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The Old Gods
08:06:02 Void Malign
the storm just to the east has 70 mph winds, if that says anything. It's also 8 and it's duck as hell from the cloud cover.
Columet Farms
08:04:10 The Coffee Purist
A pasture bred foal exchanged my top dressage mares I love it
Fossil's Dreams
08:04:10 PK or Fossil
The thunder just roared & the idiots are still at it out there
Fossil's Dreams
08:02:57 PK or Fossil
Eury you must live in my neighbor lol
Glacier Bay Farms
08:01:56 Arctic Cove Katz
Khaleesi, such a gorgeous horse
The Old Gods
07:59:38 Void Malign
...I like how there's a thunderstorm that's coming in and people are trying to pop off their fireworks. Like no. Go inside.
Westeros Livery
07:58:58 Khaleesi
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I love when colors turn out nice in ratings!
Dayseeker
07:55:50 Ly/Lyra
Oh I thought the darker black/black going up the neck and back was a variation of sooty lol
Nightmarish Estate
07:54:59 SA || Neptune or Nep
Of course, the plain-looking Sport Horse turns out WWW LMAO
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All Breeds
07:54:46 Fawn
Homozygous for Dun. That's what those markings are on the first foal
Dayseeker
07:54:08 Ly/Lyra
DD?
Nightmarish Estate
07:52:44 SA || Neptune or Nep
Oh my, they're so prettyyy!
Magik
07:52:11 
I think the first foal is only DD. At least that's what the pattern on the shoulder/legs are
Dayseeker
07:50:07 Ly/Lyra
my recent favorite sooties
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Lorelei
07:45:51 Lore
Sooty's are superior
Nightmarish Estate
07:44:25 SA || Neptune or Nep
Also, that sooty Swanky is gorgeous :o <3
Nightmarish Estate
07:42:22 SA || Neptune or Nep
Nooo, I just bred a mare to the wrong stud T-T
Dayseeker
07:40:41 Ly/Lyra
ugh I love sooty ponies
Swank Plateau
07:38:57 Swanky
extra sooty *.*
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Bioshock Manor
07:34:59 Storm
It's a red based grey?

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The Old Gods
08:06:02 Void Malign
the storm just to the east has 70 mph winds, if that says anything. It's also 8 and it's duck as hell from the cloud cover.
Columet Farms
08:04:10 The Coffee Purist
A pasture bred foal exchanged my top dressage mares I love it
Fossil's Dreams
08:04:10 PK or Fossil
The thunder just roared & the idiots are still at it out there
Fossil's Dreams
08:02:57 PK or Fossil
Eury you must live in my neighbor lol
Glacier Bay Farms
08:01:56 Arctic Cove Katz
Khaleesi, such a gorgeous horse
The Old Gods
07:59:38 Void Malign
...I like how there's a thunderstorm that's coming in and people are trying to pop off their fireworks. Like no. Go inside.
Westeros Livery
07:58:58 Khaleesi
-HEE Click-

I love when colors turn out nice in ratings!
Dayseeker
07:55:50 Ly/Lyra
Oh I thought the darker black/black going up the neck and back was a variation of sooty lol
Nightmarish Estate
07:54:59 SA || Neptune or Nep
Of course, the plain-looking Sport Horse turns out WWW LMAO
-HEE Click-
All Breeds
07:54:46 Fawn
Homozygous for Dun. That's what those markings are on the first foal
Dayseeker
07:54:08 Ly/Lyra
DD?
Nightmarish Estate
07:52:44 SA || Neptune or Nep
Oh my, they're so prettyyy!
Magik
07:52:11 
I think the first foal is only DD. At least that's what the pattern on the shoulder/legs are
Dayseeker
07:50:07 Ly/Lyra
my recent favorite sooties
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Lorelei
07:45:51 Lore
Sooty's are superior
Nightmarish Estate
07:44:25 SA || Neptune or Nep
Also, that sooty Swanky is gorgeous :o <3
Nightmarish Estate
07:42:22 SA || Neptune or Nep
Nooo, I just bred a mare to the wrong stud T-T
Dayseeker
07:40:41 Ly/Lyra
ugh I love sooty ponies
Swank Plateau
07:38:57 Swanky
extra sooty *.*
-HEE Click-
Bioshock Manor
07:34:59 Storm
It's a red based grey?

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

Former Stable
 
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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

Former Stable
 
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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