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Thank you kindly, Gem! ^^
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Aight, looking for critique on the piece in general, but specifically on the mane/tail (I tried a new technique for those.) I'm aware the background wasn't blurred out smoothly, that's just laziness on my part xD But otherwise, rip it to shreads! (Would love a good reflection/shadow tutorial if anyone has one.)
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I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^
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This is sick. I love the idea. My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground. Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good Hope this helps CC Knabbstruppers said: I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^
Edited at July 27, 2021 07:46 PM by Timber Canyon
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Timber Canyon said: This is sick. I love the idea. My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground. Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good Hope this helps CC Knabbstruppers said: I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^
Thank you so much Timbie! X3 Also, I'll go ahead and chuck the finished product in as well: Did a bit of blurring in that background, but I feel like it's still too much. ^^' Edited at July 27, 2021 08:22 PM by CC Knabbstruppers
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The only stock I used for this piece was lineart for the horse. Everything else is hand painted. With that being said, tear it apart. Tell me what's ugly, what's pretty, and what can be improved upon.
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Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it. Edited at July 28, 2021 06:07 PM by Yellowtail Ranch
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Yellowtail Ranch said: Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.
On the sand you can see that there is a shadow, but the horse doesn't have a shadow. I'd start by adding that :) You could also add a touch of shadowing under the mane, to give it more depth. The horse itself looks nice. The pinkish sand actually looks quite nice, I would just add a light source, whether that be finding a stock image of a sunset and adding that in or making your own, it would add more life into the piece.
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Any critiques on this are appreciated! Its obviously not finished, and I need to fix the hooves, but other than that I'm curious as to what I can do to make this better:) This is my first time doing art in about a year and a half lol Edited at August 3, 2021 10:39 AM by Trillium Acres
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Critique on this, please! I painted the pattern myself :)
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