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The Old Gods
08:06:02 Void Malign
the storm just to the east has 70 mph winds, if that says anything. It's also 8 and it's duck as hell from the cloud cover.
Columet Farms
08:04:10 The Coffee Purist
A pasture bred foal exchanged my top dressage mares I love it
Fossil's Dreams
08:04:10 PK or Fossil
The thunder just roared & the idiots are still at it out there
Fossil's Dreams
08:02:57 PK or Fossil
Eury you must live in my neighbor lol
Glacier Bay Farms
08:01:56 Arctic Cove Katz
Khaleesi, such a gorgeous horse
The Old Gods
07:59:38 Void Malign
...I like how there's a thunderstorm that's coming in and people are trying to pop off their fireworks. Like no. Go inside.
Westeros Livery
07:58:58 Khaleesi
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I love when colors turn out nice in ratings!
Dayseeker
07:55:50 Ly/Lyra
Oh I thought the darker black/black going up the neck and back was a variation of sooty lol
Nightmarish Estate
07:54:59 SA || Neptune or Nep
Of course, the plain-looking Sport Horse turns out WWW LMAO
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All Breeds
07:54:46 Fawn
Homozygous for Dun. That's what those markings are on the first foal
Dayseeker
07:54:08 Ly/Lyra
DD?
Nightmarish Estate
07:52:44 SA || Neptune or Nep
Oh my, they're so prettyyy!
Magik
07:52:11 
I think the first foal is only DD. At least that's what the pattern on the shoulder/legs are
Dayseeker
07:50:07 Ly/Lyra
my recent favorite sooties
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Lorelei
07:45:51 Lore
Sooty's are superior
Nightmarish Estate
07:44:25 SA || Neptune or Nep
Also, that sooty Swanky is gorgeous :o <3
Nightmarish Estate
07:42:22 SA || Neptune or Nep
Nooo, I just bred a mare to the wrong stud T-T
Dayseeker
07:40:41 Ly/Lyra
ugh I love sooty ponies
Swank Plateau
07:38:57 Swanky
extra sooty *.*
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Bioshock Manor
07:34:59 Storm
It's a red based grey?

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The Old Gods
08:06:02 Void Malign
the storm just to the east has 70 mph winds, if that says anything. It's also 8 and it's duck as hell from the cloud cover.
Columet Farms
08:04:10 The Coffee Purist
A pasture bred foal exchanged my top dressage mares I love it
Fossil's Dreams
08:04:10 PK or Fossil
The thunder just roared & the idiots are still at it out there
Fossil's Dreams
08:02:57 PK or Fossil
Eury you must live in my neighbor lol
Glacier Bay Farms
08:01:56 Arctic Cove Katz
Khaleesi, such a gorgeous horse
The Old Gods
07:59:38 Void Malign
...I like how there's a thunderstorm that's coming in and people are trying to pop off their fireworks. Like no. Go inside.
Westeros Livery
07:58:58 Khaleesi
-HEE Click-

I love when colors turn out nice in ratings!
Dayseeker
07:55:50 Ly/Lyra
Oh I thought the darker black/black going up the neck and back was a variation of sooty lol
Nightmarish Estate
07:54:59 SA || Neptune or Nep
Of course, the plain-looking Sport Horse turns out WWW LMAO
-HEE Click-
All Breeds
07:54:46 Fawn
Homozygous for Dun. That's what those markings are on the first foal
Dayseeker
07:54:08 Ly/Lyra
DD?
Nightmarish Estate
07:52:44 SA || Neptune or Nep
Oh my, they're so prettyyy!
Magik
07:52:11 
I think the first foal is only DD. At least that's what the pattern on the shoulder/legs are
Dayseeker
07:50:07 Ly/Lyra
my recent favorite sooties
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Lorelei
07:45:51 Lore
Sooty's are superior
Nightmarish Estate
07:44:25 SA || Neptune or Nep
Also, that sooty Swanky is gorgeous :o <3
Nightmarish Estate
07:42:22 SA || Neptune or Nep
Nooo, I just bred a mare to the wrong stud T-T
Dayseeker
07:40:41 Ly/Lyra
ugh I love sooty ponies
Swank Plateau
07:38:57 Swanky
extra sooty *.*
-HEE Click-
Bioshock Manor
07:34:59 Storm
It's a red based grey?

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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