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Rose Trails Barn
05:17:20 Echo/ Eco Friendly
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Why did you have to be mahogany..?
Elephant Walk Stable
05:16:21 Chey
words fucking suck, lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:56 Gladius
pfft also feel that XD words are hard lol
Elephant Walk Stable
05:15:33 Chey
Oh wow, that was poor English lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:23 Gladius
chey - I feel that XD
Elephant Walk Stable
05:14:59 Chey
Thanks gladius. I was going to ask well, but I had to turn on the brain and think if I'm going to get ebs back before watching my ebs go down the drain.
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:13:47 Gladius
chey - I think it pays out? also thanks for the reminder they exist I should uh enter some XD
Cappuccino
05:13:39 Heyy it's Capp
<3 -HEE Click-
lass
05:11:18 Captain America
-HEE Click-
Yesssss
Rose Trails Barn
05:10:22 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th!
Elephant Walk Stable
05:09:22 Chey
Do the dressage musical freestyle, etc. earn you a payout? Or is it more and less for shits N giggles?
Silver Melody Acres
05:05:14 Solar - KNNs
Oh, okay! Actually a WWE combo XD
-HEE Click-
Dash Eventing
05:02:19 
Decided to breed coloured eventers on my side -HEE Click-
Gaelic Gladiacres
04:59:44 Gladius
seconding that Lyra
Dayseeker
04:59:11 Ly/Lyra
105 for me here. this weather can seriously piss off now
The Old Gods
04:57:12 Void Malign
the heat index is 119. This is bullshit
Angels angels
04:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have kind of a little bit gotten into breeding white in my TBs lol
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:51:43 Ash
Haha, I’m enjoying looking through it
Dayseeker
04:50:46 Ly/Lyra
thank you Ash lol. that's not even all of them .-. unintentional addiction
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:48:40 Ash
Your golden barn is very shiny, Lyra

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Rose Trails Barn
05:17:20 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
Why did you have to be mahogany..?
Elephant Walk Stable
05:16:21 Chey
words fucking suck, lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:56 Gladius
pfft also feel that XD words are hard lol
Elephant Walk Stable
05:15:33 Chey
Oh wow, that was poor English lol
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:15:23 Gladius
chey - I feel that XD
Elephant Walk Stable
05:14:59 Chey
Thanks gladius. I was going to ask well, but I had to turn on the brain and think if I'm going to get ebs back before watching my ebs go down the drain.
Gaelic Gladiacres
05:13:47 Gladius
chey - I think it pays out? also thanks for the reminder they exist I should uh enter some XD
Cappuccino
05:13:39 Heyy it's Capp
<3 -HEE Click-
lass
05:11:18 Captain America
-HEE Click-
Yesssss
Rose Trails Barn
05:10:22 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Happy 4th!
Elephant Walk Stable
05:09:22 Chey
Do the dressage musical freestyle, etc. earn you a payout? Or is it more and less for shits N giggles?
Silver Melody Acres
05:05:14 Solar - KNNs
Oh, okay! Actually a WWE combo XD
-HEE Click-
Dash Eventing
05:02:19 
Decided to breed coloured eventers on my side -HEE Click-
Gaelic Gladiacres
04:59:44 Gladius
seconding that Lyra
Dayseeker
04:59:11 Ly/Lyra
105 for me here. this weather can seriously piss off now
The Old Gods
04:57:12 Void Malign
the heat index is 119. This is bullshit
Angels angels
04:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have kind of a little bit gotten into breeding white in my TBs lol
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:51:43 Ash
Haha, I’m enjoying looking through it
Dayseeker
04:50:46 Ly/Lyra
thank you Ash lol. that's not even all of them .-. unintentional addiction
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:48:40 Ash
Your golden barn is very shiny, Lyra

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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