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Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 02:50 PM

Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/vT8Kh89W/Untitled235-1.png

I tried something completely different for this peice and quite frankly it took forever (around 7-8 hours)

I'm looking for some critique please, especially on the fire. Lighting and hair

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https://i.postimg.cc/MHTbxjwq/Untitled235-2.png

Edited at September 25, 2019 03:13 PM by Sunset Grove Farm
Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 02:55 PM
Palm Beach Stables
 
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The tail looks thin and stringy. Maybe add more hair to it.
Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 02:59 PM

Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Thank you I'll try that now
Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 03:05 PM

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Such a cool idea! You can make it better with adding more light to the places that's close to the fire, like the front legs, chest head area and the end of the feathers on the wing.
Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 03:05 PM

Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I'll try that now thank you
Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 03:12 PM

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How's this
https://i.postimg.cc/MHTbxjwq/Untitled235-2.png
Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 03:43 PM

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Looks much better!
Maybe make the wing fire brighter? It looks much darker and duller.

Edited at September 25, 2019 03:44 PM by Raindrop Ridge
Critique/tips in general on peice September 25, 2019 03:46 PM

Sunset Grove Farm
 
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If I do that the quality will be lost, the stock was originally quite dark ^^
Critique/tips in general on peice September 26, 2019 03:51 PM
Former Stable
 
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^^for rains comment,only slightly a just contrast and brightness,until your are happy,not much quality is lost ;)
Critique/tips in general on peice September 26, 2019 04:09 PM

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I'll give that. Ago now ^^

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