher
Fireworks were absolutely amazing this year. The grand finale in the town i went to had no black in the sky and was full of color for like 5 mins definitely had a huge budget for the 250th
Boulder Creek
12:36:56 
So glad that the horses did well through the fireworks tonight.
I have one dog hiding in the bathroom while there a big booms still going every few seconds.
Rose Trails Barn
12:33:48 Echo/ Eco Friendly
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I have no idea what to do with you 🥹
The Seven Sins
12:27:25 Seven
Awesome. Have a fire not far from us from the fireworks. Hopefully they can contain it quickly.
The Old Gods
12:24:52 Void Malign
Did you pay her for this month?
Falling Faith
12:24:40 
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Omg im gonna die of cuteness over load and second this is my first ever bred EWE
SUMMER OF PEARLS
12:11:57 
do you have to re-set the barn manager every week? my horses do not seem to be showing
Centura stable
11:42:45 Centura
-HEE Click-
I love this mare
Black Raven TBs
11:38:27 
ppl setting off fireworks
Rose Trails Barn
11:38:18 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh 🥹
Black Raven TBs
11:37:54 
bbl going to put them in my barn
Rose Trails Barn
11:37:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
How?
Black Raven TBs
11:37:19 
my horses are freaking out
Centura stable
10:54:53 Centura
-HEE Click-
what tack would suit her?
Centura stable
10:51:56 Centura
arctic cove
you to
Rose Trails Barn
10:50:38 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Doing fireworks but I wanted to sleep T-T
Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Happy 4th of July, and 5th of July, Centura
Rose Trails Barn
10:46:59 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats funny

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Echo Creek
12:40:41 Echo | River
Some more cool fireworks
-Click-
Echo Creek
12:38:57 Echo | River
We sit up high so this is my current view from my window
-Click-
QualitySH
12:37:16 Asher
Fireworks were absolutely amazing this year. The grand finale in the town i went to had no black in the sky and was full of color for like 5 mins definitely had a huge budget for the 250th
Boulder Creek
12:36:56 
So glad that the horses did well through the fireworks tonight.
I have one dog hiding in the bathroom while there a big booms still going every few seconds.
Rose Trails Barn
12:33:48 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
I have no idea what to do with you 🥹
The Seven Sins
12:27:25 Seven
Awesome. Have a fire not far from us from the fireworks. Hopefully they can contain it quickly.
The Old Gods
12:24:52 Void Malign
Did you pay her for this month?
Falling Faith
12:24:40 
-HEE Click-
Omg im gonna die of cuteness over load and second this is my first ever bred EWE
SUMMER OF PEARLS
12:11:57 
do you have to re-set the barn manager every week? my horses do not seem to be showing
Centura stable
11:42:45 Centura
-HEE Click-
I love this mare
Black Raven TBs
11:38:27 
ppl setting off fireworks
Rose Trails Barn
11:38:18 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Oh 🥹
Black Raven TBs
11:37:54 
bbl going to put them in my barn
Rose Trails Barn
11:37:39 Echo/ Eco Friendly
How?
Black Raven TBs
11:37:19 
my horses are freaking out
Centura stable
10:54:53 Centura
-HEE Click-
what tack would suit her?
Centura stable
10:51:56 Centura
arctic cove
you to
Rose Trails Barn
10:50:38 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Doing fireworks but I wanted to sleep T-T
Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Happy 4th of July, and 5th of July, Centura
Rose Trails Barn
10:46:59 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats funny

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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