Horse Eden : Critique Please!

06:46:08 Abby | She/Her

Rain

Congrats!

06:44:57 Grape | X hoarder

Weighing the pros and cons, I think I'm using Hook. He's a buckskin, no sabino, he has more EEEs in his progeny but the two are about the same for WW/WWW. Higher on the ABLB. Did I mention no sabino?

Serenity Stables

06:44:25 Serenity / Rain

Abby
Woo my first one!!!

Galloping Stables

06:43:29 Abby | She/Her

Rain

Yup =)

NorthStar Estates

06:43:23 JF | Jelly | Trillow

by my calculations Thunda has about 1019 barns + pastures.

Serenity Stables

06:41:53 Serenity / Rain

-HEE Click- Chimera?!?

Bearplane

06:38:37 Bear / Bingus

The shiny gelding project is gonna be so stacked in 180 lmao

Bearplane

06:37:53 Bear / Bingus

He really did go heavy on the freckles huh lol

I kinda love space themes for greys though, -HEE Click-

White_thundacat

06:35:29 Thunda/Cat/Mom

Bear, that horse should be named "Freckles" lol

Bearplane

06:34:32 Bear / Bingus

Ooh this was a nice use of the lens -HEE Click-

White_thundacat

06:34:20 Thunda/Cat/Mom

That's what I do most of the time anyways. *yeet*

White_thundacat

06:33:12 Thunda/Cat/Mom

Honestly, I'd like to see her with a top boy. Just yeet her at him. I may end up pulling embryos, but I just don't know how many I'm already pulling next yr. I'd have to look

Darkside Dreams

06:27:35 Grape | X hoarder

I know but I'm already possibly planning a match with one freshman, I don't want to go hog wild lol. Also, not sure what his week four was so I wouldn't want to do that match without a Sven anyways

White_thundacat

06:25:55 Thunda/Cat/Mom

lol I don't mind freshmen being used XD

White Hills

06:23:54 WH | Hills

Oh, I didn't catch that Thunda owns her lol

Darkside Dreams

06:22:19 Grape | X hoarder

WH, actually a good idea. I'd have to ask, since I just have a standard brood to her right now. She is #20 XLB, it couldn't be a waste, right?

Darkside Dreams

06:19:27 Grape | X hoarder

-HEE Click-
I'm not gonna use him, so don't have a heart attack Thunda, but this little guy actually matches her, assuming he was au week 4. I will watch him.

White Hills

06:18:59 WH | Hills

Why not pull embryos and try both?

Darkside Dreams

06:14:00 Grape | X hoarder

Hey Wolf!

Yeah WH, I'm definitely thinking either Kawase or Hook. I've gone down to #40ABLB and they're the only ones I'm seeing that I like.

WolfRunner Stables

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September 8, 2019 10:53 AM

Red Dragon

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So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737</a>

(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613</a>

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034</a>

(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 12:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Red Dragon said:
So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737
(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034
(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

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