Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Cinquemani
06:58:15 Emani
I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol
Thornwood Manor
06:55:22 Caal
I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃
Cinquemani
06:54:26 Emani
She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol
Triple E
06:52:47 Campbell AD
Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
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Campbell Equestrian
06:51:44 Hails
I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies
Cinquemani
06:51:30 Emani
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Excited about her!
Campbell Equestrian
06:42:36 Hails
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Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!
Rubygem-Chenya
06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Blue
That's gorgeous.
Bluegrass Racing
06:33:50 Blue
so pretty
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Red Willow Stables
06:18:49 
I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it
Kk shows
06:16:47 
Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper
Centura stable
06:16:36 Centura
yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time
Red Willow Stables
06:10:10 
That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol
Centura stable
06:09:19 Centura
I can't do well with either lol.
Red Willow Stables
06:09:04 
Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils
Red Willow Stables
06:08:49 
it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw
Centura stable
06:07:43 Centura
red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol
Red Willow Stables
06:07:03 
Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip
Thunderbolt Park
06:06:18 Bolt
Not sure sorry
Centura stable
06:05:07 Centura
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can I get some feedback on this art? I realise the brindle needs work, but anything else and how can I improve on it?

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Cinquemani
06:58:15 Emani
I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol
Thornwood Manor
06:55:22 Caal
I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃
Cinquemani
06:54:26 Emani
She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol
Triple E
06:52:47 Campbell AD
Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
-HEE Click-
Campbell Equestrian
06:51:44 Hails
I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies
Cinquemani
06:51:30 Emani
-HEE Click-

Excited about her!
Campbell Equestrian
06:42:36 Hails
-HEE Click-

Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!
Rubygem-Chenya
06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Blue
That's gorgeous.
Bluegrass Racing
06:33:50 Blue
so pretty
-HEE Click-
Red Willow Stables
06:18:49 
I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it
Kk shows
06:16:47 
Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper
Centura stable
06:16:36 Centura
yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time
Red Willow Stables
06:10:10 
That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol
Centura stable
06:09:19 Centura
I can't do well with either lol.
Red Willow Stables
06:09:04 
Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils
Red Willow Stables
06:08:49 
it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw
Centura stable
06:07:43 Centura
red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol
Red Willow Stables
06:07:03 
Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip
Thunderbolt Park
06:06:18 Bolt
Not sure sorry
Centura stable
06:05:07 Centura
-Click-
can I get some feedback on this art? I realise the brindle needs work, but anything else and how can I improve on it?

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The Official Art Critique Forum September 6, 2020 08:27 PM

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yeah working progress
and i use Krita
i realised i uploaded the one that i havent done the eyes but yeah

Cain Manor said:
So hair is NEVER super straight. So I would add some curves and stuff to the hair. What program do you use?


The Official Art Critique Forum September 6, 2020 08:28 PM


Cain Manor
 
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I use ibis paint. So I suggest getting that. It's free! I can also mentor you in our ways
The Official Art Critique Forum September 6, 2020 08:42 PM


Gem

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@Cain
(Looking at the dark blue roan/grullo piece)
I like the hair a lot and the horse has a really nice texture. Pretty well grounded. I'd say the main two things to look at are lighting and muscling. The shadows that I assume are meant to be muscling seem very random to me. They are not quite anatomically correct. I would reccomend googling 'horse musculoskeletal system' and take a look at some of the diagrams that pop up for reference. Lighting, the horse is very light compared to the background. Lowering the brightness of the horse layer significantly would help a lot. After doing that, look at your light source. From what I can tell, the light source is coming from the rear relight area of the background. Base your highlights on that. Good luck!
The Official Art Critique Forum September 9, 2020 01:25 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Hey there!
Finished a quick premade this morning :)
RO-premade-3.png
Thoughts? Edits? Additions? Anything?

Edited at September 9, 2020 01:26 PM by Breezie Rose
The Official Art Critique Forum September 9, 2020 03:19 PM


Gem

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@Breezie
Um, how do I make that mine?
The Official Art Critique Forum September 9, 2020 03:27 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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@Gem
I'm actually putting together three or four premades to auction off at once :D It may be a few days before I get them all done though 😅
Speaking of, any idea on a SB for something like this? Should I do an AB or just see how high bidding goes?
The Official Art Critique Forum September 9, 2020 05:30 PM


Gem

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@Breezie
OoOooOooOhhhhhhhh
Im intrigued.....
SB at least 50k. I do like having ABs in art auctions, I know some people don't but that's just my preference. I'd reccomend around 300k so there's still plenty of room to bid. It's strange for me not to have any suggestions, lol! Being really picky, I recommend taking a look at the lighting on the (viewer's) left back leg. And maybe distinguish the other back leg from the tail a little more <3
The Official Art Critique Forum September 9, 2020 05:33 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Thanks a ton Gem!! <33
The Official Art Critique Forum September 9, 2020 05:34 PM


Gem

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Glad to help <3
The Official Art Critique Forum September 10, 2020 08:49 PM

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cool.png thoughts?

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