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   The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 02:48 PM

Trillium Acres
 
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The Official Art Critique Forum

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Hello fellow artists!
There has been a huge amount of people requesting a "Art Critique" forum, and Eve has requested that the art critique posts go in "Art Help" for now.
Instead of clogging up the Art Help Forum with a new post every time you need a critique I have made this forum to post all of them under.
So What Am I Supposed to Do?
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This forum was created to help others give constructive criticism on your art. You may simply post your most recent art piece in a post below this forum and ask for critiques. Its that simple ;)
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1. Please do not "bump" your posts.
2. Only one post at a time
3. (Not a rule, but very appreciated) don't just use this forum to your advantage, help others out too!
4. Please be nice. You are totally allowed to nit-pick but please do not spread negativity about someone's art (or really anything in general).
5. (This rule goes with #4) Remember this is constructive criticism, not just unsolicited or rude criticism.
6. This is most certainly NOT a place to brag or advertise your art. This is not sales chat.
**There have been some questions asking if you can ask for pricing help on your art. The answer is yes, you may ;)**

Edited at July 4, 2020 09:57 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 02:48 PM

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Edited at July 4, 2020 09:59 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 02:48 PM

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Edited at July 4, 2020 09:58 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 02:56 PM

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This is very nice of you trillium!
https://i.postimg.cc/k59dn6tW/Untitled159-3.jpg
Any way I can make this better?it's for a high stakes contest
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 03:08 PM

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It looks lovely! I love the legs haha.

I would add a few baby highlights to the dark side of the mane and a couple more shadows to the lighter side. Same thing goes for the tail. I would use a pastel yellow color for the front part of the horse to highlight and a pastel blue for the back. Very small brush size. 1-2 px. After those each have their own layer, set the whole layer to overlay and mess with the opacity. Do the same highlighting process for the horse and hat. It will make the image crisper.

I reference Manduh's youtube a bunch for my art, this time stamp might help you with highlighting. It helped me tremendously.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xltza9Ojtw&t=551s
32:36


Raven Hollow Elite said:
This is very nice of you trillium!
https://i.postimg.cc/k59dn6tW/Untitled159-3.jpg
Any way I can make this better?it's for a high stakes contest




Edited at October 6, 2019 03:09 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 03:11 PM

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Wow this is very kind of you :)
Reminds me when a bunch of the tier 1 (it was before the tiers but anyways) made a critique thread where only designated people could critique on that certain thread

https://i.postimg.cc/zG8RMdPS/Untitled268.jpg

Could you try this one please

Edited at October 6, 2019 03:11 PM by Sunset Grove Farm
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 03:22 PM

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Sunset Grove Farm said:
Wow this is very kind of you :)
Reminds me when a bunch of the tier 1 (it was before the tiers but anyways) made a critique thread where only designated people could critique on that certain thread

https://i.postimg.cc/zG8RMdPS/Untitled268.jpg

Could you try this one please



Wow! I would have never known about that lol. I like the idea ;)

First off, I really like this!
Beautiful scenery and the horse blends into the background very well. Good use of lighting. I do notice that the image is a bit grainy, is that fixable? Secondly, the ears do look a bit blurred. Maybe add some definition by highlighting like I explained to raven. I would apply this technique to the rest of the horse also. It will really make the image pop out of the screen more ;) Lastly, the nose could use some pink near the nostrils. It will add a little more realism.
Other than that this looks lovely, Sun! All of this is really just nit-picking.
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 03:24 PM

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The app I use is really annoying when it comes to quality, I'm sadly unable to do anything about it :/
But the Rest is extremely helpful, thank you for the tips :D
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 03:24 PM

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Awesome idea, Roz! :)

https://i.postimg.cc/XN2Y7b3p/Bally-HEE-Manip-Spring.png

Here's my latest. Looking to auction it off, idk. Any price pointers or areas for improvement? I know it's not great LOL
The Official Art Critique Forum October 6, 2019 03:29 PM

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Sunset Grove Farm said:
The app I use is really annoying when it comes to quality, I'm sadly unable to do anything about it :/
But the Rest is extremely helpful, thank you for the tips :D



No problem!


Balefire Stables said:
Awesome idea, Roz! :)

https://i.postimg.cc/XN2Y7b3p/Bally-HEE-Manip-Spring.png

Here's my latest. Looking to auction it off, idk. Any price pointers or areas for improvement? I know it's not great LOL



I really like this also, very cute :3

All looks well on this. Lovely lighting, hair looks fine, highlighting is good (you could possibly add a bit throughout the torso and flank. optional).
The only thing I notice about this one is that it is a bit blurry around the horse. It looks like a program fault, not yours. What program do you use?

Edit: I would price around 25-45k if you can fix the blur lines (not the blurred background) around the horse. Maybe 15k if you can't fix?

Edited at October 6, 2019 03:39 PM by Trillium Acres

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