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Rose Trails Barn
05:17:20 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
Why did you have to be mahogany..?
Elephant Walk Stable
05:16:21 Chey
words fucking suck, lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:56 Gladius
pfft also feel that XD words are hard lol
Elephant Walk Stable
05:15:33 Chey
Oh wow, that was poor English lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:23 Gladius
chey - I feel that XD
Elephant Walk Stable
05:14:59 Chey
Thanks gladius. I was going to ask well, but I had to turn on the brain and think if I'm going to get ebs back before watching my ebs go down the drain.
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:13:47 Gladius
chey - I think it pays out? also thanks for the reminder they exist I should uh enter some XD
Cappuccino
05:13:39 Heyy it's Capp
<3 -HEE Click-
lass
05:11:18 Captain America
-HEE Click-
Yesssss
Rose Trails Barn
05:10:22 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th!
Elephant Walk Stable
05:09:22 Chey
Do the dressage musical freestyle, etc. earn you a payout? Or is it more and less for shits N giggles?
Silver Melody Acres
05:05:14 Solar - KNNs
Oh, okay! Actually a WWE combo XD
-HEE Click-
Dash Eventing
05:02:19 
Decided to breed coloured eventers on my side -HEE Click-
Gaelic Gladiacres
04:59:44 Gladius
seconding that Lyra
Dayseeker
04:59:11 Ly/Lyra
105 for me here. this weather can seriously piss off now
The Old Gods
04:57:12 Void Malign
the heat index is 119. This is bullshit
Angels angels
04:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have kind of a little bit gotten into breeding white in my TBs lol
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:51:43 Ash
Haha, I’m enjoying looking through it
Dayseeker
04:50:46 Ly/Lyra
thank you Ash lol. that's not even all of them .-. unintentional addiction
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:48:40 Ash
Your golden barn is very shiny, Lyra

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Rose Trails Barn
05:17:20 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
Why did you have to be mahogany..?
Elephant Walk Stable
05:16:21 Chey
words fucking suck, lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:56 Gladius
pfft also feel that XD words are hard lol
Elephant Walk Stable
05:15:33 Chey
Oh wow, that was poor English lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:23 Gladius
chey - I feel that XD
Elephant Walk Stable
05:14:59 Chey
Thanks gladius. I was going to ask well, but I had to turn on the brain and think if I'm going to get ebs back before watching my ebs go down the drain.
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:13:47 Gladius
chey - I think it pays out? also thanks for the reminder they exist I should uh enter some XD
Cappuccino
05:13:39 Heyy it's Capp
<3 -HEE Click-
lass
05:11:18 Captain America
-HEE Click-
Yesssss
Rose Trails Barn
05:10:22 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th!
Elephant Walk Stable
05:09:22 Chey
Do the dressage musical freestyle, etc. earn you a payout? Or is it more and less for shits N giggles?
Silver Melody Acres
05:05:14 Solar - KNNs
Oh, okay! Actually a WWE combo XD
-HEE Click-
Dash Eventing
05:02:19 
Decided to breed coloured eventers on my side -HEE Click-
Gaelic Gladiacres
04:59:44 Gladius
seconding that Lyra
Dayseeker
04:59:11 Ly/Lyra
105 for me here. this weather can seriously piss off now
The Old Gods
04:57:12 Void Malign
the heat index is 119. This is bullshit
Angels angels
04:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have kind of a little bit gotten into breeding white in my TBs lol
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:51:43 Ash
Haha, I’m enjoying looking through it
Dayseeker
04:50:46 Ly/Lyra
thank you Ash lol. that's not even all of them .-. unintentional addiction
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:48:40 Ash
Your golden barn is very shiny, Lyra

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

Former Stable
 
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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

Former Stable
 
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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